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Reviewer: rainbowjellyfish (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:04 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

Very nice---looking forward to more!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 03:32 PM · On: February 29, 2008

When are you updating?? I'm starting to get the shacks! I need my fix! :)

Author's Response: I'm updating this week. Sorry it has taken so long, I've been sick for a week. It has sucked and I'm not done writing the chapter yet.

Reviewer: kamce (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 05:36 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

I just read your ENTIRE story in one sitting!! I just couldn't stop!

Its amazing! I LOVE the length of the chapters!

It written, wonderfully!! I can't wait for an update!

p.s. Just like in the original Twilight....I DONT LIKE JACOB!! lol

Reviewer: TwilightFan2010 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 11:40 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008


Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 09:18 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

I want more!!!  SO good!

Reviewer: ErikaLR (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 07:56 PM · On: February 29, 2008

I have to admit I am not a big fan of all human stories, at all. This is the first I have enjoyed, in fact I loved it, you sucked right into the universe.  I've been checking back everyday to see if you have updated and I am going to rec it on my livejournal.  Great job!

Author's Response:

The next chapter will go up sometime this week. I got sick and got really behind.


Thanks so much for reviewing and rec'ing. :) 

Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 02:22 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008


Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 02:19 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008


There is one major problem though ... I need more!  

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 11:52 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

LOL! Go Rose! I can't wait to see why Edward was avoiding Bella and what is going to happen next!

Reviewer: iheartdougie (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 06:17 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

idk if I reviewed for this Chapter or the last one...BUT OMG I CANT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE!!!!....very original story btw


Reviewer: fifialice (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 05:14 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

ooooohhhh yay!!!!! i hated it when alice was mad at bella. But that ending was just toooooooo sweeettt!!!!!!:)

Reviewer: lauka (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2008 06:48 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

I love this story so much... don't even know what it is about it. It's really well written though, quite a rare thing for fanfiction.

Reviewer: sillysac (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2008 08:50 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

I've gotta say, I hesitated to read this story. But I needed something interesting to read and inspire me, and now I'm hooked.

You've got a very articualte way of writing and I really enjoy reading your story. I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2008 07:12 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008


I'm having a hard time thinking up synonyms here - but can't wait for some good old Edward Bella face to face. Actually I'm dying for it. Please? (insert puppy dog eyes)

Author's Response: chap 10 is EPOV. we will see plenty of ExB :)

Reviewer: Belladonna75 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2008 02:19 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

YEAH BABY!  Rose is a freaking miracle worker.  Can't wait to see what she does to help Bella with Edward!  Awesome freaking udpate!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2008 01:26 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

 This is the story that I most look-forward to getting updated. Even though there's only been nine parts so much has happened already. You are completely true to the characters that we love from the books and yet managed to write them as believable human characters. I even love Rosalie, which I never do, because of the relationship you've created between her and Bella. And I absolutely cannot wait to see how this further unfolds, especially between her and Edward! Aahhh I can't wait! Please update again soon!

Author's Response:

Update should be sometime this week, possibly as late as next Sunday. I didn't write very much this weekend because I was celebrating my anniversary... and chapter 10 is an important one so I don't want to blow it!

I'm glad you think a lot has happened. I try to keep things moving along, but only a month has passed since Bella moved in with Edward... feels like it should have been longer. 

Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: OCD_indeed (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 11:48 PM · On: February 29, 2008

You totally continue to surprise me... even though I shouldn't be by now!


Ive often wondered if writers of FF have their whole stories planned out.  I guess some do and some don't, which probably seperates the great stories from the okay ones.  

Having Rose show up on Bella's doorstep making the first effort was brilliant and completely unexpected.  When Bella defended Rose at the Ball, I did wonder at the time how that was going to make an effect.  But I completely forgot about that incident, focusing mostly on the kisses taking place in the story.

yes... I am rambling...anyway... you must have had this all planned out.  Even that little gesture meant something to the overall story, and it was such a pleasant surprise to have Rose be the bridge between everyone.  Refreshing!

You keep sucking me in further and further!!

