Just to make a point, it wouldn't be plagiarism to produce the work elsewhere and credit the author; plagiarism is solely dependent on presenting work as if it is your own without crediting the author (although a lack of permission makes this stronger, the key element is the actual passing it off as your own). Rather, it would probably be some kind of copyright breach.

Anyway, love the story. I like how you're keeping it close to the original whilst giving it lots of twists of your own.

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Whilst the reproduction of a body of work elsewhere would constitute a breach of copyright, I meant plagiarism in a more particular sense. Several authors on this site have had their work posted on sites such as Wattpad without their permission. On sites such as these the person who has copied the work sets up an account through which people can favourite and comment on the work and become a fan of the user, who is then assuming credit for the production of the work (the plagiarism part). Even when they've credited the author, people still assume that because they've posted it they hold ownership of the piece. I realise I didn't word my note exactly the way I would've hoped but I didn't want to sound too preach-y. Neverless the people who do copy this work do get reported and are quite often removed by the hosts of the sites. I brought it up because it's becoming particularly prevalent amongst the Twilight ff community and everyone's very upset by it.

Anyway, sorry for the rant, I just hate the idea of it happening to my work too.

Glad you like the story anyway. I wanted the initial sex scene to be merely a starting point, sort of a what if, so this fic is intending (if I can write it) to follow the whole basic plot of Twilight, but just with a sexual relationship already developed within it. Anyway, if you've managed to read all this I'm very impressed and thank you very much for leaving a review :) 

What a doucheward, he's being.  Edward tells Bella he is staying away from her for her own good.  Leaving her with cracked ribs.  Thank goodness for Alice's ability to see in the future and know that Bella would need help getting dressed. Then taking Bella to Carlisle to examine.  To verify ribs were cracked and provide medical assistance and pain medications.  Alice for a month would arrive every morning to assist Bella into shower and rebandage her ribs.  All the while the man who helped caused the cracked ribs treated her like she didn't exist or phase him at all.  Bella feeling like been used and tossed aside like more teenage boys would do after getting physically what they want.  Of course, Edward is not really feeling that way, but staying away to avoid hurting her again.  This was hurting Bella even more, especially since the cracked ribs.  At least Alice, Jasper, and Carlisle acknowledged her presence.  Then a spring dance comes up, girls ask the guys is scheduled at the school.  Not one, not two, but three other boys in their class ask Bella if she would ask them to the dance.  Edward overhearing them ask her got his dander up.  Especially when Alice forced the issue for Edward to hear the last offer to take her to the dance.  The previous times Bella gave the excuse had plans in Seattle for the day and wouldn't be home in time to get ready for the dance.  So when Tyler, the third asked, Edward approached him told him Bella and he were spending the day in Seattle and she would be unable to attend the dance with him.  Then got into the passenger side of the truck.  Once Bella drove home, Edward followed her into the house.  Bella confronted Edward about ignoring her then when another male appeared to have interest, he got all territorial, what gives?  The boy is jealous of other males taking an interest on his girl (love, soulmate, singer). Edward can't come up with anything to explain his behavior.  Bella told him you can't doing this.  Edward crossed the room and grabbed Bella and laid a mind blowing kiss on her.  Talk about time moron.  Why both of you being in so much pain.  So now Edward made his claim and know he needs to do something about it.  Still think he's a doucheward by his treatment of Bella.  Especially after he knew how hurt she was by him.  Treating her lot a one night stand.  Well let's see if he can finally treat her like the love of his life.

Author's Response:

Don't worry, it's going to get better soon. I think at the moment Edward's just confused, but soon he'll be nicer. Thanks for reviewing :)

Love this story, keep on rocking!

Author's Response:

Yay. Glad you <3 this fic, more to come soon. Thanks for the stars :)

I'm sorry but you have to keep writing this story...! I like your perspective on Edward and Bella's passion.  Get busy! please

Author's Response:

Don't worry I'm going to keep writing until the end, it just might take a while with all my other RL commitments as well. I'm aiming for roughly two-three chapters a month so more to come in February. Glad you like this so much :)

I'm really enjoying your story and can't wait for another update.

Author's Response:

Glad you like it, hope you enjoy what's to come :)

Well, finally Edward is going to stop running from Bella now...right? A Cullen POV would be interesting about now--either Edward or Alice (or both) to enlighten us as to what was going on behind the scenes on their end. Getting good, I really like this so far. 

Author's Response:

Yes, Edward is finally going to stop running...at least that's the plan. No plans however to show a Cullen POV yet. I'm hoping to keep the main bulk of this fic as BPOV, but would maybe consider an outtake once this is over in a different POV. I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so far. Thanks for reviewing :)

I totally love the plot change in this story. The idea of Bella and Edward having sex before a relationship is so teen hormone appropriate. I just love that the Edward in this story couldn't kep it in his pants.

Author's Response:

Yay! I'm glad you like it. Yes, my Edward and Bella are definitely ruled by their hormones and not their heads, but then that's the best way, isn't it ;)

I think I've been told that too

Author's Response:

So you should have been :) Cheers

lol yes I believe that I've been told that I'm rather... unique, before ;)

Author's Response:

Well, I appreciate your... unique-ness. It makes for entertaining conversation :)

ah that makes sense

Author's Response:

Good. I'd hate to confuse you, especially when you leave such brilliant, but bizarre reviews for me :)

wow - i did not see that coming - WTF lol - i love your story cant wait for next chapter

Author's Response:

I take it the WTF is good? Hope it is anyway, glad you're enjoying the fic so far and thanks for the review and the stars :)

I love this story i hope you continue

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you. Hopefully (although I'm not promising anything) the next update should be a bit sooner :)