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Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 04:25 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008

Yes! Finally some action between the couple of hard heads haha. Again, I love this story and your writing. Amazing. I loved the conversation between Alice and her brother, lol! And the reasons why Edward was staying late at the office! I was so afraid that it was something like Tanya, but I really doubted it for some reason. I'm glad my doubts were justified ^_^ Love it. Absolutely love it.

Author's Response:

Nah, he wouldn't have lied about having dinner with Tanya to Bella. Not after the Jake incident.

Thanks so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 04:23 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008

This chapter was freaking fantastic!! Your amazing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: cullencrazy (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 04:07 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008

Great chapter!  Love this story!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: emm (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 03:52 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008

Despite the difficulty you had writing this chapter, it was very good! Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you thought it was decent. It didn't go exactly where I planned, but I think it will work.

Reviewer: elfarmy (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 03:36 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008

Great chapter. Loved that kiss.

Author's Response: thanks :)

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 03:28 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008

So, what does Edward intend to do?!  Tell Bella that he reneges on his offer?  Go ahead and do it because he wants to?  Send mixed signals until Bella goes nuts?  His reasoning isn't really rational right now - if he has so many ties to the Volturi it would be better for Bella to get as far away as possible, not hang around waiting for one of them to recognize her.  Ugh!

Author's Response: I can't answer your question without giving the next chapters. Thanks for reviewing, though.

Reviewer: sarcasticcheese (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 03:28 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008


I've been waiting for so long for them to do ANYTHING!  It's been a slow process, but I do enjoy how you've taken the time to develop the characters and their relationship(s).

This chapter was worth the wait, hun.  I hope you're feeling better!  

Author's Response: LOL, sorry the wait for 'anything' seemed so long. Glad you thought the chapter was worth the wait. I am mostly better.

Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 02:59 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008

Good Chapter!   Nice buildup

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Reviewer: Rochelle Allison (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 07:11 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

this story is great! i'm totally hooked - can't wait to see what happens next. i love the dynamic between bella and edward (and, admittedly, i so don't want her to hook up w/ jake again!!) anyway, this is well written and it flows.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing :)

Reviewer: kamce (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 04:01 AM · On: February 29, 2008

YAY excited about the weekend update!! I read the teaser on the fourms!!

I just hope it doesn't take them forever to approve it so it will be up EXTRA quick!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 04:49 AM · On: February 29, 2008

I hope your better! I'm excited you'll be posting this week!

Reviewer: kamce (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 04:09 AM · On: February 29, 2008

updating soon??

Author's Response: this weekend.

Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 03:03 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

I'm so sorry you've been sick.  I have actually been disappointed when I would check updates, and your story wasn't there!  You have done a fantastic job with writing this.  I hope you are better soon!  I look forward to what's coming.

Author's Response: The next chapter is up now. :)

Reviewer: WheresMyEdward (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 02:04 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

GAH!! I've been waiting forever!! LOVE the story but HATE the wait! Please go faster? Sorry that ur sick :(

Author's Response:

Sorry for the wait. I should have waited longer to post chapter 9 so it wouldn't seem so long. It will go up this week sometime.

The wait is long, but the next chapter is extra long to make up for it. :)  

Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 02:52 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Oh! I'm so sorry you got sick! Trust me, I know the in right now, haha. I hope you feel better soon if you're not already. Yay for a long chapter! haha, your chapters never dissapoint. I'm seriously looking forward to it.

Also, I wanted to tell you that if you changed the names of these characters and added different back stories, I could so see this turning into a novel. You're an extremely talented writer ^_^

Author's Response:

Thanks :) I am mostly better, just still a nasty cough and some congestion.

I hope to write someday, but right now I'm having fun with the fan fiction! 

Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 10:15 AM · On: February 29, 2008

*sad face* It's tuesday and still no update *heavy sigh* Haha, I'm pathetic. Your story is just that amazing.

 How was your anniversary? I hope you had lots and lots haha.

Author's Response:

I know. But I'm still recovering from being sick for a week and it really put a cramp in my style.

Thanks for the anniversary wishes. Thankfully I didn't get sick until the Monday afterwards!

The chapter is about 60% written. Will not go up today... but it will go up this week. It is turning out longer than I anticipated, and I think people would rather read it as one piece than for me to split it up.


Thanks for reviewing!  

Reviewer: jeesiechreesie (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 06:22 AM · On: February 29, 2008

i just read this story tonight and i'm intrigued. i've noticed that there are a lot of stories lately about douchbag edward who is a blatant womanizer, and i'm interested in seeing how you'll rectify that with this bella's story. though as soon as you brough jacob into the mix i admittedly cringed....all in all though, good stuff. keep up the good work :)

Author's Response:

There are a lot of stories lately about douchebag Edward who is a blatant womanizer... but I don't think this Edward is so blatant. But both characters have some evolving to do before the story ends. 

Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: thatgirljen (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 02:57 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

Update soon! I really like this story a lot. Its one of my favs.

Reviewer: HollyElizabeth (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 01:10 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

All I want to know is when is Bella and Edward going to kiss? The hype is killing me. Haha!


Update soon because this is practically the only series I'm depending on to update. ;]


Reviewer: Edward Lives (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2008 06:14 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

I am on pins and needles waiting for an update! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! :)

Reviewer: lp28xD (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 04:43 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

please update soon im dying from waiting!! one of the best fanfics i've read in a long time!!

Reviewer: readwritelove (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 04:27 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

So, Alice has kind-of forgiven Bella!!!

This means, in reference to Flight of the Conchords, only one thing: it's business time! ;)


I love this story! 

Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 03:51 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Please hurry with chapter 10 I love the first 9. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Chapter 10 will go up sometime this week. I'm not finished writing it yet, so I'm not sure which day.

Reviewer: KRC81 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 02:56 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

Just read all your chapters in one sitting and I LOVE this story...This is very different from any FF I have read, and I am completely addicted.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: fireonice1292 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:40 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

o god please update!! im hooked on this does this mean edward and bella are...? *raises eyebrows*

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