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Reviewer: LoveEqualsEDWARD (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:41 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Holy shit this just got 5-fire-alarm juicy!!! I'm gonna be waiting for the next update like a dog in heat!
Author's Response: okay, your review made me smile. Thanks :)
Reviewer: BethanyKnight (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:40 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
evil. you are fucking evil, you know that right? geez. don't you fucking dare have her lose her virginity to Jacob. don't dare you even think about it. obvisouly, I'm a very strong Team Edward and Jacob Hater. hell, I wouldn't have minded if jake died. please, just fix this. and update soon so I'm not agonizing over this. please. go Alice!!!
Author's Response: I'm trying to get the update in for Sunday. Hopefully I'll have plenty of time to work on polishing the chapter tomorrow. As you can imagine, I want the next chapter to be perfect.
Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:05 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
You have to come back and SOON! I'm happy that Bella has a friend in Jacob but I can't see how they're going to fix this. I mean, Edward will be pissed that his reputation is in shambles, Alice will tell Rose and neither of them will ever forgive her for "cheating" on Edward. Then of course, Emmett will be dissappointed because they're doing her this great big favor trying to keep her alive and she's putting it all at risk and embarassing Edward. I understand her point of view though, she doesn't think she'd ever be good enough for Edward and she doesn't wanna die a virgin, I'd be all over Jacob if I was her! I looooooooove this story! Come back soon!
Author's Response: We don't know how everyone will react until it happens, and that's all I can say without giving too much away.
Reviewer: tnuccio (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 01:44 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
stupid ass Bella....Jake is a jerk...sorry he just rubs me the wrong way and he comes off arrogant...
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 01:42 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Okay... this chapter was as hard to get through as New Moon, for me. :( Sorry, can't stand all the Jacob/Bella stuff. I mean, I love Jacob, and I love him being BFF's with Bella, but I can't stand to read so much about it. SORRY! lol I know it's important to the fic if you wrote it, but that doesn't make it any easier to read. I want my Edward back!! LMAO Love that Alice caught them (subsequently stopping her from losing her virginity to anyone other than Edward -I hope! :D LOL), and I can't wait to see what comes of that. How Bella explains herself to get Alice to forgive her, or if she even does. As always, I can't wait for the next one! This fic is addicting! Keep the great chapters coming! :) ~Cat~
Author's Response: I appreciate that you hated the Jakeness. On the bright side, this chapter was way shorter than New Moon. And Edward's coming back from Haiti next chapter.
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 01:25 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: anovelgirl (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2008 01:19 PM · On: February 29, 2008
You. Are. Evil. Plain and simple. Alice better listen or the Volturi won't have anything on your readers...ok mostly me :) WONDERFUL JOB as always!!
Reviewer: HeartofLife (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 01:04 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
/me whines: SUNDAY!!! I CANT WAIT FOR SUNDAY... I want pitch a fit Edward. I want totally broken inside Edward...
Reviewer: Lili Psique (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 12:53 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Oooohh..... I really love Jake, but I'm so sad for Edward now!!! What he'll think about her?!?!?!?! I can't wait for the next! Great fic! XD
Reviewer: mindfreakchick (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 12:51 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
What?!?!? How can you leave it like that? Making Bella look reeeeeally bad, and I mean seriously... with Jake?? Anyways, I certainly hope Alice doesn't say anything to Edward and gives Bella the chance to explain. :S Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter 0:)
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 12:45 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Oh, limona, what is going to happen now? I can understand why Bella would want a friend but why did she have to tell Jake everything? Is she not putting the Cullen family in jeapardy for hiding her? I know that Edward is cold and distant in this story but he doesn't deserve this. If Jacob feels scorned is he going to blow the cover? Is Alice justified in calling Edward (I have a brother it would be hard not to!)? How will Edward take the news? Questions - questions! This story is wonderful! And I am still pulling for Bella to win Edwards heart!
Author's Response: Lots is going to happen now. That's the short answer. Stay tuned for chapter 8. :)
Reviewer: jules cullen (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 12:40 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
whhhaatttttt. bring back edward!!
Reviewer: ApplesForEve (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 12:33 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
great chapter as always! the more i read this story, the more i seriously love the concept you have come up with! i can see bella's reasoning and i cannot wait to see the fall out from it. i'm a sucker for the drama!
Reviewer: blondie (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 12:21 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Oh, I think it was a great cliffhanger! Great job - can't wait til Sunday. blondie
Author's Response: Thanks! I think you're in the minority with liking the cliffhanger. :)
Reviewer: nina (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 12:16 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
You covered alot of material in this chapter. Poor Bella, she finally has a measure of peace and she gets caught by Alice. Thank goodness she got caught but it could have been Emmett who caught her! I hope she can explain her situation to Alice and that Alice will still love her. I've always liked Jacob because he loves Bella, but his affections are misplaced. I know it is Bella and Edward who are the two making out in the sexy picture on your banner, right? Oh, it would be just fine if she marries Edward and fulfills her dream of waiting before the hot and heavy. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: If Emmett had caught her, the whole thing would have been a non-issue. Yes, this is a BxE fic.
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 12:05 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Oh shit.. Edward is sooo not going to forgive her is he??!!! please plase update sunday!! im beging u!
Reviewer: cassandralee (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 12:01 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
ugh..... I can't believe it, and we have to wait until Sunday! When is Edward coming back? I hope its soon.
Author's Response: Edward will be back in chapter 8, which is the next chapter.
Reviewer: Twilighter 4 Life (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:43 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Ahhh! wtf Jake is the one that needs to hide under a rock and never come out! Stupid Bella. I cannot wait for Sunday...I miss Edward
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:38 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
NOOOO!!! Quite the cliff-hanger....
Reviewer: mistydawn (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:30 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Sunday!? *humpf* i guess I'll have to wait till then.
Reviewer: TwilightChicky (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:09 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Poor Alice! And what is Bella thinking? We KNOW what Jake was thinking, but Bella should know that this will hurt Edward. Can't wait for him to come back. That will be an "interesting" reunion. But Sunday? That's a long way away...
Reviewer: -le jen- (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:06 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
I wanted to come backand leave you love because i know that there have to be alot of people TRYING to rip you a new one. THIS IS HOW SOMEONE IN THIS SITUATION WOULD NORMALLY REACT. think about it. let all other crap aside. Fuck, i'd screw jake.
Author's Response: <3 Thank you.
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:01 AM · On: February 29, 2008
Oh Crap.Crap,Crap,Crap. I know that they really arent enganged but the family thinks so and then Edward will find out and Bella will get in trouble because Jacob and he might have to Tell Alice the secret so she wont tell the family.But she probebly might tell Jasper okay too many problems to solve update sooon
Reviewer: midsummerstars (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:01 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
OOooh! No rock hiding!! You just made things VERY interesting! Go you! :)
Author's Response: Oh, I'm hiding, all right. You're in the minority, I think. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:45 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
WHAT!!!!
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