peepz used ta dye cuz da stearing weels on dey shelbys was 2 skinny.

I love Emma!!Please fix it so she and Edward can be together !!And that their relationship would blossom and persevere beyond all that pain!!

What will Emma's mother think about this little encounter?

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Hand to God, no exaggeration, your voice for Emma is one of the best voices for a character I have ever read. Not too witty, not too dramatic (Good GOD, SMeyer, tone it down!), and the twist you put on Bella's shield is a great touch.

The entire approach to this is great. The love scene in Bella's old bed was fantastically narrated, and that last line was simply perfect. AND THANK YOU for giving Bella closure and finally getting to take back her life. (If Jacob will take her back. He's gonna take her back, right? RIGHT?!)

Fan-fucking-tastic. Love it all around.

Author's Response:

what a very beautiful review. i am always so elated when people like emma, i get a lot of reviews that call her selfish and immature. she's just a kid! haha. no, but really, thank you.

"bella's bed" might be my favorite chapter in the story, i worked really hard on it, so i'm very grateful that you appreciate it. i'm so happy you like what i've done.

have a delicious day, my lovely.

Im not totally sure who I hate more right now, Bella (who I have never liked anyway) or the A-hole who is quite possibly raping Emma in the forest.
Edwards just a poor little sexually deprived teenage vampire. I can't really not like him for that.
Good story though, I don't get why anyone would be upset with you for writing it. Emma speaks my language. I'll only really be disappointed if she doesn't go all wolf on nameless brad Pitt rapist guy.

Omg I can't wait to read what Emma does to this guy.

Wow, I have to say that I was so not expecting that to happen.  I really thought that Bella would simply leave the Cullen house and move on.  I'm not sure what the point (for her) was to give that speech to Edward.  I can see how it will help the story move forward, but I'm really confused why she did it.  And is it bad that part of me hopes that Edward will end up alone?  I think this is the first story where I actually wanted that to be the outcome, but I really don't feel like he deserves either Bella or Emma.  I would be worried about Emma except for the fact that I'm sure she could go wolf and take that guy's ass out. lol

I enjoyed this chapter. A proper end I suppose between Bella and Edward. I wish she didn't have to cut him out of her life like that. I wish they could stay friends, but I guess that's a lot to ask for especially when there's Emma to consider. But I wonder if Emma wants a part in any of their lives either. Edward seemed sad. Good. :)

He's lost both girls, he's had the taste of heartbreak.

Finally! Bella wakes up, smells the coffe,gets a backbone and grows a pair! 2 snaps up girlfriend.

I like it! but is jacob going to take her back!?

I FUCKING LOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE EMMA! TALK ABOUT BALLS!!

yo girrllll! i'm so glad belluh lyks da chocolate cuz dat's reppin me! i call myself cocoa brown sugar baby cause da darkness is da best!

 

yo if eye had a dolla dolla bill for errtime some fool took me outside and dragged me off somewhere maybe eye woodn't hafta be on da food stamps!!! emmuh's gonna get ittttt.

And this chapter made the whole story worthy of being read...

Don't get me wrong,it was amusing. But it was really sick at places and I never reviewed before cause my mom taught me that "if you don't have anything good to say, you better say nothing".

Anyway,I couldnt stop reading until the end (even when I was slightly grossed out,not by you writing,you're quite good, but by what you wrote) so I guess that's another good thing xP

Hope you can update soon,

Have a great week