Wow. Bella reached a whole new level of embarassed and pathetic. It's kinda hard to read w her like that and Jake focusing on Nessie. On one hand I feel bad for her and am dreading the Jake/Nessie experience, but on the other ..Jake and Bella's relationship just lacks...passion and all that good stuff. Can't wait for Edward. I'm hoping Bella will straighten up a bit, be more confident with him there.

I really like your storyline and the way you write!

WOW is Bella ever going to get a spine?? :)

great story!!! I need more soon!!!

Ok really not liking Jake in this story...

 Bella should like like beat the crap out of Edward!!!!!!

Great story, keep it coming!

holy crap O_O

things just aren't going well for bella, are they...?

He may be an adult now, but he is still an ass.

I think it's fucked up how he lies to Bella to run off to Renesmee. I mean what the fuck?! Where do his loyalties lie?

And, just how messed up is Bella anyway? And, what made her that way. You haven't said anything about night terrors and the other stuff before. What the hell is going on with her?! I can't wait to see how she falls apart at the sight of Edward. And, Jacob can't say shit because he left her alone in the first place.

And, how will Edward react to seeing Bella? I'm pretty sure he had to have seen her when he first walked in, even though Bella hadn't noticed him. I'm sure she was the first thing he looked for as he took his first step across the threshold. 

That reminds me, we still don't know much about Tanya. I'm not sure if I should despise her or not. Should I feel bad for her being with Edward when he really wants another woman? Is she a woman with some sort of ulterior motive behind her being with Edward? Is she just some skank-ho (if she and Edward are engaged, is that possible? He would know better, right?)?

So many questions, this is only the beginning. Bring on the rest of it. Lata

Jake's an ass and Edward's at the reunion, this can't be good.

Wow, Jake and Edward are both real sleazes in this story. Bella would be best off moving far, far away from both of them.

this is sooooooo killing me!!!!!!

I have a love for this story and am constantly finding myself checking for updates. It's been too long and I am glad to finally see one! I can't wait for the "reunion" and I really hope that Tanya goes...she is starting to annoy! LOL

Great story...love it!!! =)

great job!!