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Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 06:48 AM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008

OMG I just read chapter one late last night and as I came to the site to leave a review for it, what do I see? Chapter Two! YAAAY!!! LOL  I am so loving this fic right now! The writing is excellent, the plot is unique, and Edward has me very intrigued.

I can't wait to read more of this fic, it truly is wonderful, even with just two chapters I can tell it's going to be a favorite. Keep it coming! :D

~Cat~



Author's Response: LOL, I just literally submitted this chapter for approval less than a half hour ago. I had no idea it would pop up so early in the morning. Glad you like it. I've been having a ball with this one. :)

Reviewer: calahmarie (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 03:56 AM · On: February 29, 2008

It's my favorite kind of Edward - he's just a little bit of an asshole.  I've never seen this plot before, so I'm looking forward to seein where you go with this.  The dynamic between the brothers is awesome. 

Author's Response: My favorite kind of Edward too... but I guess you knew that since I wrote it. :)

Reviewer: mikrro (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 01:23 AM · On: February 29, 2008

:) this is probably one of the best au-human stories i've read. very original, interesting, and smart. i can't wait until the next chapter. kudos!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is up, so I hope you like it, too.

Reviewer: EclipseoftheTwilightMoon (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 12:35 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Your story looks very interesting and has me interested to see how things continue.  You are very talented and I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

Reviewer: BellsNWhistles (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2008 10:10 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Your story is much-loved!  I love the plot and i cannot wait to see what happens!!!!

Reviewer: Ambushed (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 10:04 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Only one chapter and I am hooked. I really need to wait to start reading when more is out, but I just can't help myself.

Can't wait to see all the mischief that the two of them will get into. Especially with Alice and Esme planning a wedding!!



Author's Response: I know. I always start reading fics too early and then kick myself for not waiting until more was done. But I did post the next chapter, so hopefully that will help.

Reviewer: kaypgirl (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 08:16 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Great story so far. So, is her fake name this time going to be Bella? And Marie just sounds so wrong. It's an overused middle name, not a first name. Now I can't wait to get either Bella's pov or at least Bella in person.

Author's Response: Yes, her fake name will be Bella. I could not have a whole story with the wrong name. And the next chapter is up, with a healthy dose of Bella POV.

Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 06:27 PM · On: February 29, 2008

This is really well written, very original.

 

I like. 



Author's Response: Thank you. I take that as quite a compliment from you, since your story is quite original.

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 05:21 PM · On: February 29, 2008

That was really good I loved it .Please Update soon

Reviewer: EliseT29 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 04:45 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: dazzled12911 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 03:53 PM · On: February 29, 2008

i LOVE this.
the idea is really original and you write incredibly. i cant wait to see what happens next! update soon?



Author's Response: I gave in and updated early. I hope you like the next chapter too.

Reviewer: spc87 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 03:37 PM · On: February 29, 2008

this is soooooo good

i can already tell i'll be hooked!

Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 03:21 PM · On: February 29, 2008

wow! this is a really good story and a creative plot! i can't wait to see where you go with this! UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 01:31 PM · On: February 29, 2008

I love your story so far. Very good idea! Please update soon.

Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 01:16 PM · On: February 29, 2008

AWESOME!

I WANT MORE!

NOW!

Reviewer: CapriciousC (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 12:43 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Love love love this premise!  Your story is so original - I don't think I've read anything remotely like it.  It's so very well-written, too.  I really enjoy your writing and can't wait to see where you take it next!

Author's Response: Thank you. I really tried to do something I hadn't seen before.

Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 11:06 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Ok, I'm hooked and curious to see how this works out!

Reviewer: Jenna (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 10:47 AM · On: February 29, 2008

I think I'm really going to enjoy this story!  Looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: DazzledMom (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 10:30 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Wow!  This is really, really good!  I can't wait for more!  Who wouldn't want to have Edward Cullen commit to keeping them safe and alive!!!!  Please update soon!

Author's Response: I know I wouldn't mind if he committed to keeping me safe... :)

Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 08:32 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Ahh... very nice setup. Lots of drama to come too!! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: lia516 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 08:20 AM · On: February 29, 2008

I really like this.  I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: morethaniwanttobe (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 08:19 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Seriously... awesome first chapter! I can't wait for the rest!

Reviewer: amblovestoread (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 08:03 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Oh I really like the idea of this story. Nice start and can't wait for more!

Reviewer: kirbko (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 07:35 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Yes!

Absolutely love this storyline…you are a fantastic writer:)

Thank you for sharing your amazing talent!

Reviewer: wmlaw (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 07:32 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Really good start!!

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