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Reviewer: Killerbunys (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is really good and you should be proud of it!

Glad you are posting more, can't wait to see how this plays out.

I love messy Cullens.  They're all too perfect in the Twilight universe, you dirtied them up quite nicely!

Author's Response:

And they only get dirtier and more complex...  Nice to see you!  I should see if you've been writing.  I miss A Girl Like You.

Reviewer: hologramGal (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

this has a lot of potential to go both bad and good ways!!

I think everyone battles with these feelings that B&E are going through..(I have)  Definitely not your average fic...I'm liking it!

Author's Response:

It's definitely not an easy road they're facing - I'm going to take a guess now and state that whereas my multis tend to wrap in 20-24 chapters, this one's going to run a lot longer...  Welcome on board!

Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow-that was intense.  Glad you decided to continue on-will be great to see what develops between Bella and Edward.


Author's Response:

A lot is coming their way, that's for sure.  I set out maximizing the one-shot for everything I had, because I really thought this was it...  and um the characters and fans told me to shut up and write.  And nobody argues with Doucheward and Bitchella!  New chapter soon!

Reviewer: iLikeTigerMilk (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, amazing first chapter. I really am a sucker for Tatwards and Inkellas, *sigh*

I added you on le twitter, im iLikeTigerMilk. So yeah, can't wait to read more!


Author's Response:

Oh God, so am I.  If I could make Tattward come alive....  *purr*

Reviewer: xXHiddenSecretXx (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love it. it's tragic and depressing and BRILLIENT!!!! please update soon


Author's Response:

I do love me some angst and lemon....  Tragic with a silver lining of hope? 

Reviewer: mOrE_tHeN_mY_oWn_LiFe (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am speechless, this is an amazing story so far. You are an amazing writer! More soon please!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much <3  I have three other chapters done, and I'll be posting them fairly rapidly, and I'm hoping to finish another this week. 

Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well, the therapy part of your story had too many similarities to Once Upon a Time in Therapy for me, but the second half was pretty good. I know you had to put a lot of thought into Edward's tatoos,a nd I can certainly appreciate that.

Author's Response:

I've never heard of or read that story!  And because I have rules about such things, it'll have to wait until AFTER I finish this.  Trust me when I say formal therapy takes a huge backseat here, so hopefully that makes things distinct?

Reviewer: Nilla (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love the beginning of this story, I'm already hooked. Please tell me you'll have another chapter up soon.

Author's Response:

Absolutely - I'll throw the next chapter up tomorrow.  Thank you so much <3

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