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Reviewer: AlohaWhatever (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Unexpected Competition
OK, So Edward turned into a major ass. I really hope that he is able to come up with some major explanations. And I REALLY hope that Bella doesn't just let him kiss her, she needs to stand up to him!
Reviewer: AlohaWhatever (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Instructions Not Included
So much for staying away from her. I'm glad he didn't though. I do think he is sucky for leaving her at the end like that though. Sweet or not, he still left.
Reviewer: AlohaWhatever (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 06:02 PM · On: The Morning After
So, Edward is crazy emo in this chapter. However, I am partial to a good Emo-ward, and this story had a great Emo-ward :)
Reviewer: AlohaWhatever (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 05:55 PM · On: The Night Before
So, I've been reading this story all along, just never reviewed. I know, I suck, sorry. So anyway I figured I would go back and review now. :)
This chapter was GREAT, totally had me hooked!!
Reviewer: AlohaWhatever (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Tentative Beginnings
I'm really curious about the exchange between Carlisle and Edward! Glad that Bella is going to let Edward court her, so cute :) Excited to find out what she discovers in La Push!
Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Tentative Beginnings
I am liking your version of twilight. I hope to see an update sooner rather than later.
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Tentative Beginnings
Very good, I loved the interaction between Carlisle and Edward, can't wait for more.
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Tentative Beginnings
Awesome work!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: AubreyRose (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Tentative Beginnings
I was so excited to see that you had updated! I like how Edward became possessive at the hospital. Please post another chapter soon!
Reviewer: meldisil (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Tentative Beginnings
Love this story!
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Conversation Is Key
Friends... that's how it always starts, hehe...
Weird, this lack-of-control version of Edward... though nice change from the always-putting-on-the-breaks Edward :)
Reviewer: ChangosGirl (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Tentative Beginnings
Happy dance happy dance! I cant wait for the next one!!
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Unexpected Competition
Yikes... cracked ribs is not my idea of fun. Kinda good that he kept his distance, and doesn't everyone love a jealous edward every now and then?! I must admit, there was flinching at the end... wondering what damage he might cause now :(
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Instructions Not Included
whew! i am LOVING this story :)
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 12:02 AM · On: Tentative Beginnings
Oh my god. Why don't you RECAP when you update after 3 months? Apologies are not necessary, a short recap is, to be nice to your readers. Yours is not the only story one is following, you know? Personally I am following 200 of them and now I can't remember what happened before. I probably am not alone in this. So I have to wait till I have time to reread the first chapters, but really it is not right.
(BTW, your story is probably very good, if I have favorited it - only, I have forgotten)
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 12:01 AM · On: Tentative Beginnings
You're a great writer. This is a wonderful story!!
Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Tentative Beginnings
Thank you for writing again! This is one of my favorites.
Reviewer: Cora (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:59 PM · On: Tentative Beginnings
Yay, another chapter!
Seems like Edward is a bit jealous of Carlisle...
I really like this story so I'm hoping you're going to update sooner ;-)
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:02 PM · On: The Night Before
Very good and soo HOT!!
Reviewer: tinamarie6624 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Tentative Beginnings
Great Chapter! Can't wait for the update.
Reviewer: evelynvm29 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Tentative Beginnings
Great chapter
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Tentative Beginnings
I loved this chapter!
It seems like Edward is not trying to hide what he is when Bella is around. I have a feeling it will only be a matter of time before she figures it out.
Looking forward to your next update!
Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Tentative Beginnings
Awe, very nice chapter. I love the kisses she placed on his forehead. His reaction to Carlisle examining her was surprising as it was Carlisle...but then again, it was very Edwardlike. Great job! The chapter as always was exteremly well written. They are very cute together and I absolutely adore their intimacy.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Tentative Beginnings
Bella talked with Jessica about Edward saving her from Tyler's attention. Jessica started to spread the story that Tyler was stalking Bella. Edward sat by himself at lunch wanting Bella to join him. Jessica pushed her forward towards Edward. Bella is confused with the mood swings, the cryptic comments to her, his behavior around his father, and their silent communications. The fact Carlisle mentioned if anything else is bothering her, she should have Alice or Edward bring her to him. At least her ribs are healing nicely. Edward's behavior was very strange in his father's office. Bella almost fainting during biology due to the sight and smell of blood. Pretty funny when you're talking with a vampire about blood. At least he thought it was humorous. Edward and Emmett going hiking for the weekend. Bella will miss him, but she agreed to go to La Push with Mike and the gang for a day relaxing on the beach. Should be interesting how her day goes with them. Wonder if she will run into any inhabitants there.
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 07:25 PM · On: The Night Before
re-reading due to today's update. so yumma!
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