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Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 08:55 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008

Omg!! Yay Edward found her!! I was so sad/worried that they weren't ever going to see each other again until the trial!! Omg the story is about to be over :(, but it can't be because I want Bella to explain everything to Edward! He needs to hear her explain why she left and what's been happening! He needs to explain stuff too! I love this story! Lol! :)

Reviewer: JennaMarie22 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 08:48 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008

I absolutely adore your writing.  This story is compelling...and I cannot wait to read more :-)

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 08:32 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

OMG!! OMG!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 08:13 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

OMG!! No she can't leave!! :O

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 07:42 PM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008

:D It keeps getting better and better, but I'm worried things are gonna get really messed up!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 07:26 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

OMG OMG!!! I loved it!! Omg I'm speechless!!

Reviewer: narcissusave (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 06:49 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008

LOVED IT! You rock. No--really. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 06:47 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

:O WOW!!! :D

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:45 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Aww Edward needs to let loose a little! He's so fun when he relaxes with Bella! :) Great chapter!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:26 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008

Uh oh they can't hide from Alice! She's gonna wonder why Bella is in a separate room :)! They'll have to fix that!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:36 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Aww man! I hope Bella doesn't think that Edward doesn't want her!

Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 03:42 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008

Holy crap! So much happened in this chapter. I'm so glad he found her! Jason must have helped him. The whole thing with Aro being her grandfather totally surprised me, but it all adds up.

Fantastic chapter, C! I can't believe we are so close to the end.

xxoo
annie

Reviewer: bytemee (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:09 AM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008

well???? What happens next?!Are they safe?what did Edward tell Alice? What was under they painting? Did Jenks contact Edward? PLEASE answer these questions, and write more of your wonderful story and provoke even more! -- Bytemee (SHERI)

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 10:02 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

I am finally catching up with your story!  You are amazing.  I love reading every chapter.  Of course it is devastating that she is leaving, but I have to believe that Edward will see through her note and find her.  He is very resourceful too, once he gets over the initial shock.

Reviewer: tookool2c (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 11:43 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008

Yay! An update AND Edward, lucky us!!!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 09:53 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

These have been great chapters! :)

Reviewer: shellybelly214 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 09:25 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008

Ahh! Amazing! Can't wait for more! :D

Reviewer: Stacierob1 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 07:41 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008

Yay Edward!!  So glad he looked....so glad he found her.  Excellent story...lovin it!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 07:34 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008

:) Great chapter!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 07:17 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

Wow I'm speechless! I just want to read the next chapter lol!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 06:57 PM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008

I don't blame Edward for being mad! I can't believe that happened! I would completely understand if Alice doesn't forgive Bella :)! For some reason I'm not so forgiving right now lol!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 06:40 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008

OMG!! I know Bella and Edward aren't really together, but how could she think of doing that with Jake?? How could she do that!? I would be so angry if I was Alice!! :O

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 06:24 PM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008

I just have to say that I'm scared Edward is gonna seem like the bad guy if he finds out about this and he gets angry! Edward is so nice, but he seems like the bossy type! Ok on to the next chapter :)!

Reviewer: Stacierob1 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 05:11 PM · On: September 4 - December 23, 2008

Yay Edward!!  So glad he looked....so glad he found her.  Excellent story...lovin it!

Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 04:01 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008

Aww I loved it!! That was so cute to see Edward being normal and them spending time together! I understand that Emmett doesn't want anything bad to happen to Bella, but he seems a little too protective sometime. Hopefully there's nothing more to that!

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