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Reviewer: cowza (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 09:48 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
I love this story. Stretch out the non-relationship tension for as long as you can, alright?
Author's Response: Don't worry, they're not going to jump into a relationship right away. Glad you're enjoying it. :)
Reviewer: rainpuddle13 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 09:47 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Oh, Edward, darling, you have no idea that you're already in love with Bella. It's going to hit you like a ton of bricks when the realization does come to you! Oh my, my. He's more than willing to slide down the slippery slope into the danger zone (and happiness he never could imagine before). Edward is completely swoonworthy. He's so sweet and thoughtful and lovely. I fear their settled routine is going to be shattered eventually, but I just know Edward will step up to protect Bella. Emmett is absolutely adorable. I love him! Thank you for writing such a lovely story. I absolutely love it! As always, I look forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks for your generous review. It is so nice that people finally are warming to Edward. Next chapter will be up probably this weekend.
Reviewer: elizabeth18 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 09:27 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Oh! I liked this! Good chapter! I loved the skanky waitress part, it was like the scene in the first book. By the way, have you seen the pics of that scene online? It is nothing like what I imagined. Oh well, I am still excited :-)
Author's Response: I haven't seen the pics of that scene. Now I am going to have to go look for them.
Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 09:25 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
YOU CAN WRITE!!!!! I just found and read your other story. What a great chapter. I love the brotherhood banter "Take the stick out of your butt." Could Bella be somewhat responsible for the friction and posturing? I loved some of Edward's lines "Bella and platonic were not at all compatible." YES!! And comparing himself to "the hunter who shot Bambi's mother." CUTE!!! Date nights, milkshakes, stars and a kiss on the neck, are lines being crossed?? I can't wait till they throw caution to the wind. I need to go turn up my air conditoning.
Author's Response: Glad to hear you are enjoying this story!
Reviewer: mintyfresh (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 09:23 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Lovin' it. Your pace is perfect and I like that Bella and Edward haven't fallen prey to the insta-love. It will be interesting to see the affect two weeks of separation will have on them...I hope you write quickly because I can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Insta-love is not this story. The next chapter is already written; it will go up in a few days. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: Kas_Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 09:16 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
This is wonderful! But something tells me two weeks without Bella are going to do anything BUT dull the attraction and give Edward perspective... Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I don't think Edward will lose interest in Bella in two weeks... but you never know.
Reviewer: bethann2103 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 09:11 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
This story is so awesome. I loved this chapter and how well they are getting along. the sexual tension is perfect for these two and I can't wait tos ee what happens. I keep hoping something will happen and she has to travel with him.
Author's Response: Remember they have a long time together before the trial. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 09:02 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
What a great chapter. I love them getting to know each other. More please soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will be up in a few days.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 09:01 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Love the story. Can't wait for another update.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. :)
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:57 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
OMG! I honestly love this story. I was so excited to see that you updated it!!! I really like the tention... very exciting! I hope you update again soon!!! :) Keep up the awesome job!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Reviewer: Belladonna75 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:54 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
I hear his resolve cracking....LOL Great update!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:52 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Edward is a smitten kitten and I LOVE IT!!! Sure dude, 2 weeks away is really going to help... pshaw.
Author's Response: I love that phrase, "smitten kitten."
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:52 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Poor Bella! I was wondering about her parents, but for her to have lost both of them. So sad. Edward's kind of a hoot - the whole playing pool/ass thing, not to mention preening in front of Bella, just tickled me for some reason. And Bella! How courageous of her to jump into his lap to get the waitress to back off! I liked it a lot, much better than her sulking or getting upset over it. Two weeks in Haiti, wow. I can't wait to see how Edward handles being without her.
Author's Response: Well, if she had parents, I can't imagine she could be away from them like this. And not having parents makes it easier for her to have the courage to testify. Glad you enjoyed Edward in this chapter.
Reviewer: sweeta8585 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:44 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
I totally love this story. It is just so different than other stories out there and I love the complexities of the characters! I can't wait till they go to the charity gala!! Post the next chapter soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! Charity gala is indeed next.
Reviewer: musicallydazzled (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:44 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
UPDATE QUICKER PLEASEE
Reviewer: DazzledMom (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:44 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
That chapter was well worth the wait! Just please don't make us wait like that again. This story is too good and I hate to come to the end of each chapter. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Hopefully the waits won't be too long. But the chapters do take time to write.
Reviewer: Mommyswanson (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:37 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
I'm loving your story!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:34 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Gah. You know how I feel about this, bb.
Author's Response: I do. Thank you.
Reviewer: vhartley (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:31 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
I love this story. So sweet - update soon please.
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tnuccio (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:21 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
What a great chapter, I wonder what Bella is thinking though all of this...
Author's Response: Ha, me too. Bella's POV picks up next chapter, but she is not going to recap much of this chapter. I have to keep the story moving.
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:18 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
That was good update soon
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:16 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
I wish I could play pool... I suck at it -_-' .. LOL!! but I always enjoy watching my friends play and teasing them so they wont concentrate "P! I loved this chapter cause your amking them get to know each other before something actually happens :D!! Can't wait for the next one!! :D
Author's Response: I love pool. :)
Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:15 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Brilliant chapter, as per usual. But one thing - what's with the moonroof? What is that? Really - moonroof? What a weird term...
Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:15 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Brilliant chapter, as per usual. But one thing - what's with the moonroof? What is that? Really - moonroof? What a weird term...
Author's Response: Maybe it is two words? A moon roof is like a sun roof on a car. Only it is glass so you can see through it without necessarily opening it to the cold night air.
Reviewer: sahara512 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 08:08 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
!!! more more more!!!
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing
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