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Reviewer: Barbiec (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:08 PM · On: The Dress

love it so far. cant wait for the reunion between bella and edward. not fan of jake and bella love scene but i know you had to do it, they are married...lol

Author's Response:
I am not a fan either Believe me! It was a hrd thing to write, but things will be better for those of us who LOVE Edward.

Reviewer: Amandah16 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 04:15 PM · On: The Dress

please continue this story i realli like it <3

Reviewer: iliveilearnilove (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:49 PM · On: The Dress

Loved it. I am excited for Edward's POV!!

Reviewer: Starnani21 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 04:07 AM · On: The Dress

Hmmm. I'm still not too sure what to think of the story your starting to build. Jake is now an even bigger asshole than he is in the actual books and Bella... I just can't see where your going with her just yet. But I am totally captivated!

I am so excited to see where these people go. Will your plot lead into the obvious complications of a four way romantic-tragedy (Jake and Renesmee / Edward and Bella)?

Author's Response:
That is the outlined plan.

Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 01:26 PM · On: The Dress

i like it

Reviewer: embrysimprint (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 08:17 PM · On: The Dress

whew! that was hot. :)

i'm trying to magine what i would do if jacob/tyler lautner (is that how you spell his last name? im not sure :/) came into my house and started ravishing me.

..........

*wipes drool from chin* anyway this is really really really really good and you should definitly update soon, ok? ok! :)

xo

Author's Response:
The plan is to send in the next chapter next week! EPOV!

Reviewer: embrysimprint (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Prelude & The Beginning

uh...oh...

dun dun DUN...

teehee ^-^

Author's Response:
LOL!!! (^_^)

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 08:24 AM · On: The Dress

It is a shame that Alice can't see what Jasper sees that Bella does not like blue. I look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 3 ~ The Shack

Jake definitely has the hots for Reneesme. Embry was cute with young Adam. I feel really bad for Seth. It looks like he is not behind the robbery, because he is too obvious a suspect with too much to lose.

Reviewer: spidermonkey_09 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 07:40 AM · On: The Dress

:O

dammnn!

hahah

lol loved it XD

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ The Beginning {BPOV}

I'm really enjoying this story!!!!!

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ The Beginning {BPOV}

Pretty good start I look forward to more, I find it funny that Nessie's going after a married man.

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 2 ~ The Beginning {BPOV}

I liked the interactions between Mike and Bella especially watching her fend off his obvious flirting. It was kind of humorous when Jessica, who is pregnant with his child, works in the same office. Yes, I can't wait until Edward arrives at the reunion.

Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 2 ~ The Beginning {BPOV}

I REALLY LIKE IT.. VERY REALISTIC AND NICE

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Prelude & The Beginning

I am glad that Jake will be a soon to be ex, not a Jake/Bella fan. The chemistry between Ren and Jake works really well. Look forward to Edward/Bella.

Author's Response:
Well, it seems that you are one of the few that likes the Jake/Ren combo. (I do.)

Reviewer: Baela (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Prelude & The Beginning

Oh, I really like this so far! Update as soon as you can, I can't wait long! Is Renesmee related to the Cullens in any way?

Later,

Baela

Author's Response:
Maybe, maybe not. I don't want to ruin anything. LOL

Reviewer: Mary_Quite_Contrary (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Prelude & The Beginning

oooh...good start

Reviewer: ddiva (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Prelude & The Beginning

Can't wait ti see where this story goes! Update soon. :)

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Prelude & The Beginning

you had me very worried that this was going to be a jake story....i know you said that you are team edward but still it.. i mean jake and bella seemedd so in love and such.. thank god for nessie and that is no longer! i jsut can't wait for bella and edward to get together

Author's Response:
I can't wait either! LOL

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