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Reviewer: eternalsunshines (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:52 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Eeps, that was amazing!

I can't wait to see what happens next. *cough*more lemons*cough.


Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:47 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Thank you so much for the super long chapter!  It was AWESOME!  This story is one of my absolute favorites and thus I was so excited to see that you had updated. 

I don't know where to begin.  I totally ran the gammit of emotions with this chapter.  After Edward and Bella shared the kiss things seemed to be just a little better, but then he had to go and be all nonchalant about her parents being dead.  I have a hard time discerning whether or not he is being blase or he just sincerely thinks she is adjusted to the fact.  Either way, he hurt her feelings and then didn't have the wits to know what he'd done.  I just wish she would tell him how she feels and discuss it with him.  Perhaps then he wouldn't appear to be such a dick. 

That Jacob Black is such a trouble maker.  I am beginning to wonder if he is evil like Edward suspected.  He had no business laying a lip-lock on Bella, even if he did think she liked him like that.  They hadn't spoken in two weeks and she was trying to come clean and apologize for leading him on.  Of course Edward had to see the whole thing.  Again, I just wish Bella would grow a spine and talk to him.  Set things straight.  I don't know how she stands there being so much unsaid between them.  That would seriously drive me insane.  Then again, I guess I am a bit more mouthy than Bella. 

Even though I liked the de-virginization, I am again uncertain.  I want to think that Edward forged ahead with the plan because he really wanted to be intimate with Bella.  Even if he did it to help her keep up her silly notion of cheating death, that is admirable to an extent.  However, if he just did it to beat Jacob to the punch, so to speak, that is deplorable. 

I know that there has to be much more drama ahead, but I loves me some drama.  I am curious as to what things are going to be like postcoital.  I have a feeling Edward may return to his doucheish self until the issue of Jake is resolved, while Bella gets her heart further broken, bit by bit.

I hope you are able to update again soon, because this extra long chapter has spoiled me something fierce.  You are creating quite a masterpiece here and I can not wait to read more. 

Author's Response:

I appreciate this review very much; thank you for taking the time to write it.

Edward's devirginization motives are a bit gray right now, but they will clear up in time.

Do not expect another extra-long chapter! This one was a special circumstance... as in, I could not bear to leave y'all on a cliffhanger about the sexing after they set a date.  

Reviewer: PassionforTwilight (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:44 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Oh my...that was PERFECTION. When I read anything of yours, the whole thing juts comes to life for me, and I can hear every word and see every image. This was just mindblowing. Talk about sexy Edward. He was just so sweet and considerate...and...perfect. ;) My review skills just melted along with the rest of me during that chapter or I'd give you more praise. Sorry.

Thank you for this amazing story.  



Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:44 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Limona! This is great.

The dynamic between Bella and Edward through the week, their painful silence at dinner, the liquid courage...I loved it. 

Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:42 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

okay i just need to let this simmer. i cant focus right now to leave a review

i'll respond in earnest ... on the boards.

i can say that i love that they jumped into bed before talking their issues out. you know crazy kids will do that. edward was sooo hot to get it on with bella... so singleminded and focused on his goal. he just had to get it done and not even seeing her with the gardner was going to deter him.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your consistent feedback, here and on the boards. I really appreciate it. Also, you make me laugh, talking about Edward brooding around the grounds with his frou-frou beer.

Reviewer: jules cullen (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:40 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

GAHHHH!! I loved it! I laughed out loud at the skittish deer line, it was hilarious. And the sex was gooood. Seriously though, it was definitely a good "first time" without being overawkward. I love Edward so much. Sigh. Can't wait for the next update! I was so good and patient for this one... :)

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:39 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Hot damn Limona! That was fricking awesome! LOVED the chapter so much! I hope we get EPOV on this!!I knew he peeked!!!! Looking forward to the next update! Awesome Job!!

Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:37 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Wow!! i dont even know what to say this this chapter but holy hotness!! i just hope they find themselves together cause they sure need each other.

Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:37 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

It made me so very happy to see that you had finally updated, and it was definitely worth the wait.  I do hope they actually get around to talking to each other and working out their problems.  Please tell me you are planning on updating again soon!

Reviewer: NJTwilighter (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:36 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

I love the ending to this chapter, it made me 'laugh out loud.'

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:32 AM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008

Great story.  I like that they finally kissed.

Reviewer: Jadenade (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:27 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

I don't even know what to type right now but I wanted to review anyway ;D I loved the end when she asked him if he closed his eyes. It was just too cute and funny. The way they tend to avoid eachother just makes me laugh as well. Loved the chapter and I can't wait to see how this changes things.

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: psych926 (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:23 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

I hope they talk now. They have a lot of things to discuss. Bella, especially has a lot of explaining to do. Edward is no mind reader, he won't know what is bothering her until she says something. 


Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:15 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

thanks so much for the super long chapter!! it made my night!!! and boy was it OH SO GOOOOOOOD


but they're gonna be weird towards each other the next day arent they?  they never talk about things!! I want to badly to wring their necks!!


Author's Response:

Don't wring their necks! They might need them someday. :)


Thanks :) 

Reviewer: coffeeobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:08 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

This was one of my favorite chapters so far (and no, I'm not just saying that because B&E finally got some sexy time!).  They progressed and fell back so much in this chapter, and you wrote it so well.  I am hoping that you will address the Jake issue in the next chapter and that Bella will explain to Edward.

keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I worked really hard on this chapter, and I really thought everyone would just skip to the end to the sexing... so I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of it!

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:06 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Wow, great chapter, they finally did it. So is she going to do anything about her "crush" or maybe even try to clarify the jacob situation??

Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter. I can't answer your question, though. :)

Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:05 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

wow... that was definitively worth the wait.. awesome first time!! really limona!! I am speechless! :D!

Author's Response: Yeah. Would that we could all have a first time like that, lol.

Reviewer: kaypgirl (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:05 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Damn, when Bella asked Edward if he closed his eyes, that would have been a perfect opportunity to say, "Jake and I are just friends, that's what I was telling him yesterday. He still wants more, that's what you saw him trying to convince me of, but I value his friendship, and only his friendship."

Author's Response: yeah, well, if they did a lot of talking in this chapter, it would have been even longer. I have to keep the plot pacing along.

Reviewer: cullencrazy (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:04 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Awesome chapter!  Loved it!

Author's Response: thanks :)

Reviewer: TwilightChicky (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:01 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Yay! I"m so happy to see an update from you. I love this story and this was really nice. Sullen Edward, insecure Bella but they still took care of another thing on her list of things to do before she dies. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: they definitely knocked that off her list... though Edward doesn't even know she has a list. thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 03:52 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008 stuff.....she needs to set him straight about Jake soon though.

Author's Response: thanks :)

Reviewer: Ninapolitan (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 03:51 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Oh momma did you deliver.... I'll admit I was nervous with the way it was headed but boy oh boy was it good.

I'm glad that he was so gentle with her, I liked the similarities with the hot tub/relaxing and the book/ocean/relaxing before the 'deed'.

Really excellent work, the Jake thing threw me as well but alas, you are magnificent

Author's Response: Oh Nina, you wouldn't believe how much I fretted over this chapter. And now that it is done... I can FINALLY read your chapter.

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 03:50 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

"Did you really close your eyes when I stepped out of my robe?"


LOLOL Typical Man! Go Ewdward! Oh HOT SECKS!! Now if they can just talk out their "NON ISSUES!!!" I bet things would be even more perfect! Excellent update Limona! thank you so much for sharing! Definitely awaiting more!!!

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Vullen (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 03:48 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008





Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: Killerbunys (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 03:41 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008


That was everything we had been waiting for and more.  Worth all the wait.

I hope these two figure it out soon.

Great chapter.  Great writing.  As always, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: thank you :)

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