Author's Response:

I plan a lot of things, but I don't plan everything. If I plan everything then there is no fun in writing it. For me, there has to be room for the characters to be themselves. That's why I had to re-map HIPS the other day and see how I was matching up to the outline and make sure we were moving along.

I did plan the Rose bit, though, because part of Bella's journey is making friends with the Cullens. I try very hard not to have superfluous scenes-- if the scene doesn't advance the story or show/explain some character trait or relationship I try to cut it. I don't always succeed, since some scenes I like too much to cut even though I know I need to. 

Thanks for your review. I meant to reply days ago, but being sick really threw me off schedule.  

Reviewer: marve (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 10:47 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

I just got caught up on the last two chapters, and I wanted to tell  you again how much I love this story.  You've got our crazy kids into one twisted situation, and I love it.

 I'm glad Alice is starting to forgive Bella, and I'm excited that Bella and Edward are starting to realize that they do have feelings for each other.

 Can't wait for your next update!

Author's Response:

Thanks! The situation is twisted, but I have great hopes that it will slowly untwist from a knot into a neat little bow. 

Reviewer: Debjoy21 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 08:45 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story.

 I love Rose taking a stand and working her magic! Awesome job! Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: rainpuddle13 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 06:58 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

I absolutely love that help with Alice came from a very unexpected person.  Rosalie is a practical girl, and not nearly as much of a bitch as the surface leads you to believe.  I really, really like the idea of her being Bella's friend - Bella could learn so much from her in how to deal with Edward and his raging ego.

Alice is a little pretty, pretty  princess that needs to find out that her precious brother isn't perfect, but that he's really a gigantic ass!

Edward is an ass.  At least Rose recognizes this, and is willing to help Bella take him down a few notches.  He surely deserves it, and I think that finally sleeping with Bella will do the trick.  I think that it will be an experience unlike any he has had before and he is not going to know up from down because he's going to tap into feelings he had no idea that they existed.  That is when Bella will gain the upper hand, only she probably won't know what to do with it...

Fabulous as always!

Author's Response:

I think that Bella needed help with Alice, or it was going to take her many chapters to win her back over... and frankly, I wasn't ready to devote many chapters to something so trifling.

Some people liked Rose and were irritated with Alice. Some people HATED Rose. I don't think Edward is all ass... but he's not perfect either.

Thanks for reviewing. :)  

Reviewer: TwilightChicky (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 06:20 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

YAY! I'm so glad Alice and Bella made up. This was great to see Rose be the fun one and Alice the bitch. Love that Rose decided to take Bella's side when she heard about her taking up for her at the gala. She's always the one that's really sticking up for the family but she tends to be more based in reality than some of the others. Really looking forward to the next chapter for more of Edward!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, glad you enjoyed the Rose bit. And YES, lots more Edward in chapter 10.

Reviewer: Santi-Love (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 12:33 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Awesome story, one of the my favourites that I've read of Twilight fanfiction. I hope that you continue soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: esmecullen (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 06:41 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

wow.... that's all i have to say

Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 03:51 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

You brought in the big guns with Rosalie.  That was brilliant!!  I have always loved Rose for who she was and you wrote her well. 

Was there a reason why you did not include any conversation between Emmett and Bella on the car ride back to Edward's place?

And what deviant behavior is Edward up to?  I shudder to think about his late night meetings. 

I really enjoyed the Bella and Emma interaction, so sweet.  Thank you for the update.  Love your story.



Author's Response:

In the rush to post the chapter, I forgot to write the scene between Emmett and Bella. I meant to write it after I got it back from beta, but I just spaced.

We'll see what Edward was up to next chapter, because it is all his POV.

Thanks for reviewing :) 

Reviewer: pixiechix7 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 01:09 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

I was really hoping she would just tell Rose and Alice her secret. I mean, as long as they didn't tell anyone, and then maybe they'd understand. Regardless, story rocks. Update soon

Author's Response:

A lot of people were hoping she'd tell them... but it's Edward's secret to tell them, or to not tell them. They're his family.

Thanks for reviewing. :)  

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