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Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 06:59 PM · On: March 22, 2008
Come on we can't wait till Sunday! Its exciting to read a story with different kind of plot.
Reviewer: Peachsilk (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 01:43 PM · On: March 22, 2008
What an interesting story - can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2008 08:34 PM · On: March 22, 2008
Hey! So, this is my first official review with my new and larger than life account. Go figure, have fun with the priviledge. Great story, I love your style (a hard thing to come by in these realms) and very original idea, well written. It's not predictable, like so many are, because although we all *think* we know the outcome, at least we don't know what's going to happen along the way. Kudo's for all that. Update soon, and thanks for the read.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And I dearly hope my fic won't be predictable. Hopefully people will continue to enjoy it as it twists and turns.
Reviewer: TwilightFan104 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 09:41 PM · On: March 22, 2008
Loved this chapter. Seems like Alice may catch on soon, which should be interesting. Can't wait to see what happens with meeting the parents.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter! Family dinner, coming up in the next chapter.
Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 04:21 PM · On: March 22, 2008
Love Alice as always. Meeting the parents will be interesting. I can't wait to see how they "pretend" with everyone around. Love your story!
Author's Response: Thanks! Alice is definitely going to have a role in this fic, so I'm glad you liked her portrayal. We will definitely see more of them 'pretending' with everyone around as the fic goes on.
Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 09:45 AM · On: March 22, 2008
Yikes! I really like this story. You are doing a great job with it. I loved that you made Edward so austere and Bella so pure and sweet. He is so going down!! I think Alice is on to them or will be soon. I can't wait to see what the "pixie" in your story is capable of.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: EliseT29 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 06:24 AM · On: March 22, 2008
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Ambushed (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 12:48 AM · On: March 22, 2008
I'm so nervous for Bella everytime she opens her mouth! Having to lie to Alice, and now meeting the whole family? more knots in the tummy next chapter!!
Author's Response: I know, Bella is really having a rough time. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: KatieBelle (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 12:13 AM · On: March 22, 2008
Just caught up with this one, and I have to say. . .YAY lol. I love it! I can't wait for poor, unsuspecting Bella to meet the rents. I'll be waiting!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it :)
Reviewer: espeinaz (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:55 PM · On: March 22, 2008
I just have to say that I love that Emmett and Rose have kids. I am loving your story thus far. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I thought Rose really deserved to have kids, she wanted them so badly.
Reviewer: rubies_and_topaz (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:43 PM · On: March 22, 2008
this is wonderful! thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Meliktes (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:17 PM · On: March 22, 2008
This story is so GOOD! I absolutely love it!!! Please keep writing it!
Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, I've got bits and pieces of so many chapters written, there is no chance of me stopping.
Reviewer: Pickledishkiller (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:30 PM · On: March 22, 2008
Amazing story... I love it, I do. Please update soon, this sounds like it'll be really interesting.
Author's Response: Next chapter will be up by Sunday.
Reviewer: katdan2003 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:09 PM · On: March 22, 2008
Love this story!!! I love the situation between B & E where they have to pretend to be engaged! Hurry with the draft and post again soon!!
Author's Response: Just waiting to hear back on the draft to decide if it is good enough to go up. Don't worry, in the meantime I am working on chaps 5-7.
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 09:50 PM · On: March 22, 2008
Best part is when Edward was looking at Bella...oh yeah!
Author's Response: That was my favorite part, too. :)
Reviewer: jules cullen (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 08:26 PM · On: March 22, 2008
I love this story! I just read the first three chapters and I can't wait for the next one :) I think this is such a cool idea, and I love your writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: amyat (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 06:47 PM · On: March 22, 2008
Wow, I cannot believe how good this story is. You are an excellent writer, and you have constructed a great piece here. I like the way that you have incorporated the traits of the characters into it, but given it your own flair. I will anxiously await future chapters. Good Job!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 06:41 PM · On: March 22, 2008
Ahh! I can't wait to see what happens at dinner! XD
Author's Response: I hope it will meet your expectations. :)
Reviewer: wish_girl (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 05:59 PM · On: March 22, 2008
I love this! Can't wait til the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Angela Hale (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 04:54 PM · On: March 22, 2008
This story is wonderful.
Please update soon! =)
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: distelfink (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 04:40 PM · On: March 22, 2008
i really like the plot so far. i'm guessing jacob is gonna be back somewhere to cause some drama? if so, i love it.
Author's Response: Well, I can't definitively answer, but I can say that he does work at the house, so it is likely Bella will encounter him again.
Reviewer: VeronicaRed (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 04:26 PM · On: March 22, 2008
love it!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: marve (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 04:19 PM · On: March 22, 2008
Aw, I love pregnant Alice. Think of the shopping opportunitites!
Author's Response: Whoa. I honestly hadn't considered the shopping opportunities until you brought it up. I guess she is loving that aspect of pregnancy. I know that after feeling the baby kick, shopping was definitely my favorite part of pregnancy.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 04:01 PM · On: March 22, 2008
LOVED it!1 Left a review over at fanfic.net. Great job! Poor Bella trying to make sure she get's her story straight!! I loved edwards reaction to her new look!! It should be a very interesting dinner!!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 03:59 PM · On: March 22, 2008
It was short:-( But it was fun! I can only imagine all the problems that will ensue over Bella's ad-libbing!
Author's Response: Next chapter is longer, and so are the ones that follow.
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