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Reviewer: ladydior (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
i love this! you really are one of the best fanfic writers i've read :)
Author's Response: OMG thank you so much. That's just made my day :)
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
stupid hormonal vampire
Author's Response: Very stupid hormonal vampire...but he'll start behaving better soon :)
Reviewer: ctfan (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
Really enjoying your story. Very well written, erotic, and angsty. Loved this chapter especially. It's fun to see a jealous Edward. So glad he couldn't stay away any longer. What's he going to do about the bruising b/c I'm assuming they are going to be making sweet, sweet love again sometime soon?
Author's Response: Yeah, my Edward has no self-control or will to stay away from Bella. The bruising was mostly because Edward didn't redirect his strength away from Bella's body that time. Thank you for the lovely review :)
Reviewer: Chalger33 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
love it, Jealousward is awesome and loving Alice too!!
Author's Response: Yay, you like Jealousward...I wasn beginning to worry that he was being a bit too much of a prick. I'm glad you like my Alice though - I'm trying to make her be supportive rather than pushy, so hopefully that's working. Cheers for the review and for popping over to the forum : )
Reviewer: DirtyAim (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
Wow, I love this idea, and it is actually believable! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Glad you think this is believable, I'm trying to stick to canon as much as possible. Thanks for your review :)
Reviewer: Applefromatree (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
Love love love the story so far :)
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much. Hope you enjoy what's to come too. Thanks for the stars :)
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 07:51 AM · On: The Night Before
the worst part is that I can't really say anything truly bad about you because I do the same thing in my fics
Author's Response: Yep, cliffhangers are the best :)
Reviewer: Jen86 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Unexpected Competition
please upload more soon!! amazing!!!
Author's Response: Updates are coming as fast as I can write them (which unfortunately isn't very fast). But more should be coming very soon. Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: heavenlyvixen (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Unexpected Competition
This is amazing. I absolutely love this fic. I'm enthralled by it. I can't wait for your next update. It's stunning. Please update soon, I'm so captivated I just have to know what happens next.
Author's Response: I'm afraid that the updates come out as soon as the chapters are written and RL keeps getting in the way of the writing. Hope you stick around though. I'm really glad that you like what you've read so far. It's nice to know I'm doing something right. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:38 AM · On: Unexpected Competition
Good on Bella for calling on Edward for blowing hot and cold! Now she needs to call him on her ribs and not let herself be dazzled out of an answer. Or let herself be stopped with a kiss (or three or five...)
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Yep, in the next chapter Bella's going to bawl Edward out and don't worry she's not going to let him dazzle his way out of it...there might be more kissing though. She's going to demand an answer over everything though, not just her ribs, although that's obviously a big part of her upset.
Glad you're looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: thatdamnstupidlamb (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:09 AM · On: Unexpected Competition
another fabulous chapter! can't wait for chapter 5!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Unexpected Competition
oh edward make your mind up! lol! Really like how this is playing out! Can't wait to read more. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Yep, Edward's definitely indecisive when it comes to Bella. Hope you like where this is going to go. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: britishangelsoul (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 02:18 AM · On: The Night Before
Just wanted to leave a reply to your response. I'm just a bit of a pedant when it comes to legal stuff, I wasn't trying to downplay the seriousness (and hurtfulness) of reproduction at all, just to make myself clear. Id consider breach of copyright in this context as bad and as hurtful, it's just my pedantic lawyer side, as I said. :)
Author's Response: I know and I'm really sorry that you unfortunately bore the brunt of my rant. The problem isn't just reproduction, in some cases it actually is full-out plagiarism and it's become a sore point among authors lately. So yeah, sorry, but thanks for reading and replying anyway. I really appreciate it :)
Reviewer: mrsjjjcullen (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 02:05 AM · On: Unexpected Competition
i'm so excited cause i just discovered your story .. OMG I LOVE IT!!
woohoo -- your my new favorite story! I can't wait to see where you take it :)
Author's Response: Well thank you very much. I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so far. Thanks for the review and the stars :)
Reviewer: PPV123 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 01:38 AM · On: Unexpected Competition
I can't wait to read more. Looking forward to it! :-)
Author's Response: Glad you want to read more... now I just need to go write it. Thanks for reviewing : )
Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 12:08 AM · On: Unexpected Competition
loooove it.
Author's Response: Good, I'm glad :)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
"He was across the room in a flash, hands diving into my hair as he interrupted my tirade with a searing kiss.".....LOVE IT!
Im just love sexy, love-sick, reckless, Edward. I love how he gives in to his impulses!
Author's Response: I know, I wish I had one. This Edward is definitely not holding back. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
more!!!!!!!!!!! now!
Author's Response: I can't write more just yet, I need a bit of time first :)
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
Aaahhhh frustrating! I loved it, but it is seriously frustrating...
Author's Response: I can't help it, I just love cliffhangers. Thanks for the review and the stars :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
I JUST LOVE THIS STORY
Author's Response: I'm glad you love this fic, I love it too. Cheers :)
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
This is a unique take. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
Fantastic work!
I'm really enjoying this, although I'm pretty curious as to whether or not Bella is pregnant!
Keep up the great writing!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed the fic so far. Bella will not be pregnant in this fic as I don't think that it would add anything to the story. That being said I am considering writing a fic that splits off from this basic plotline where Bella does get pregnant, but it won't happen for a little while yet. Anyway, thanks for the lovely review, hope you enjoy what's to come :)
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
Oh I like how you've done this!! :)
From the regular Alice-treatment (poor Alice...this has to be hard on her) to the Jessica moment and all the guys with the dance invites... Well done.
The twist with Edward saying THEY were going to Seattle had me quietly Huzzah'ing to my screen.
I completely feel for Bella's confusion and anger at Edward's treatment of her. That said, I wonder how she'll respond to his kiss?
Author's Response: Yay. I'm glad you think I managed to get the tone of Bella's interactions right. My Edward is definitely more ruled by his impulses than SM's Edward is. I can already tell you that no matter how much Bella likes Edward's kisses she not going to put up with his indecision anymore. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
I loved seeing Jealous-ward. XD
Bella was right though.He can't sleep with her, then ignore her then go back to paying attention to her. He needs to make up his mind. Hopefully he has come to his senses (with the help from his family and seeing things for himself) and has made a decision that he will stick to.
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah, Jealousward is definitely fun to write, but yeah he needs his arse seriously kicking (which he will get in the next chapter). Bella is definitely going to demand that Edward makes a decision one way or another. Thanks for the review and the stars :)
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
Well done. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you. Hopefully the next update won't take as long :)
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