Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 10:21 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
hey great chap i loved it =] i really hope she goes with him - OMG i cant believe aro is her grandfather that was one shock =]
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 09:38 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
woohoo!!! Edward's back in the picture!! and he's stain-free (from the laundry spray :) hehehe
It's very interesting to see Bella's connection to Aro and co. come out finally, although it looks like she's got some thinking to do about how she really feels about all that.
I'm so glad that Jenks is "sort of" a good guy, rather than being out-and-out slimy and bad.
Looking forward to seeing how this plays out, even though it seems we're coming up on the conclusion fast :)
Reviewer: NicoleLight (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 09:04 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
Yaa - so glad they are at least in the same place again! Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 07:16 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
YEA!! I'm soo happy!
I'm chomping at the bit for more. Hope it doesn't take too long to get out the next chapter.
I'll try to be patient and don't worry about replying to my reviews. I understand how overwhelming that would be to reply to everyone's reviews.
Until next time......hopefully sooner rather than later.......
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 07:11 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
I'm so glad that Edward found her
Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 05:33 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
This is sooo good! And f*ck, I'm glad they're finally back together again... Very much looking forward to next chapter!
Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 05:07 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
Woohoo! Go Bella! But poor Edward....that stuff has got to sting :S
I knew he'd find her eventually...I can't wait to see what the next chappie brings!!!!
Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 03:14 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
Yay! together again! =)
Reviewer: aciepey (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 03:08 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
I just love your story and am always glad to see an update!
I breathed a sigh of relief when Edward showed up!
:)
Patty
Reviewer: SottoVoce (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 02:57 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
"She ran away from them at eighteen. That was how she met my father. She was alone and needed a place to stay. He was a chivalrous new cop who wouldn't let her sleep on the streets. It turned into something more, and less than a year later, I was born."
lol yeah thats some spin they put on that story for Bella.
Hooking!Renee and Tormented-by-dichotamy-of-chivalry-and-lust!Charlie would make a great one shot.
LOVE the end of this chapter. Except for the spray and wash in the eyes poor edward!
I love him.
Reviewer: LONEWOLF (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 02:43 PM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
Hey - I've been gone for months and months and I am so very happy to see that you have returned as well. This was one of my first fan fiction reads and I have loved every chapter. Thanks for coming back to finish! I can't wait to see what you do.
Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 02:40 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
Yay Edward to the rescue!!! Love that Jenks is a good guy that was a nice surprise, and when Edward called her by her real name...sigh! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: MustangMel1968 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 02:17 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
Holy Crap, what a cliffy! I love this story, please don't leave us hanging too long!
Reviewer: Emeralds and Rubies (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 02:05 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
OMG. Again, WOW. I can not wait for an update!
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 02:02 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
I loved the twists and turns this chapter brought. I can't wait till the next chapter.
Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 02:01 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
Oh.......I'm so relieved. That was a tense chapter. I'm happy to know that she has more people on her side now; willing to help but not willing to participate. And, yay! Edward found her!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 01:56 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
Great chapter. I had a feeling that she was related to Aro, but I thought that she was his daughter instead.
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 01:52 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
Argh! I am sitting at the edge of my seat waiting to read more. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 01:33 PM · On: February 29, 2008
I'm intrigued... :-)
Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 01:32 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
Hi! Nice job!! So weird that he called her Marie. Do we get to see what happened w/ Alice?
Reviewer: edwardsbabe (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 01:28 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
omg alsome work i have been cheeking back with the site weighting for you and a nother fave auther of mine to post new stuff thanks for post this was an alsome chapter as are all the rest and i can not weight to see what happends next i am so happy edward came for her i was weighting for it and getting sad that he wasnt there yet and then bam you are an alsome writer keep up the alsome work i so give this story a ten if i could give it a 20 i would alsome work
amy
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 01:23 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
My heart was pounding in my chest the entire time!
Reviewer: jenteal88 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 01:22 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
omfg 3 chapters left?
but this is the best story ever.
Your imagination just.... rocks! (for lack of a better word)
I <3 this story. :))
I don't ever want it to be finished :'(
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 01:19 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
I'm so glad he found her. That's pretty crazy her being related to Aro.
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 01:10 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008
Ahh, at last. I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters. What did the painting say?
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