OOooh! No rock hiding!! You just made things VERY interesting! Go you! :)

Author's Response: Oh, I'm hiding, all right. You're in the minority, I think. Thanks for reviewing. :)

This time I agree with you. You should go hide under a rock. How could you?! Ok, let me phrase that better...How could Bella?! I am really missing Edward so he'd better be back next chapter and in not too good of a mood. I'm really hoping for some fireworks which will hopefully lead to some dramatic emotions being shown by Bella and Edward. I was surprised, however, that when she was thinking about people to lose her virginity with she thought of Jake and Emmett but not Edward.

Author's Response: I think she pictures as Edward as out of reach. Not in her league. Not interested in her. Jake IS interested. Is it really so hard to believe she would think of him as she was mentally falling apart?

I like that one of the things on her list was about facing down fear.  Nice.

Oh....and the plot thickens.  Poor, hurt, Alice.  I hope she understands.

I'm also hoping Edward kills Jacob, but that's just me.  Okay, kill is a strong word.  Beats the snot out of him and throws him off the property?  Yeah, yeah, I'm sure Jacob is not a bad guy, but he's taking advantage of his situation.

 

Author's Response: Edward is not going to kill Jacob. Fire him, maybe. We'll have to see.

I knew it was Alice!! I cannot belive that cliffhanger. Bella now has to tell Alice the truth or she has to tell Edward about her 'lose my virginity' plan. Anyone would understand that. I do. And as much as I want Edward and Bella together it doesn't bother me that she chose Jake.  She trusts him, there is no way she would ask Edward to do her that kind of favor. Great chapter Limona! Looking forward to Sunday! :)

Author's Response:

You were totally right. You were the first one to guess it right.

And thanks for liking this chapter... I did work hard on it, even if most people disliked it. 

Holy crap balls! 

Kudos to Bella for saying to heck with it and going for it with Jake.  I would have done the same thing:-)  But to go for it in Edward's house???  Oh Bella... this isn't going to end well...

I don't even know what to say about this chapter.  I liked the list idea, but I have mentally taken Jacob to the vets office and have scheduled him to be neutered!!

Alice and Bella how sad :(

Author's Response: Your neuter comment made me laugh. I'm not sure what that says about me. This story will not end tragically because I am kind of a sucker for a happy ending, so keep that in mind.

So, I think that Bella's decision with Jake is perfect.

Some people might call it "out of character" for her to want to have sex in Edward's house, after everything he's done, but...

It's realistic- AND I LOVE IT. Outside of fanfic world, people are dynamic. They don't act the same all the time. They are spontaneous. Especially when they live in a pressure cooker like Bella is. SO GO YOU.

Author's Response: Bless you. I will frame this revivew.

oh my goodness.  this is crazy.  stupid man whore Jacob. 

so, who went to their computer when they woke up cause they knew there would be an update? yeah, i know. PATHETIC. anyway.

"what if i die after meeting the love of my life? i hate to force that sort of wish on hypothetical him"

bella's wish to lose her virginity- so realistic.

the buildup to the incident with jake was great. very convincing, didn't feel contrived at all. sometimes, you can tell writers just want something to happen and throw it in there. you made this work. it was beautiful.

i am not mad at bella at all. this is a horrible situation for her to be in. AND I LOVE EDWARD and usually hiss when i see jake. now, i'm mad at alice for calling her a slut. she better learn that bella's a witness. GOOD SHOW.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. After all the reviews telling me Bella is OOC, I'm grateful you thought I built it up okay. This chapter will definitely make the next chapters more interesting, so hopefully people will realize that at some point.

Ooooohhhh, Bella is in trouble now! I cannot wait to read Edward's reaction. Is he gonna be all "what about the reputation" or "how could you do this to me?!" or both.

I love the kissing.

And good lord.

 

I didn't know that it would be taken that far dude.

like if Alice didn't walk in. Holy fack.

 

Christina. <3

 

totes. 

Author's Response: Hey, if you're gonna do something, you can't do it by halves.

OH MY FREAKING GOD! Gah! I just NEED to know what happens next. And this is really awesome, love it to no end. Please Please Please update sooooon! Pleasse!!