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Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 09:45 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
Fantastic job keep goin'
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: sethlover (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 09:43 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
i rellay love the fact bella's got different secrets with everyone of them this is great, keep writing & please update soon
Author's Response: Bella is getting into a bit of a tangled web, isn't she? Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: espeinaz (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 09:42 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
Awwwww! I'm glad they finally made up! Edward and Bella need to have sex NOW!
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 09:36 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
Damn, I love Rose! I really like how you wrote her in this chapter :) I'd love to get some of Emmett's POV from the time he walked in finding Bella at their place and especially during the drive home :)
Author's Response: You know, I almost switched to Emmett's POV for that part but it made the chapter too choppy. Don't worry, Emmett has some pieces coming up after he gets back from vacation.
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 09:15 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
No! Don't stop there! I'm dying here! *sigh* I guess I can wait for Edward's reaction. And why is he avoiding her?
Author's Response: We'll find out why he's avoiding her next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2008 09:14 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
Woohoo they get to do it! Is is so wrong that i am counting down to this like a kid counts down to christmas morning? I really liked Rosalie in this, not something I am used to doing. I adore all things Edward, but he really does need to be brought down a peg. I want to see him begging!
Author's Response: You're not the only one counting down, lol. Edward gets all of chapter 10, so that should be fun.
Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 09:08 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
Oh, the awesomeness that is Rosalie. She's so much more in a good fanfic than I really every got of her in the books. I'm both glad and a little surprised that Alice and Bella hugged already!*chortles* Edward's going to be in an interesting position, now that his caveat is adhered to.
Author's Response: She didn't get a whole lot of personality in the books... mostly just bitchiness. I figure she can afford to be generous with Bella in this story because, unlike in the books, in this story she has everything she's always wanted. She has Emmett, she has kids, she has status. No need to feel threatened by mousy Bella.
Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 09:04 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
oh, and i loved Rosalie in this story!!! I usually cant stand her, but shes so much fun in this story!
Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 09:02 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
Edward better not be sleeping around on her!! i doubt he is. he better not be!
Author's Response: we'll find out next chapter. thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 09:01 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
I'm so delighted to see Rose taking matters into hand. I want to beat Alice with a snottylittlegirl! stick, as soon as she delivers. Edward needs someone to surgically remove the self-rightousdildo! stick from his arse, and then he needs to pay. Slowly. I know Alice is everyone's favorite, and pregnant, but she really is getting on my nerves a little. See, this is a sign about how wonderful and real everyone is in this story, and how well it is written. I kevtching about them like they're my in-laws!! Thanks for a great story.
Author's Response: lol - "self-righteousdildo! stick" cracked me up. Alice is not everyone's favorite after this chapter. She's getting hammered in the reviews. I feel sorry for her. Glad you liked the story!
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:58 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
OMG! you made it! you did it! you made Alice talk to Bella!!!and without Bella spilling any secrets!! you are amazing!!! I can't wait to see how Edward reacts to this... Please tell me Edward wasn't with other women in those "late meetings" he was wasnt he??!! that bastard! please please update soon!
Author's Response: I can't tell you what Edward was doing... but everyone is assuming the worst about him. Poor guy. Glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: justagirl (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:58 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
Aw, this chapter was too short. Aside from that, I loved this. I really enjoyed the Rosalie/Bella interaction :) Thought it would have been interesting to see some more Emmett/Bella interaction as he took her home, though... Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: I think this was the longest chapter. I meant to put in the Emmett/Bella bit, but the chapter was getting too long.
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:54 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
I love this chapter. The only critique I have is that I think that Alice needed to find out about Edward kissing Tanya because that would make her go batty on Edward - who totally deserves to have his family gang up on him right now. Can't wait to see what you do next.
