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Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2013 09:05 PM · On: Assemble With Supervision
I want more chapters =( that was a horrible cliffhanger you gave us. I've been waiting foreverrrr ; ;
Reviewer: bubblettrocks (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2013 03:27 PM · On: Assemble With Supervision
Hahaha!!!!! Urgh, this is such an awesome book!!!! Keep going!!!! I was sooooo looking forward to another chapter, but I will wait... U guess :P seriously, your an amazing writer!! Keep up the great work!!!!!
Reviewer: theboywiththegreeneyes (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 08:08 PM · On: The Night Before
OMG did you give up? plese continueee
Reviewer: Carly_Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2012 11:21 AM · On: Assemble With Supervision
wow. Wow. WOW. Great story, please continue writing!!!
Reviewer: Carly_Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2012 11:06 AM · On: Assemble With Supervision
wow. Wow. WOW. Great story, please continue writing!!!
Reviewer: topazcullen (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 06:00 PM · On: Assemble With Supervision
update soon! im addicted to this story! love how u write. I can't wait to see how everything turns out!!!!
Reviewer: topazcullen (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 08:14 PM · On: Assemble With Supervision
you need to update soon! the idea for this story is very creative and I cannot wait to see how Edward courts Bella. please update!
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 10:13 AM · On: Assemble With Supervision
Hi there, I had this fic stored, because when I got the update I had forgotten most of the plot(next time, please, recap). I had to find the time to re-read. But, most of all, please promise me that you'll continue it. I love this story!
Reviewer: bellabyday (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2012 08:17 AM · On: Assemble With Supervision
I just came upon your work and I really love this story! It almost make them look more normal to have already slept together. More like normal teenagers these days. Lord knows I wouldnt have been able to keep my hands off of Edward at 17! Couldnt/Wouldnt now either lol. Cant wait to read more! Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2012 11:27 PM · On: Assemble With Supervision
This is very good. When are you going to update this? It's May already...sigh
Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 04:17 AM · On: Assemble With Supervision
OMG that was great. Please update soon can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 07:25 AM · On: Assemble With Supervision
Good (frustrating) place to end it! I want to know Edward's reaction to Bella's knowledge!
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2012 05:08 AM · On: Assemble With Supervision
I love your blunt Bella who tells Edward to cut the crap and just comes out with "You're a vampire." :-)
Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 12:23 PM · On: Assemble With Supervision
I was very happy to see a new update. Can't wait for more :)
Reviewer: wendycd41056 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 08:38 AM · On: Assemble With Supervision
great story i will look forward to the update
Reviewer: Bleeding_Mascara_Tears (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 08:12 PM · On: Assemble With Supervision
DAMN IT!!! That was the first words out of my mouth when I read the last sentence. I can't wait to read more but I guess I'll have to!
Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 03:56 AM · On: The Night Before
This is a great start and I can't wait to get caught up. The description mentioned reparcusions of this night and I look forward to seeing where you'll take it...his or her regret...pregnancy...Volturi?
But I worry a little since this story was started and 09 so I hope I haven't jumped onboard one that won't finish.
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 11:07 AM · On: Assemble With Supervision
...way to just throw it out there! lol ahahaaa. hopefuly, he wont crash the car...lol. I love and edward caught off guard.
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 11:06 AM · On: Careful, Fragile
Glad ed was there to protect her :)
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 11:05 AM · On: Conversation Is Key
ooo I love how she really put him is his place. Shes got spunk for sure.
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 11:04 AM · On: Unexpected Competition
Alice to the rescue. That had to be an awkward situation. What was ed thinking leaving her like that?
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 11:03 AM · On: The Night Before
wooohh, hott
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2012 06:27 PM · On: Assemble With Supervision
Minor issues discussed about how he knew where she was in Port Angeles before she was attacked. How he knew where to meet Angela and Jess and how he knew what they were about to do when they couldn't find her. Their arrival stopped the girls from calling Charlie. Edward finally had to admit that he could read minds all people except for her. He told Bella he wanted them to be together, but wanted to court her. Get to know her as a person before they continued being intimate. Not sure Bella wants that as well. She wants to know Edward as a person more, but doesn't want to stop being intimate at the same time. She wants to keep the status quo. On the drive home the discussion about Edward being a vampire. Should prove to be quite interesting for Bella and Edward with Bella's reaction to the what the news Edward will reveal.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2012 02:08 PM · On: Assemble With Supervision
i'm so glad he's for the relationship! i love when they question each other
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2012 11:15 AM · On: Assemble With Supervision
cant wait for next chapter in this story - I love it
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