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Reviewer: isastar (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 01:20 AM · On: The Session
I guess, Bella`s in for a surprise... Great chapter, I can barely wait for Jake`s response.
Reviewer: jacks5jl (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 10:13 PM · On: The Session
Good chapter. It would be nice if Jake told her the truth. But I have a feeling he won't. :(
Reviewer: mmmhotdogs (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 09:24 PM · On: The Session
I love this story I cant wait for the rest of the chapters!!! Please keep them coming!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 08:11 PM · On: The Session
well hes an ass and needs to admit his attraction and need for ness ! cant wait till the next chapter i think hes gonna wig out !
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 07:54 AM · On: #16 The Fourth
PLease let her find them together and kick both of their butt's!!!! :)
Author's Response: Very soon something like that will come your way. Glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: RunsWitWolf74 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 09:59 AM · On: #16 The Fourth
Wow! Love your story! I like Nessie and Jake, even thought he totally cheated on Bella. Hope Bella finds out soon and reveals her true feelings for Edward. Can't wait!
Oh Jake is a jerk, but I still love J&N!! ;D
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. I just sent the next chapter to get posted.
Reviewer: bella343 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 05:01 AM · On: #16 The Fourth
Nice work, keep it coming I'm excited to find out if Bella really goes for Edward.
Author's Response: Maybe soon... ;P
Reviewer: Rushed (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 09:44 PM · On: The Mirror
I'm really enjoying your story...but I've got to say I really really hate Alice for making Bella wear those shoes. For one thing, there's nothing that ruins a beautiful outfit quicker than a girl who can't walk in her heels. So based on the trouble she had walking I'm guessing Bella looked utterly ridiculous. And secondly, poor Jasper was trying to keep Bella calm all night....the first thing he should have done was tell Bella to take those goddamn shoes off, as they were clearly making her very uncomfortable! So, in my mind Alice has a fair bit of work to do to make up for being so self centred in making Bella so uncomfortable.
But good story - I'm looking forward to reading more (I love stories where they've been together and had to break up for whatever reason and then they come back together - they're my fave!)
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 12:11 PM · On: #16 The Fourth
Well he definitely is giving her alot to think about now if he could only prove Jake's actions.
Author's Response: All in due time... It's all about to landslide.
Reviewer: allycat38654 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 07:30 AM · On: #16 The Fourth
oh i need more. Soon?
Author's Response: Next chapter is waiting to be released. As soon as the beta approves it...
Reviewer: Starnani21 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 11:23 PM · On: #16 The Fourth
No, I'm thinking Edward is the jerk and Jacob is an ass.
Author's Response: You might change your mind about one of them soon.
Reviewer: Vampgurl20 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 07:18 PM · On: #16 The Fourth
Damn this story gets better and bettter
Author's Response: Glad you are liking it. The next chapter is waiting on the beta to post.
Reviewer: sospecial21 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 04:12 PM · On: #16 The Fourth
Oooh i so wanted Edward to tell Bella what he saw with Jake, i knew jake was a jerk and i knew bella wouldnt cheat, even if she wanted to. I hope her and ed get together!!
Author's Response: A few chapters away from that possibility, but I'm sure at some point before it all ends.
Reviewer: Rainbow12 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 03:34 PM · On: #16 The Fourth
:( all this mess is going to destroy Bella.... Please update soon!
Author's Response: The new chapter is awaiting the beta to get it posted. Bella will manage to pull through.
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 03:07 PM · On: #16 The Fourth
Please tell me that Bella catches on to Jacob and that slut and fast. I just have a feeling that once she finds out that she is going to take a jump off the cliff.
Author's Response: Bella will manage to survive... whether or not she finds out. (I don't want to give away the story.)
Reviewer: kmddeprez1122 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 02:50 PM · On: #16 The Fourth
that was surprising
Author's Response: Still more surprising things to come... Next chapter will be up soon,
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 05:34 PM · On: The Woods
... its very obvious that what jake thinks happened, didn't really happen. i like this. I must say your Jake is not credible. He's too evil, too uncaring, and people are not all bad or all good.
Author's Response: Unfortunately I know a few people very similar to Jake that think they are God's gift to the universe and there is no other way than their own. Sorry you hate him, but I like my loser Jake... But then I am totally Edward all the way. I wouldn't touch the Sharkboy with a ten foot pole. LOL
Reviewer: ucsdgirl_cali (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 01:15 PM · On: The Woods
I totally hate Jake right now. Ugh.
Reviewer: blackbird 1959 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 11:27 AM · On: The Woods
oh wow ................................ as if J needed an excuse !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great chapter !
Reviewer: Kiwibeme (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 06:12 PM · On: The Woods
I have a feeling there was more to what Jake saw...unfortunately. Jake needs to take a flying leap...can't stand him!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:44 PM · On: The Woods
I knew it would not take him long to get with her now he needs to be a man and set Bella free.
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 12:46 PM · On: The Woods
i hate jacob.
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:11 AM · On: The Woods
fucking Jacob the idiot !!! He probably only caught a glimpse and not the whole story and he just screwed up BIG TIME ...
bella is going to be CRAZY !!!
Reviewer: sospecial21 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 09:15 AM · On: The Woods
OMG!!!!! This is quite shocking but not really and i think jacob is a jerk!!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 11:29 PM · On: The Woods
I'm pretty sure Jake the asstard got it wrong. Well, I think he was hell bent at finding an excuse to be with Nessie anyway. So he got his wish. Now update so I can find out what really happened in the forest.
Author's Response: The update is already on FF plus another chapter is going up today... Still waiting for the validation to get the next chapter here.
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