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Reviewer: Devlin (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2008 12:42 AM · On: February 29, 2008

I adore this fic for the plot and the whole chars that could all stand alone if it weren't FF.  :)

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2008 12:39 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

This is such a great story!!  I laughed at the end when he admitted he didn't close his eyes!!  Too funny!  I can't wait to read more!  Please do update soon!

Reviewer: amycullen (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2008 12:25 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Loved it, especially the last line :)

Reviewer: maddaq (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2008 12:16 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Finally!! They both needed that!

Reviewer: Enya (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 11:56 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Ah!  I just read every chapter that you offered me and I want more.  This is a wonderful story.  But I would be so confused if I was Bella with the hot and cold thing that Edward has going on.  I know she's going to be more than hurt if he goes back to being cold after all this.. But I don't know if he'll be able to...  =]

 You're a wonderful writer. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Bella is slowly pulling herself out of the mire she had been stuck in since the Tanya incident. Hopefully we'll see some character development with her.

Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2008 11:37 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008


I hadn't thought to read this, but my friend (IngenueFatale) told me I HAD to.  I'm so glad I did.  You've got me hooked.  This is like crack.  Amazing, amazing crack.

Reviewer: Wordy (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 11:13 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

This is my second review...yes i have a sickness. I've lost count of the number of times i have read this chapter.

I'm hoping that now they've connect on this level, that  they will now start feeling more comfortable around each other. it upsets me when they always assume the worst, and never challenge each others motives or reasons. 

I hope in the next few chapters we get to see EPOV he needs to defend some of his actions  and justify his way of approaching certain situations and maybe, just maybe small bridges  can be bult between them....

Author's Response:

I haven't decided when we're next seeing EPOV.

On tap next is Emmett's POV, and I may or may not add some EPOV to that.

Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 10:17 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

ughhh sooo goooddd!

and i loved the last lines. So much.

and mexican wedding cakes/coookies are beyond delicious

Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 10:12 PM · On: February 29, 2008

 I love this story because both of the characters are so very real, they both have flaws and redeeming qualities. Edward is emotionally closed off to most people and thinks much too logically about everything, Bella thinks with her heart. They contrast alot, but at the same time, these differences are what make them good for each other. I also like how perfectly imperfect her losing her virginity was, the way that you described it in her POV shows how almost clinical everything was yet there was so much emotion threatening to pop out. They barely say anything to each other, and yet they've kept this promise to each other and they follow through with it I think because beneath the surface they both want this so much, they just don't know how to show it or express it. Bella is too vulnerable to put herself out there more and Edward always makes an effort to never be vulnerable in any situation. So this arrangement gave them a chance to kind of express themselves without putting themselves out there emotionally. They could have sex and show their affection without emotionally exposing themselves. Even if in their hearts they know its something more, they can fool themselves into thinking it was just the deal they made, nothing more. I freaking loved it. I love how lonely they both are even living in this house together. I hope this changes things! Thanks for the long update and I hope you update again soon! The anticipation is killing me! I  check everyday to see if you've posted a new part, I even read the last part twice!

Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 10:03 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

I ran the gamut of emotions with this chapter from laughter to violence to fanning myself (Oh My).  "Auntie Flow" Hahahahaha *snort*  "WWEFD" I love that you put that into this chapter.  Then Bella with her internal chatter and the closet incident made this chapter priceless. 

I love Edward and Bella's unguarded moments.  But then that wall goes up!! Dare I say, are they both suffering from stubbornness, pride, and fear?  Or could Bella have some form of PMS and Edward MSB ( my abbreviation for male sperm buildup)?

Then there is Jacob, I swear I am ready to set steel wolf traps around Edward's yard and declare werewolf the new "white meat".

To use Bella's words I found the love scene both "powerful and tender".  I loved that Edward was naughty and kept his eyes open.  I would love to know EPOV on their love makin'.  He aches to see her and she craves his presence.  Are the walls going back up?  Are they going to pretend this was just a simple request fulfilled?  I know you can't answer that but I think this is a very skillfully done cliff hanger and I love ya for it. 

