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Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2011 06:21 PM · On: Epilogue

This is such a great story!

I'm sad that this is end, but I will go back and re-read it!

Thank you for writing such a moving, emotional story.

Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 40

aww im with edward. i didnt think she'd say yes either. the ring is perfect for her great chapter.

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 26

glad you chose to let Edward remain true to his character...

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 25

wow, i gotta admit after this chapter im hating Bella right now.

Reviewer: Tarbecca (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 40

Thank you so much for including me in your story.  I am truly honored to be a part of it.

Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 38

Oooo, this was a good one. 

First, I can't wait to see the new ink.  Will you post a sketch or pic?

Second, that wasn't a Lindermann's that Bella was drinking was it?  My Hubs is totally on this lambic beer kick right now, LOL!

Third, you must have found the beginning portion of this chapter therapeutic, no?  I can tell it came from the heart and perhaps from experience.

Once again, thank you for sharing!!  I can't believe it's the end of the road!! :-( 

Now onward to chapter 38!! :D

Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 40

Love that they did their own thing for the wedding....  and very happy that B breaks down and says yes even with her misgivings on marraige...

Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 39

Very cute...  sad that the story is at its end.  I get excited when I get alerts on this story...

Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 38

Like the idea for the mod, but am a little confused why Bella is drinking, even if she didn't do fatal damage to her liver, there has got to be some lingering damage....  just a thought.

Author's Response:

You'd be surprised... Not going to detail it but suffice it to say, I still drink...

Reviewer: rowltyde (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 40

So... I started reading this three days ago. My husband and I are both tattoo-lovers... especially him... (seeing how he has a "shirt" and one full sleeve, with one half sleeve done)... I was more of a piercing gal, but alas, had to take my final one .. "eyebrow" ring out to join the world of being an adult that works for a state agency. :(

Your story is amazing. I love the fact that you used major classics... but unknown to most. For example, Mr. Big?? Really??/ Fantastic!! In college, we had a party, and one of my bff (guy) started wailing that while playing the guitar... now, I wish I had married him. :)

Anyways, you're story is beautiful... for more than those two simple reasons I had mentioned. I haven't read the rest of the reviews, but I'll tell you this. My husband is bipolar. His story is much like Bella. He always had depression issues, but nothing out of control. His father passed away in 2003 and he lost it. Lots of numbing of pain by means of prescriptions and alcohol. So much the case, that he chased his high school sweetheart off (me). In my mind, I wasn't strong enough for him, and he told me to get the f*** away everytime I came around, and he showered his friends with all insurance money, and was FURIOUS with me because I wouldn't use it... I wanted him to continue to go to school and not give up... which I saw him doing.

Anyway, after a 2 year hiatus, we were brought back together after talking for hours at a bar. He was my sweetheart again. So I broke up with my long distance boyfriend, and it was back on. The only one I've really loved. It's been a terrible ride... very good times... but very very bad times. Come to find out... during those two years of "break", he had gone through several trouble-seeking situations, and it's amazing he's without a record, let alone, even alive. Come to find out, when his dad passed away, the dorment bipolar beast was awoken. We've been through gambling issues, alcohol issues, presciption issues, suicidal issues... like I said... tough ride... in 2009, he began having (what looked like) grand mal seizures. 7-10 a day. Yes. The fun gets better. He was diagnosed epileptic... on our way to the University Hospital... to have video EEGs and possible brain surgery. Scary. I never knew if I was going to come home to him dead. (oh, we have two small children too).

Come to find out, he has what's called a conversion disorder. His body takes deep rooted stress and converts to symptoms of epilepsy. He has REALLLLLYYYYY true seizure "episodes"... hallucinations... etc. If you research online, it waters it down and makes it seem as if he could control it. I've seen this... he can't. In some people, the stress is converted into multiple sclerosis symptoms. Know how to treat it? With counseling. We watched the seizures change from the "croppy flop"... (we can joke like this... we nicknamed it)... to just passing out... it would take him all day to recoop... then I would be able to wake him up after 5 minutes. It's like his body just needed a reboot after being overwelmed... much like a panic attack.

Now, no prescriptions at all... 2-5 "seizures" a month... on a bad one... and bipolar tendancies. He's moody... and weird sometimes... but he's NORMAL. No treatment... because he can recognize when he's being unreasonable.

I'm sorry for the novel... but in order to understand how much your story meant to me, I had to describe why it hit home... and how I can understand where you and your characters are coming from. Sometimes it just doesn't feel like there is a happy ending... I know I've felt that way, and I have no emotional issues. I'm not a saint, I have a temper... but I do recognize how hard it is to deal sometimes.

I love you... I love your story... I love your characters... and I'm sorry for anyone that has had any of the situations in this. You are with kindred spirits!  :) <3

Reviewer: Mistress Voodoo Barbie (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 40

Very nicely done!! I hope that Vegas is an outtake!! I could so see Bella and Edward joining Ronan on a last minute double wedding ministered by Elvis!

As for bouquets *shudder* that's happened to me twice
One time I tried the 'I'm just going to stand here approach' and it hit me in the chest and then landed in my arms.
The other time I refused and sat at the back. The bride launched the bouquet over her shoulder and it sailed over all the shrieking women and landed in my lap. Evil things!!

Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 40

what's RPF?

Author's Response:

Real Person Fiction.... so, think Robsten stories here on Twilighted, as an example.  It's fic about the people, as opposed to characters.  I've written a one-shot...


And The Liberation of Katie Holmes exists and is EPIC

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 40

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: Robfan06 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 40

That was amazing, everything falling into place. I thought I could make it trough one chapter without tears, didn't happen...with what he was going through and then her realizing and then the yes sent me over the edge. Thank you for a fantastic story. Can't wait for the epi...

Reviewer: CarrieW (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 40

I am happy and sad all at the same time, because I really don't want this to be over...but I know that it is. I am looking forward to the ever after in the way of the epilogue, but I hope you have something else for me to start reading soon. I need to start reading the others soon, and I am sure I will like them just as much. Thank you for sharing this, and when and if you ever more and change it, I would happily pay hard cover fees to see what you turn it into.

Reviewer: Twihardgirl246 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 40

Aw good chapter! I'm so sad this story is coming to an end!

Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 40

great chapter thanks so much

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 40

they are so awesome! i love it all! i'll be so sad when it ends! but the wedding was amazing!!

Reviewer: miss_mandy (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 40

This chapter was very happy and awesome, too bad there's only one more chapter. Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 40

This was great! I loved it!

I can not wait to see the epilogue! (Even though I'll be sad this is over...)


Reviewer: ginkgo00 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 40

thanks for updating-great, as usual!

Reviewer: ginkgo00 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

AWESOME story. Meant to review sooner, since this is my second time reading this!

Reviewer: Mistress Voodoo Barbie (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 39

I am truly loving this story and Will be both happy and sad to see it end. Happy because I want to know where it ends up but sad for getting there.
I agree with the idea of no sequel (because clearly my opinion matters! lol). You've given this story such depth that I don't think it needs it. Having said that, I wil still eagerly await random holiday outtakes!!!
VERY happy to hear Disk Jockeys is coming back!! Down with the man!!!!

You officially rock, keep up the awesome writing!

Reviewer: Jessa1326 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 39

I'm finally all caught up! It took a few days, but it was worth it! I've cried, laughed and been extremely angry while reading the story, but it's by far one of my favorites. I am a "music junkie" and loved the music choices.

I'm anxious for the next chapter...I'm hoping Edward proposes!
<3 Jessa

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 3

i was wondering how Ronan and Bella met.

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