This is a pretty cool story, but why make Bella flirt with the gardener. THat ruins the image completely. Love the idea of the whole fake fiance running for her life thing. Four star story!

That was so well done.  Thanks for a wonderful chapter!

I love this story! i  really wanna know how it turns out! update as soon as you can :)

Fanning self!  Need a cold shower!  That chapter was awesome, no words can describe.  Who knew this Edward could be so kind, sensitive, considerate, I could go on and on.  I've waited all week and days for this chapter and you delivered it beautifully.  This is my favorite story right now on this site and on FF.  Can't wait for another update.

Holy shit. I can't breath. 

I wanted to review after every chapter thus far, but i was so impatient I just had to keep reading. So this is my huge review.

I absolutely love this story. You are an incredibly talented writer, you have a very special gift. It is easy to see that you put a lot of time and energy into these chapters, and it is much appreciated. Each character is so specific and well thought out, and completely relatable, and irresistible.

Every chapter is perfect, every line is perfect. I don't mean to overwhelm you with the word perfect, but I hang on every word, and have to remind myself to breath after every scene. Bella is amazing. Edward is, well, good lord. And I love the eloquence of his words and his intelligence, it's just so..him. Honestly, this is amazing. You have to be used to hearing that, but I can't seem to express myself very originally right now :-) I guess I'm just caught up in the story.

Now for this chapter. I don't think I have ever read a better adult scene. I can't even think of better words than perfect and passionate and tender. And the part where afterwards, he tenderly wipes her clean--I about died. Oh my lord. 

 Okay this is ridiculously long and repetitive, I just can't even say enough good things about this piece. You have an excellent talent. I usually like to pick a particularly funny or well done line, but I can't do that with this. I could never pick just a few. I could never decide, they all happen to be either outrageously funny, or perfectly perfect. You've done a fantastic job, and I so look forward to reading more.

 

AL 

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it even as you read it all at once. Thank you so much for reviewing.

I do try and use a separate vocab for Edward, for Bella, and for Emmett. It's so nice to think you noticed. :) 

yay!

 i'm so glad you updated!

great chapter and cute ending.

can't wait for the next one. i hope they start talking more.

 

Uh! Limona I loved this chapter!! And not just because it was so long.

Their whole interaction was so perfect. Typical BxE misunderstandings and jumping to conclusions on both their parts, yet neither one of them could back down from the agreement.

I loved the small gestures Edward placed on Bella when they were at his parents house. It seemed so natural.

There is no way they are going to be able to keep pretending after this night together. It will be interesting to see who caves first and admits their true feelings. 

Bella's question to Edward at the end was awesome. His honest answer was priceless. Love it!

I loved every minute of it and I can't wait to read it again tomorrow. 

Will we get any of Edward thoughts from the week that past during this chapter? And the big event on Saturday?

Do you think I could say LOVE anymore in this review?  

LOVED IT!!!

Author's Response:

We will see about what happens next chapter. I have several ideas -- one involved some EPOV, but the others are all Emmett POV. So we'll see how it plays out.

 

glad you liked it :) 

Weeee!!!  Finally!  :D

I've been eagerly anticipating this night and I was so worried that the Jake incident would postpone it....thank you for the extra long, extra yummy chapter!

oh. my. gosh!! i LOVED this chapter! i am so addicted to your story. wow. what a  great love scene. i'm desperate to see what happens next....i know it must become tiresome having us beg for updates but when a story is this well written and enthralling....it's hard to have to wait. oh, i just want EXB to bare their souls to one another and get it on more and more. ;)   awesomeness.

HOTTNESS! keep up the angsty goodness. :)

YAY for double chapters!!! Woo hoo for Edward and Bella! This was so fun to read :)

Also? LOVED how you ended this chapter!!!

I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!

As always, wonderful!