Uhhh. Dang it. Why do you have to just end like that? I get tired of being left hangin'. Bella's and idiot.

DARN IT!! you are evil!! i cant wait to see what happens. i knew this would not turn out well.

*chants* Edward, Edward, Edward! :) Run Alice, run! Call him already!!!

Lovely story you have here. Has me cursing at the computer screen. :)

Can't wait for more.

Oh no! I can't believe she was making out with Jacob! I hope Edward gets incredibly jealous! And possibly does something about it. Update again soon! Love your story!

Uh oh.  Guess the poo's gonna hit the fan now.

You've given so much depth to Bella, and have really captured how difficult this situation would have to be for her.  Her whole life is a charade, and lying to everyone all the time about everything would seriously have to just eat away at you.   

I smirk at the thought of Alice catching Bella with "the gardener", even though I know it's going to cause drama and possibly some hurt feelings.  The idea of the bored, rich housewife fooling around with the help is just so hilarious! 

Author's Response: You might be the only person who caught the funny angle of that one.

Before I scream in agony that you left off the chapter there, I just wanted to tell you how much I love this story and how great a writer you are!

And I love Jacob and everything but not like that. But I respect you as an author and know it'll be B/E in the end so just wanted to let you know!

Update soon, thanks!

Author's Response: Don't scream in agony. Edward is coming home soon. Thanks so much for your kind review.

Oh no!

...Not one of my favorite chapters, but it's ok, you don't have to hide under a rock. :-) I'm a little frustrated at the situation as I read because Bella has every right to befriend Jacob and she has every right to want to experiance life since she thinks she will die soon. That being said, I can't help but feel annoyed with her. Haha. I wish she had let Edward jump off the diving board with her (if only he had been home) and I'm so glad she didn't have a chance to sleep with Jacob. I feel so bad for her though because in all reality, there is nothing wrong with her relationship with Jake. But now Alice knows and she doesn't realize that Bella is not really engaged to her brother...it's turning into a big mess. I'm really excited for the next chapter because I'm assuming that Edward will be back. Yay! =] I missed him. lol. I wonder if his presence will help Bella sleep better? *sigh* I think it would be impossible to have a nighmare if Edward Cullen was in your house. :-P Anyway, I wanted to tell you how excited I was to check my e-mail and see that this story had been updated. I wasn't expecting it until Sunday so I was very excited to see it today. It really did turn my bad day into a good one.  This chapter was really good. Exciting, surprising, well written, you name it. I am enjoying this story so much and I can't wait until the next chapter. You're doing a wonderful job so keep up the good work! :)

 -Christy

Author's Response:

You are the first person to comment on Bella's sleeping issues. We'll have to see if she sleeps better with or without Edward.

YES, Edward is back next chapter. 

Thanks so much for your thoughtful review; I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.  

I'm pretty sure you'd better find an inconspicuous rock as well. How could you DO this to us???

I don't know if I can manage until Sunday.

Eugh. I love Alice though. All this rambling about business hours? Maye a little overdone, but beautifully hilarious.

Author's Response: You know, I think of Alice as a little overdone. Hopefully it wasn't too overdone. Her POV was fun to write.

Awesome.

 

Amazing.

 

I will set my fangirls on those that give you crap, Christina. 

Author's Response: Ha. This is the first time ever I'm not trying to review to every review. I appreciate the fangirl offering.

Why would she tell anyone? Sex in Edward's house with the one man that he wanted her to stay away from? Poor Bella. Love the story.

Nooooooo!  The angst meter just went wayyyyyy up.  Can't decide if I should clap or bite my nails! ;)

 

I worry about the Laptop being accessed by the cleaning staff.  I worry about Jacob's ability to keep the secret.  I worry that Bella will NOT loose her virginity to Edward.  Worry worry worry.  Yay!  It's fun to worry over a story like this.  Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. I think you worry as much as I do, and that is saying something.

Oh MAN!!  We have to wait til Sunday??  This story is too good to have to wait.  I'm glad Alice stopped them though.  I can't wait to hear Edward and Bella's conversation.  Will she tell him why she was with Jake?  ARGH!!!  I need to know what happens!