Author's Response: I think you'll enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: manyafandom (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:53 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
Ha with the psych out. We all thought is was Alice but it was Rosalie. I love that Rosalie is helping Bella and that she seems to see through all the bullshit. Love that Edward is avoiding her and maybe spending time with Tanya. And that Alice and Bella have tentively made up. Great Job Limona.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, even if I didn't reveal it was Rose talking in the teaser. I wanted it to be a surprise when Rose called.
Reviewer: mytwilightaddiction (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:52 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
great chapter...gotta luv rosalie:]
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:51 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
yeah! no edward finally needs to come home. bella hates being avoided.
Author's Response: Edward gets all of chapter 10, and he'll definitely spend time with Bella.
Reviewer: elana (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:42 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
You write a great Rosalie! Next chapter soon???? I really missed the Edward/Bella sexual tension in this chapter.
Author's Response: It's gonna be a little while on the next chapter... I am celebrating my anniversary this weekend. But chapter 10 is all Edward, so I think people will like it.
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:41 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
"Rosalie was a freight train without brakes" Truer words have never been written - I wouldn't want to get on Rosalie's bad side - wow, she is vindictive, but very good at reading the situation! I can't want to see whst she has planned for Bella to get the upper hand on Edward - which she very much needs to do, he does need to be taken down a notch or two ;)
Author's Response: We won't see Rose's plans until after Isle Esme... where she and Emmett are going to spend a couple of weeks. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:41 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
SQUEEE! A new chapter and what a wonderful chapter it is!!! Rosalie is my new favourite woman! Damn! Like Bella thought, she's like a freight train without brakes. LOL! I am kinda miffed at Edward for avoiding her like that. I understand why he's doing it, but she told him how lonely (and depressed) she'd been while he was gone and he just continues ignoring her once he returns.*tsks* I laughed at Emma showing Bella all over the house, including Emmett & Rosalie's closet. And Bella cringing and asking Rosalie not to give her a mental image of Rose & Emmett gettin' it on. *snort* Fantastic chapter! I can hardly wait for the next one. :D
Author's Response: Edward has his reasons... which we will find out in chapter 10. Glad you enjoyed this chapter! :)
Reviewer: Singer1940 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:39 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
Okay, this is turning around nicely. Not that I can tell you wat to do with your story, but the less Jacob yuckiness, the better. (In my opinion, at least.) At least it makes her look less like a "loose woman" for lack of a better phrase. I still can't believe you had her about to "do the deed" with Jacob in Edward's house! That's what got me so fired up during the last chapters. It was just so wrong. Edward's basically putting his and his family's lives in danger by being associated with Bella and that's how she repays him? Anyway, this chapter was sooooo much better! Can't wait to see what Rosalie has in store for Edward...
Author's Response: Bella's not a saint, no, but Edward isn't either. We won't see Rosalie for a couple of weeks, since she is going to Isle Esme for a much needed vacation. Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Reviewer: kaypgirl (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:38 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
Damn, I was really wanting Edward to show up in this chapter, but all we get is his avoidence and a phone call.
Author's Response: He gets the whole next chapter.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:35 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
Rosalie was the impetus to make the peace...who would've thought! Well, your brilliant mind since you are the creator. I love the way this all took place...now Edward had better get his ass home to complete his side of the deal! Though I am a bit miffed at him for always leaving Bella alone at night...is he cheating on her with anyone? Please tell me no. Great story!
Author's Response: I can't tell you what Edward's been doing. But his POV gets all of chapter 10, so we'll find out then. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: elfarmy (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:34 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
love it. please update soon.
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can. :)
Reviewer: sweetnsassy (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:33 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
WoooHOOOO!!! I had no idea how you were going to manage that but I love the way it all worked out with Rose helping Bella obtain Alice's forgiveness! Now I REALLY can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: iheartnj (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 08:32 PM · On: February 29, 2008
I Loved Loved Loved this chapter!!! I was so happy when I logged on and found that you had updated!! Looking forward to Edward's reaction!
Author's Response: Thanks! Bella needed a friend. Edward gets next chapter, so we'll see what he thinks of everything.
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