HAHA!!Ican't believe she ran away from him! Too funny!

I love it, I love Edward and Bella's interaction with eachother.

Moving on to chapter 3...

I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter. please write faster, please!
I love Rosalie in this story. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully the next chapter will be up before next weekend... but it's my anniversary this weekend, so I won't be doing a lot of writing for a couple days.

God I love Rosalie in this.  And I'm not usually the biggest Rosalie fan.  Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: thanks :)

I love this story you have taken a tried and true story line and added interesting twists. Update soon, have a great week!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

When I started reading your brand of angst I was afraid that you would write yourself into a dark depressing dead end and leave us without digging the story back out into the light. I saw no way for you to salvage it without pulling a deus ex machina and saying, whoops it was all just a dream sequence. Ha ha, gotcha.

I am so very grateful that you have a better imagination than I do, and that you had the amazing ability to pull this off in a completely genuine manner. All was not automatically forgiven. Everything is not magically better. But very realistically sewn together, you weave a wonderful story, and I am so anxious for more.

I am astounded by your writing prowess. Thank you for sharing this. I love it. And after having been addicted to fan fiction for some time, I have to say that I've never read anything like this. And that is saying something.

Never stop writing love. This is one of those stories that I desperately need to see the ending of, but at the same time, I never ever want it to end. You will always be hounded for more because of your talent. I thank you again.

 

~Mia

Author's Response:

My "brand of angst"... the funny thing is that this was initially a story I visualized as being fluffy. I guess it isn't that fluffy, is it? This story cannot go into a dark depressing dead end, because I've already written the last scene and it is happy. I am a sucker for the happily ever after.

Thanks so much for your kind review, I really appreciate it.  

Oh I was soo wishing Bella would spill the beans to Rose and Alice. i mean hell Jake knows why not them too

Author's Response: The fewer people who know, the better. Telling Jake was a mistake...

Awe, that was sweet.  Go Rosalie!  Now if she can just pull the wool off Edwards eyes  and get him into action with Bella, all would be good. :)

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing!

Love it! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

I´ve been trying to understand Edward´s motives, with little success, I even went back and re-read the first two chapters to refresh my memory. He obviously offered to take Bella in more on a whim, on the sudden feeling of doing the right thing, but mostly with the more egoistical idea of using her as a shield to keep his mother and Alice from pestering him about girlfriends. He probably did not consider Bella as an actual living and thinking person nor her feeling at all.

I very much enjoyed Edward´s POV in this chapter, he is so confused and does not even understand himself how mixed up he is. He thinks he does not care about her, but still feels the only place she is safe is with him. He is mad about Bella risking his reputation, while at the same time making out with another woman in public. He is wrong saying that Bella does not have a reputation-he gave her one the moment she was introduced as his fiancée and now HE is making HER look bad. He wants to have sex with her to get her out of HIS system but at the same time feels ashamed of taking advantage of her. So far he is only thinking of his own feelings, I very much look forward to seeing him start considering Bella´s feelings as well.

This is the longest review I have ever written so far, first story which raise to many thoughts. Sorry if I ramble, English is not my mother tongue so hopefully I still make some kind of sense. Keep up the great writing! 

Author's Response:

Edward needs more POV. He's going to get all of chapter 10 to himself, so I hope that will clear up some of his motivations. And yes, whether he realizes it or not, he's being a jerk.

Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. I'm glad you're enjoying this story!  

Yay! Alice forgiveness! Now we just need to figure out where (*or with whom*) Edward has been spending his evenings.

Author's Response:

We'll find out next chapter!

Thanks for reviewing (and rating).  

LOVED it Limona! Left a review at ff. I think it is brilliant that Rose is becoming Bella's confidante and partner in crime. Love that Rose told her thanks for standing up to Jessica and Lauren. Bella scored some points with Rose! Love how Rose bluntly asked Bella if she truly wanted to marry Edward.Very straight forward and no bullshitting with Rose. Love how she set Alice straight and told her to stop being a bitch. Edward is a coward and is avoiding Bella so he doesn't have to face the fact that he is falling for her! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: You are such an awesome reviewer.

Ohthe drama. I read the whole story last night and loved it! I sorta wish there had been a little more leading up the kissing Jake, but in no way did I not like it.

I like this Edward. He has more of an edge.

Can't wait to read more!!!! 

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story so far. :)