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Reviewer: sweetstarryeyes (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Conversation Is Key
This chapter was worth the wait. I love that Edward asked Bella if he could "court" her. Totally cute! Though I do wonder if Edward can stick to that plan. Or if Bella can, for that matter :). I look forward to your next update!
Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Conversation Is Key
"courting" so cute!
Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
Love it!!!
Reviewer: DingoesAteMyBaby (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Conversation Is Key
So I just found the story and I have to say I completely adore it. I love how you keeping respectful to canon while adding your own twists to it. I really enjoy reading things from Bella's pov, because we already as readers know what it is she's trying so hard to figure out and it's nice to read and try to catch the ltitle clues you give her through Edwards mouth.
I can't wait for more, becasue I need to know how things turn out and I can't help wonder if you're gonna let him go completely ballistic (given his already proven primal protectiveness and marking towards her first in bed and then by the whole you're mine thingie) if those men attack her in the dark again.
More please;)
Happy writing
d. mai
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Conversation Is Key
I love the complete emotional turmoil that Bella had in her conversation with Edward and that it kept changing. She's very strong really and I was impressed that she had the balls to have a go at him and stuff.
Another episode nicely done. Looking forward to the next one.
Achilles x
Reviewer: SOFisticated1 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Conversation Is Key
Yay, he's being sweet now =) love it. See you next chap.
Reviewer: heavenlyvixen (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Conversation Is Key
I alread read and reviewed over at ff.net, but I just had to say again how happy i am that you updated this fic. I love it! Keep it coming. :D
Reviewer: SOFisticated1 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Conversation Is Key
Yay, he's being sweet now =) love it. See you next chap.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 05:10 AM · On: Conversation Is Key
I really liked this chapter. I appreciate that they're communicating and that Bella is trying to think clearly...hard as that is with Mr. Sex Hair. ;-)
I'm also relieved Edward has put himself out there and has actually given her an idea for how to smooth things over @ school.
It would be nice for them to have a relationship not built on misassumptions. It could happen. :D
Reviewer: emckinney (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Conversation Is Key
Yay, you've updated! I'm really enjoying this.
Reviewer: TrinTalen (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 04:06 AM · On: The Morning After
Reviewer: AubreyRose (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Conversation Is Key
I thought Edward's reaction to Bella's threat to date Mike and Tyler was great. It was good that Bella and Edward were able to talk through what happened and it was really sweet the way Edward asked Bella out on a date. Please add another chapter soon as I can't wait to find out how their relationship develops.
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:37 AM · On: Conversation Is Key
Great chapter, loved it!!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Conversation Is Key
Hmm even if he doesn't intend it right now, Edward's dropping clues like a flowergirl does petals, and I'm really looking forward to the revelation for Bella hehe :)
Reviewer: deea (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 01:15 AM · On: Conversation Is Key
ahhhh.....mooooore
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 11:31 PM · On: The Night Before
OH BOY! That was hot.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Conversation Is Key
I really enjoyed this chapter. I liked how Bella handled it. She's not going to be walked on!
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Conversation Is Key
Loved the chapter,so does that mean no more lemons no that they're going to be friends?
Reviewer: Leli (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Conversation Is Key
Welcome back:)) Like I said, you've got a very nice plot there!!
Reviewer: armanifan101 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Conversation Is Key
Please update! I was so excite when I saw that you updated! Can't wait for Doctor Fine Piece of Sexy Ass!
Reviewer: DirtyAim (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Conversation Is Key
OMG!!!! I am ecstatic that you decided to update this wonderful fic! Im waiting on pins and needles to find out what happens!Hopefully there will be some smuty accidents in the near future ;)
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Conversation Is Key
Very good. update soon!
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Conversation Is Key
OH MY GOD, WELCOME THE FUCK BACK!
ok,ok,ok,ok. ::whew::
So...he's going to court her? Yum-me. Looking forward to THAT.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Conversation Is Key
Glad Bella stood up for herself to Edward. That she expressed what she wanted and she asked Edward what he wanted. Bella decided to back up and start again being friends. She determined no more sex. Like that will happen. Too tempting for them both. At least Edward will be acknowledging her at school. He gave her a story to tell Jessica about where they stand. Alice made Edward go to Bella to save her from the dud trio. Edward wants to court her, how romantic, definitely words from another time. A time when things were so much slower. Edward wants to take Bella on a date. Bella was pretty brave putting out the statement she wasn't pregnant. How does Edward know he can't get a girl pregnant? You would never know. It's not like he has had a lot of experience with girls. Considering both Edward and Bella were each others' first and only partner. Looking forward to the following day at school to observe how Edward's behavior will change towards Bella.
Reviewer: Mashknight (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Conversation Is Key
Awesome, hope you write more often.
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