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Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:03 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
i love this story, its really great.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: mickey2501 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:56 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
i love your story!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:54 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Excellent, of course! I love that they are getting to know each other. I think that she should go on his trip with him, but I will have to see what happens.
Author's Response: Thanks! Well, I don't think Haiti would be that much fun for Bella-- but they will go somewhere together before this story ends.
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:50 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
ooooooh! he likes her!!!! that scene with the waitress was cute. Like a twist off of SM's version. Good chapter. need more!!
Author's Response: Thanks! More in a few days.
Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:49 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Limona - I loved this chapter!!! Hearing Edwards POV and all of their interaction getting to know each other. I love how comfortable they have become. It was sooo good. And I like how you set up the swim session in the pool! What is she going to do for 2 weeks while he is away? Thanks for updating!! :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked the "getting to know you" part. And as for the two weeks he's away, that's fodder for chapter 7.
Reviewer: Marigold (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:45 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Aww, this was really sweet. I was hoping we'd be getting to their "first date" soon. It's progressing along nicely, and we've learned a little more about her. Please update again soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:44 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Ix-nay on the the dulled attraction, Edward! You are going to miss her "more than you'll ever know"! The more I read of this story the more I LOVE it! I'm looking forward to the day with Esme and Carlise and to the charity gala. Oh, limona, I don't want to be selfish but I do hope you are able to update soon ..... until then I will be waiting patiently.
Author's Response: It will go up in a few days. Thanks so much for reviewing :)
Reviewer: psych926 (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:40 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
So good . . . I loved their interaction on the 'get to know you' play dates. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:36 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
absence makes the heart grow fonder...
Author's Response: We'll have to wait and see...
Reviewer: fireonice1292 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:32 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
o god update like now!!!
Author's Response: Um, soon? Like Sunday? Maybe Saturday if people are really persuasive.
Reviewer: -le jen- (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:32 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
I'm Stalking You. I can't fully explain to you the gravity of the situation here. I'm lezzy crushing on ya. lol. nah, i'm kidding but i LOVE this story. HARD. and LONG. and THICK.
Author's Response: I think I will have no choice but to have you look over any sex scenes that make come from this story before they go up.
Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:27 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Fantastic! I'm enjoying Edward's perspective.
Author's Response: Thanks! He will get more POV, but not again until chapter 8.
Reviewer: twilighter_since_1901 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:27 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
aww poor bella !!
Reviewer: elana (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 07:25 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Love it. I especially love it that they have NOT declared their love during their first week. Too many fic have the instant love thing. I like this better!
Author's Response: I don't think I'm giving anything away by saying declarations of love are not immediately forthcoming.
Reviewer: allucinatoris (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 06:48 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
okay now i keep wondering what emmett told rosalie
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 11:57 AM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
I found your story today. Love it. Please update soon. I love the story line and the characters, but we need more please!
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 12:56 AM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
wow. this is a really awesome story. I love the plot. it's very creative, and reminds me of something Nora Roberts would write. I hope there will be some action scenes involving the Voultri or strange comepletely unvoltri related stalkers or something. either way, I totally love it. Please keep writing and stay with it till the end, but be sure to write a whole really big number of really long chapters. I love your writing style.
Author's Response: Thank you! Don't worry, I'm not planning to stop writing anytime soon. This next chapter is just taking longer than I thought it would. And yes, it will be a lot of chapters-- I think it is unavoidable.
Reviewer: jules cullen (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 08:59 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
Gahhhhhh update soon I LOVE this story :)
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 04:59 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
I love this fic. HARD
Author's Response: It loves you back. *kisses*
Reviewer: Edward Lives (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2008 12:57 PM · On: February 29, 2008
Hiding in Plain Sight is a very clever title. I really like this story. I'm wondering if you received inspiration for the title from the new television series that just ended it's pilot season, In Plain Sight. I actually thought that the TV show was the loosely the impetus for this story. If so, I think this was an excellent idea. If not, It's still awesome. Thanks for sharing your talents! I love this!
Author's Response: Nope, not the impetus, since I don't have time to watch TV. I didn't even realize there was a TV show with essentially the same title about the witness protection program... Now I'm going to have to check it out! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: Lena (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 02:24 AM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
I read this late last night and couldn't stop thinking about it! Part of my head is stuck in your world. Usually this would induce manic, take-over-everything reading but there's no more... it's very sad. One of the things I like about this is that regardless of whether this could really happen, you make it sound plausible and I don't get that yeah right feeling that sometimes comes with these types of plotlines. Where did you get the idea for this story/plotline?
Author's Response: The genesis of the idea for this story/plotline: I was reading yet another bad 'arranged marriage' fic on fanfiction.net. I have yet to find a good one, in part because it is just too implausible unless you set it in a different time, relate it to the mob, or put them in a different culture. But the dynamic of an arranged marriage was interesting to me-- the idea of two people being thrown together who don't know anything about each other but are expected to love each other. So I tried to replicate the dynamic in present time in a way that wouldn't make me roll my eyes or require writing a mob story (though I did consider writing a story where Edward and Bella were from different mob families, LOL). This is what I came up with. It's not 100% plausible, but I've tried to make it plausible enough so that people can suspend disbelief without getting a stomach ache. Thanks so much for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 11:53 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
Great chapter! I'm loving this fic so much, and was very excited to see the update. Darn her for running though! LOL I can sorta understand, but still a kiss would have been nice. LOL Can't wait for more, keep it coming! :D ~Cat~
Author's Response: I'm not sure if I would have kissed Edward or not, had I been Bella. I wonder.
Reviewer: KatieBelle (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 11:16 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
Awwww poor Bella, but who can blame her? lol. I love this story, and I don't mind waiting for the update. ;) However, I WILL be waiting. . .so. . .lol
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :) Hopefully the wait won't be too long, but chapter 5 is looooong and keeps getting longer. I may end up breaking it up. We'll see.
Reviewer: Rialle (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 03:29 PM · On: February 29, 2008
Oooh, this has been unerringly excellent so far! I love it so much that I've been skipping writing my own fanfic just to read yours :)
Author's Response: And I am happy to skip mine to read Seducing Ms. Swan. It is one of my faves. Thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 03:02 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
This is good! I wonder what emmett said to rose?? :) Keep up the awesome work!!!
Author's Response: I will address what Emmett said next time his POV rolls around. Thanks!
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