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Reviewer: maddaq (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 09:26 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
I don't know if I can wait that long!! How is she going to convince Alice?? Will she stay away from Jacob? Will she and Edward realize that they are meant for each other? To many questions!! I would love you forever and ever and ever if you would update sooner than next weekend.
Author's Response: I can't answer any of those questions, but thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 09:18 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
EXCELLENT!!! I was really worried that Edward would be pissed enough to kick her out without a thought. I am very happy that he decided to hear her out and keep her around. I also am very happy with the offer!! Now, if only Alice will forgive her so we can get to the lovin!!
Author's Response: I'm not sure it will be easy to win over Alice.
Reviewer: distelfink (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 09:11 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
whoa eveyrthing just changed! oh please let alice forgive bella in the next chapter. i love the sexual tension! maybe someone will act on it next chapter?
Author's Response: Alice is on tap for the next chapter.
Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 09:03 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
"If you don't take out the cork correctly, it will make a popping sound and surprise the wine." i laughed so hard at this. oh edward, you can surprise my wine. so, i know this won't seem like a compliment- but i like that your alice isnt all peaches and cream. i'm highly annoyed that she told the whole damn family. and its not just out of bella loyalty that i feel that way. the action seems like a drama queen move done by a woman who needs to get regular business hours. sometimes, the constantly perfect alice gets old.
Author's Response: I swear up and down, that is the tripe they told me in France in wine seminar I suffered through-- "surprise the wine." Honestly, I couldn't taste the difference, but the guy swore he could. I have always seen Alice as a bit of a drama queen-- and she is very pregnant and hormonal right now. She was ostensibly worried about Edward's state of mind.
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 08:51 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
Edward IS a hypocrite! how dare he: " She didn't have a reputation. Bella didn't technically exist." althought that is true it doesn't give him the right to humiliate her in public. She is still a human beign who he's using as arm candy, and yeah she is using him as well.. and he does have a point. Bella should try to open up to Edward... they would be so lovely together... I hope Alice forgives Bella just cause I want some bella/edward sexin... LOL!! great chapter!! :D !!!
Author's Response: I KNEW that line would get you. :) Glad you liked the chapter.
Reviewer: elphabacy35 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 08:29 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
Oh my goodness, I hope they have sex soon. The tension is KILLING me!
Author's Response: I bet you secretly like the tension.
Reviewer: metronomeradio (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 08:27 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
God I love this fic. This chapter was especially awesome- great handling of the fall-out and setting something great up.
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: psych926 (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2008 08:10 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
Ah we have to wait a whole week? We're just getting to the good stuff
Author's Response: Well, I thought everyone would want a cliffhanger resolution earlier rather than me waiting until Wednesday to post this chapter...
Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2008 07:53 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
Yes! That is exactly how I wanted it to happen. Of course I wanted them to then fall passionately right into bed, but hey there has to be some plot twists, so I’ll live. You are such a tease by the way.
Author's Response: I'm only a tease if I don't eventually deliver. Glad you liked the chapter.
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 07:53 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
Woooohoooooo! What a roller coaster. God, I love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 07:33 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
Loved it! I am curious at what some of your reviewers said that prompted a A/N like the one you started with. I love how the two of them are real...even Edward...his POV was awesome. Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: I think some people thought this would be a fluffy story and were very upset that Bella is not as moral as she started out. I just wanted to clear the air-- I never claimed it would be fluffy or moral. Also, I got a slew of people asking me if it was a BxJ story or a love triangle story, so I wanted to clarify that. Glad you liked Edward's POV, I really struggled with whether it added to the chapter or not.
Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 07:24 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
a weeeeeeeeeeeeeeek..... nooooooooooooo! Edward is kind of a hot jerk. It made me mad that he added that last condition to his offer (mad at him not at you).
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: Singer1940 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 07:20 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
I'm sorry, but Bella is one dumb idiot! I have no words to say how stupid she is and I almost want to stop reading this if she continues to be that stupid. But, I want to know if she can redem herself, so I'm going to keep reading. I hope that if my life were in danger like hers, I wouldn't disrespect myself and the ones helping me by doing something like that...
Author's Response: I know, I know. We'll get back in Bella's head next chapter. I think that will help. Or maybe not. I'm not sure which transgression of Bella's you're referring to.
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2008 06:58 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
WOO HOO!! I love that you are playng out the relationship more, letting them talk and argue a bit rather than having Bella keep it all inside her head. I am so excited and can't wait for next weekend!
Author's Response: glad you liked it. This is a BxE story... we'll definitely be seeing more BxE as the story progresses.
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 06:51 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
Awesome chapter! Love that they didn't argue too much about what happened, there wasn't a lot of screaming, so that was good. LOVE the offer he made her!! *squee* LOL And love that she's accepted it. Can't wait to see how she earns Alice's forgiveness. I don't see any way she can unless she tells her the truth, so it should be interesting. I'd also love to see B and E talk about the Tanya incident more. Man, I don't know if I can wait a whole week for the next chapter! That's gonna be killer! LOL LOVIN' this fic! Keep up the amazing job! :D ~Cat~
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. I hope this chapter made up for the previous cliffhanger. And Bella cannot tell Alice the truth.
Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 06:50 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
I liked the mad Edward. Not to mention the post-workout one....
Author's Response: I like almost all the Edwards, I think.
Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 06:49 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
i loved the opening of the wine :)
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 06:18 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
I love watching hot waiters open a bottle of wine... it is sexy! Wine tasting in Napa is even better b/c they have to open lots of bottles. Not everyone can work a wine key. A tear actually escaped my eye when he finally noticed the evidence of her broken condition. And yes, he's going to hell... "I'll bang you if you can find a way to make-up with Alice." What a jerk. (I love him) And I love that Rose has to wait longer for her vacation. :-) Totally unrelated... Mergers? Any forthcoming updates??
Author's Response: The bottle opening might have been my favorite part of this chapter. I know, he's kind of being a jerk. But he's just angry, and he and Bella don't know each other that well yet.. He won't be angry forever. Do you really love that Rose has to wait for her vacation? Doesn't that woman deserve some fun? Merger update will be after I finish chapter 10 of this story. Chapter 10 is a big chapter, and I would be lying if I said I was going to lose momentum on this story to work on that one before I finish chapter 10.
Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 05:59 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
This was great! I loved it. What a great thing to wake up to first thing in the morning. :) I figured he'd be upset and I was hoping...well you fulfilled my hopes and then some. The tension in the air was great. I was expecting maybe a heated kiss but for him to offer...well that was just better than expected. Seeing both of their POV's was nice, especially with this chapter. We really needed to see where each of them stood at this point. You did a nice job explaining why Bella hadn't considered Edward for her little plan (thank you). As always I can't wait for the next chapter and I'm glad to hear your only about 1/4 done. I'm not near ready for this fic to end. :)
Author's Response: What a great first review for this chapter to receive. I'm still pretty nervous about what people will say about it, so I'm delighted you liked the chapter. I was going to save all the Edward POV for chapter 10 (that's his chapter), but I think it worked better seeing it from both sides for this chapter. It's been a while since we've heard from Edward. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: polaris (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 07:50 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Hello! Your newest fan wanted to write a review after getting very little sleep because she stumbled across this marvellous story. I don't know why everyone's going all 'Bella stupid, Bella annoying, Bella sucks' on the chapter. I think her actions are perfectly justified, I mean. Come. On! Edward leaves her at home (aka prison) to go on a lengthy trip (TWO WEEKS?), what is she supposed to do? Cut out all human contact? Brood alone in the house till she dies? Dig herself a hole and live in it? I don't think so. I can relate to how she's feeling. She's very thankful toward Edward for everything he's done, but she still wants to preserve a part of herself, which is something Jake can offer. With Edward she is living a fabrication of herself. With Jake, she's honest. However, her non-attraction to Jake is working in his favor... But Tanya isn't exactly helping the situation. (Grrr, Edward, you ditched your supposed-to-be fiancee). I'm sensing Edward's going to go O.J. in the next chapter. Hopefully, Bella's going to stand up and say what's on her mind. Wow, my review is getting long, so I guess I'll just shut up now. And before people start throwing rocks at me, I just wanted to say that I do hope Edward ends up with Bella, but now's not the moment. Because now I think he's kaka. There I've said it. You're kaka Edward. Your newest fan, Miss P PS: I'm a little surprised Emmett leaves her without "supervision" for two weeks. The Volturi are after her. The Volturi! PS again, last one, I promise: Please update your story soon (and I'll give you Halloween candies), I'll be checking your fanfic very often :-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. Emmett did NOT leave her-- he's having the house covertly watched. I wasn't clear at all about this. Rosalie thought they were leaving for vacation 4/3/08, but Emmett didn't want to leave Bella until after Edward came home, so he was dreading telling Rose he postponed their trip. I looked over my writing when someone else brought this up and realized I was unclear. The next chapter will go up Sunday or possibly tomorrow, depending. It just needs a little polish. You can always visit the thread for this story on the forums and say hi... I put up the teaser for chapter 8 earlier today.
Reviewer: Rialle (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 01:46 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
AHAHAHAHAHAA YOU ARE SO RIDICULOUSLY AWESOME! :D I LOVED this chapter! Seriously, I love the twist with Jake and Alice and all of that. What can I say? I'm an absolute sucker for Jacob Black. 'He had a rocking bod. Like smoking hot.' DAMN RIGHT HE DOES! :P Awesome chapter, well done! <33
Reviewer: Goo82 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 12:26 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
OH COME ON!!!!!!! Update faster!
Reviewer: metronomeradio (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 06:40 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Evil, but wonderful :)
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: Blue25 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 04:50 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Well, this chapter took an unexpected turn. Bring back Edward! Please!
Author's Response: Don't worry, he is coming back.
Reviewer: Edward Lives (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2008 03:16 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Uhhh. Dang it. Why do you have to just end like that? I get tired of being left hangin'. Bella's and idiot.
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