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Reviewer: kerri03nwc (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 10:28 AM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Edward is so adorable :) I love reading from his perspective. Looking forward to reading more of the story!
Author's Response: I love Edward's POV, but he is harder to write than Bella. Edward's POV will come back for half of chapter 8.
Reviewer: obsidian (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 07:50 AM · On: March 24-27, 2008
write more. i'm addicted. i love this idea and where it's going.
Author's Response: glad you like it. :)
Reviewer: TheGodsCanDance (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 06:07 AM · On: March 24-27, 2008
NO! AH! I actually gasped and shook my head when I realised I had reached the end of the story so far....PAIN! Bloody hell this is FANTASTIC! Seriously well written stuff. I mean, the work you have put into this tale is just so damn evident. The characterisation is so well fleshed out and strongly founded, the writing flows brilliantly, the structure is involved and the drama is immediate and effective. To say I am HUGELY impressed is a woeful understatement. Amazing story. I am so damn honoured to have the opportunity to read this and share in it all. Thank you for all your efforts. It makes for such a fantastic story. I am completely smitten with so many aspects of it - Emmett and his quietly heroic nature... well, let's just say that I am with Bella on this one. Sigh.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your generous review. I have put a lot into this story and I am delighted people seem to be responding. And, I, too, am loving on Emmett. But he's married!
Reviewer: BethanyKnight (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 04:43 AM · On: March 24-27, 2008
loved it. the bambi thing had me laughing. can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Bella has such doe eyes, I couldn't resist a Bambi reference.
Reviewer: mindfreakchick (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 03:00 AM · On: March 24-27, 2008
keep up the great work ^_^ and I certainly hope they hook up soon, they are so cute and they obviously seem to get along really well! Can't wait for the next update 0:)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Ambushed (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 02:57 AM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Faster than normal?! That would really make my days better. I know this was only EPOV, but it seems that Bella isn't aware that he is becoming smitten. Love that!! He is being so good at the gentleman stuff. That will win Bella over even more, I think.
Author's Response: I love love stories. I'm glad I'm not the only one!
Reviewer: starsandthemoon (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 01:30 AM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Keep on dreaming Edward! Don't you know what they say about absence and the heart? Silly boy. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Elizabeth116 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 01:00 AM · On: March 24-27, 2008
I really enjoy this story, so much in fact that I have recommended it to multiple people. You do a fantastic job of building up their relationship, not rushing or forcing them into too much physicality too soon. You do just enough so that the attraction between them has become palpable but believable. I really enjoy how they both were protective and jealous in this chapter but how he doesn't acknowldege it as such. I can't wait to see where this goes, it really is an original plot line. I hope Edward's time away will make the heart grow even fonder :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing and for recommending. I put a lot into this story and I'm delighted people like it. As for Edward's time away... we'll have to see what happens.
Reviewer: wants_an_edward86 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 12:02 AM · On: March 24-27, 2008
OMG thank you for the long chapter....it wasamazing! I really like where their relationship is going...definitely sparks there! And i'm glad they're more relaxed and getting to know each other, you KNOW the hot and heavy stuff has to come soon enough :) Thanks for the update and please please post soon! (another long one too, i just get so damn addicted i don't want the story to stop)
Author's Response: You're welcome :) They're all about this long, I think. At least, I know chap 7 is longer than this one. I'm not sure about chapter 6. Post will go up this weekend.
Reviewer: Strix (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:54 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
oh he knows he'll miss her
Author's Response: but he's very good at self-deception.
Reviewer: Killerbunys (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:43 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Yum. I'm okay with waiting for chapters when they turn out this good. And a second soon? Sweet! I was thinking how much I loved your Emmett as I started reading this. Now I'm all mushy for Edward. Seriously, my heart got all fluttery. SQUEE!
Author's Response: Yay for Edward love! Though Emmett love is good too...
Reviewer: cocoajunkie (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:38 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Not enough, not enough! Want more! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: More coming this weekend.
Reviewer: cassandralee (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:34 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
I loved this chapter. It was good reading how they are getting to know each other. Simple and sweet. I don't think Edward should go to Haiti without Bella, but then again absence makes the heart grow fonder.
Author's Response: Edward and Bella will get a trip together at some point, and it will not be to a 3rd world country. Glad you liked the chapter. :)
Reviewer: ipunchedawerewolfintheface (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:32 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Phenomenal...although I'm sure you already knew that, seeing as you have 250 reviews for 5 chapters! I really enjoy the interactions between Edward and Bella. I love how they're getting to know each other, and the feel of the whole story is excellent. You're very talented. :D And I, for one, am ecstatic we will get more chapters quicker. Yay!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind review. I really love hearing from everyone and I try to respond to everybody, but I think this might be the last chapter I can. I hope you like the coming chapters as much as you liked this one. :)
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:16 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Limona, just wanted to say that I love that chapter! Great job. Love how they are slowly but surely getting to know each other. Loved how Bella made him dinner and how Bella got irritated with the flirtatious waitress and how Edward was trying to shield her from the men at the bar! Love how he comforted her when she talked about her parents. Cannot wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I almost cut the cooked dinner scene, so I am glad you liked it.
Reviewer: kaypgirl (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:13 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
"Two weeks without Bella would surely dull the attraction and give me perspective." Somehow I doubt that that will happen. I loved Edward in this chapter, trying not to fall but falling anyways.
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:13 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
My god, this is a fucking wonderful story so far! How the hell am I going to sleep tonight, knowing there are more chapters? I won't, I guess! *Claps* This is such a great plot!!!!!
Reviewer: greenk08 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 11:08 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
I love this story! Please update soon!!
Author's Response: I'll update this weekend. Thanks!
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 10:56 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Hee. Sure, Bella in a ball dress, then two weeks of obsessing over her and wanking to all the images in his head. It's in the dictionary right next to perspective... I love how this story is going!!
Author's Response: The charity gala will be Bella's POV. Your review made me laugh.
Reviewer: Lady Saffir (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 10:54 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Love the way you're building their friendship, as well as tossing in a bit of lust and attraction. Can't wait to see how Bella does at the charity and how they both do with Edward's parents.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: sweetnsassy (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 10:18 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Wow!!! Truly awesome chapter. I just LOVE the way you write!! I've been waiting for you to update and this chapter was worth the wait. I love the way you're slowly developing things between them. I love the way you've molded your characters. Your story is riveting and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you thought this one was worth the wait. I re-wrote it several times trying to get it right.
Reviewer: katdan2003 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 10:14 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
What if Bella goes to Haiti with Edward??? I would love to read that chapter (s). love the whole story ....post again soon!!!
Author's Response: I don't think it is giving anything away to say Bella is not going on *this* trip.
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 10:05 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
omg the tension between those two...woo hooo. i cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: glad you liked it! :)
Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 09:58 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
mmm mmm good.
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 09:58 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Wonderful chapter. I like that you are showing the chinks in Edward's armor, but not making him unrealistically change everything just because Bella walked into his life. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm going for character evolution over time.
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