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Reviewer: kayphere (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 03:33 PM · On: The Tease
Okay, so I found your story today and I read through it all before I'm now reviewing. What a wicked tale you weave! I cannot wait until Bella kicks Jake to the curb. Oh please please please don't let her be pregnant by Jake...
Great story!
Author's Response: Glad you are liking the story so far. I will not give away what will happen for sure, but something good and something bad is still to come. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Jazzdcurlyfries (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:03 AM · On: The Grey Suit
Jacob is a freaking douche at the beginning of this chapter....he's ugh...one minute hes denying hes married and flirting with a girl and the next he's all trying to be love dovey with Bella!!! ugh....i wish Bella left Jacob and married Edward alwready!!
Author's Response: You are still in the first part of the story... There is so much more to come. I promise! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Jazzdcurlyfries (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 3 ~ The Shack
i'm usually Team Jacob but in this episode he's just a douche!!! he just makes me mad and i want to slap him!!!! i can't wait for edward to come back and Bella is happy once again with the cullens...ugh i'm only team jacob cause taylor lautner is sooo cute..but edward is really the best for Bella!1 :Dkeep writing this is soooo awesome :D
Author's Response: Glad you are liking the story. SOrry it makes you not want to be Team Jacob as much. LOL ;P Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 10:04 AM · On: The Tease
I can't wait for Edward's pov. His mind must be going a mile a minute.
Author's Response: EPOV is one of my favorite chapters. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Ezza (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 05:39 AM · On: The Tease
haha i LOVE the movie titles! i have recently started reading this fanfic and its got me hooked, keep up the good work :) xx
Author's Response: Glad you liked the titles. I couldn't resist using them. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: hazeleyes1025 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 04:20 AM · On: The Tease
i really hope they catch jacob in the act.....
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 09:11 PM · On: The Tease
I just wish Bella could see Jake for what he is. He is making such a fool out of her. I want Bella to be the one to walk out on Jake ,on her own accord. I don't want her to end up with Edward on the rebound. I am eager to read more!
Author's Response: It will be worse before it gets better. Hope I didn't give too much away. LOL Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 08:45 PM · On: The Tease
Can I tell you how much of a jerk Jacob is! GGGGRRRRR........
That's okay though, she can get closer to Edward. That's all good! :)
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 07:01 AM · On: The Office
omg...bella...:(
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 06:02 PM · On: The Office
I think Bellla is a weak character. She really doesn;t see the signs of Jake;s affair? She has a chance at real love and she is letting it go? I just don't understand her.... I am hoping that she will redeem herself soon.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 05:57 PM · On: The Session
Jake better come clean. It is the only thing thaat could humanize him again...
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 05:51 PM · On: #16 The Fourth
She jsut needs to get out of that marriage. Jake needs to come clean and let her go. If he cares for her at all, he will. He is a selfish prick.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 05:40 PM · On: The Woods
I just can't believe what an ass Jake is. He doesn't confront Bella and try to talk to her? He jsut committed adultry. I can't stand him. I Don't want to see Bella hurt again, clearly Jake couldn't care less about that.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 05:22 PM · On: The Chair
Yeah, Jake needs to be taken down a notch, publically. He is making a fool out of Bella. And Nessie is nothing but a common whore. Who goes after a married man like that???
Author's Response: Well, I see you are reading through this pretty quickly. I did want to let you know that on FF.net I have a few of the backstories for this one posted under the title It Happened Over the Past Ten Years. There are also more chapters to this story if you want to get ahead. LOL
Glad you are liking it. Thank you so much for reveiwing and reading. I so appreciate it.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 05:12 PM · On: The Hurdle
What is Edward waiting for? He needs to put it out there, They have soooo many things to talk about...
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 04:41 PM · On: The Bracelet
Really, Jake is an arrogant ass. Bella desrves better. Unquestionably.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 04:32 PM · On: The Coffee
True, I had forgotten about Jake. Did anybody call him? How could Edward have not inquired about Bella for the past ten years?
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 04:22 PM · On: The Mirror
I love this!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 03:43 PM · On: The Bleachers
Okay, I feel better now. We are over the worst of it, right? Phew.....
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 03:35 PM · On: The Table
WHat happened between them that was SO bad that they didn't speak for ten years?
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 03:31 PM · On: The Grey Suit
But BElla is his wife. Would he know that Edward might be there and want to be all possessive of her?
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 03:26 PM · On: The Text
I have nervous energy.... I am so eager for more!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 5 ~ The Navy Suit
See, right here, this makes me sick to my stomach.... I am eager to move past this part ;o)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 03:21 PM · On: The Dress
If Bella is still so hooked on Edward then why did she marry Jake? Not fair to him at all. Does jake know how she feels?
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 3 ~ The Shack
I am proud of Jake for staying faithful to Bella- as much as he can anyway....
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