Thank you so much for this update.

Author's Response:

MSB made me laugh.

We will not see EPOV on their love making... because I don't have time :( 

But I will try and put in some of his impressions the next time his POV rolls around.  

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 09:46 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Holy Hotness Limona!!!LOVED naked Bella and Edward in the hot tub and the sexin in the bedroom! They are not going to be able to keep their hands off one another now that they have done this!! AWESOM JOB!!

Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 09:43 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

I really hope that they do fall for each other, this is a really sweet story.

What I find funny is that when writers write Edward he's either
A) a melodramatic virgin who believes he deserves to be alone


B) a man-whore doucheward who is after some tail and meets Bella and then changes

Either way I love them both.  I can't wait to see where this goes.Keep up the great writing,


Author's Response: There are some good reasons that Edward falls into one of the those two categories usually... but I really don't think that my Edward is a man-whore.

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 08:11 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Amazing!!!!! LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!! 

While Edward can be a jerk, he sure knows how to romance!!! 

I wonder if Edward really did see Jake and Bella kiss??? Also, will Bella say something about Edward telling his parents about Bella's parents?

Again, I loved this chapter, it was awesome! I still can't believe they both went through with it. I figured one of them would back out.

Author's Response: I can't answer either of your questions. Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 07:38 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

I just spent the last few hours reading all the chapters to this story...and to say I like it would be a lie.....I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it!! I'm so hooked! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 06:55 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Wow, that was amazing.  So tender, so loving, so sexy.  I just wish they would talk everything out already. :)

Fabulous chapter!

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 06:32 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Well, Edward is such a stiff in this story. I can't beleive she actually went through with it after he ingnored her all week. Okay, well, I probably would have to. I dunno, just his frigidness, it's offensive. Living in a house with a man who seems to avoid me every chance he gets, who I have to indulge him "fake" wedding plans, I mean I see his reasoning, but it doesn't make the situation any less depressing. She's absolutley alone and the company she forced to keep(when it's convenient) makes her feel that much more unwanted! And to have to make wedding plans when actually believe that you never really have that reality, poor girl! And the nerve of him for sharing her private affairs, what a dick! If I was her I'd have half mind to walk away. Tell him to shove his house, ring, car, credit card and walk the fuck away! Chancing the Volturi suddenly doesn't sound as unappealling as staying in a charade that tears your heart and soul apart.  Too dramatic? I can be that way sometimes.

Author's Response: I don't think Bella felt unwanted by Edward at the end of this chapter.

Reviewer: Marigold (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 06:28 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

The sex was very nice, but I wish Edward would stop being a dick already! ;)

 Love this story, and really hope you see it through 'til the end. 

Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 06:28 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

I love it! I was a little scared that you were not going to update. But I am so glad you did this chapter rocks. Keep the updates coming.

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 06:18 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

I already reviewed once, but I thought about something else.  In this most recent awesome chapter, you had in there that Rose gave Bella some BC pills, because hers lapsed.  Does that mean she hasen't had them for awhile?  If so, doesn't that mean even though she's on them now, she could technically still get pregnant, because you have to be on them for at least a month before they are affective? IDK, is that some sort of hint?  Anyways, I've read this chapter more than once, does that make me weird?  Thanks again, for your wonderful talented writing abilities and for sharing them with all of us.  Looking forward, patiently for the next chapter, maybe somethings will be explained there?

Author's Response: I'm pretty sure the BC pills are effective after one week if you start taking them on the first day your period starts. Bella followed the instructions. There will be no baby.

Reviewer: mandalynn (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 05:33 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

I'm truely dying inside...the only thing that is keeping me from screaming is that fact that my kids are in the room. Currently this is the only story that I am following so this is going to be tough to wait until the next chapter. I love that last part though, where Bella asks if he really closed his eyes when she got in the tub and he tell her NO! I love it! I love where you are taking this story, can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: I'm really flattered this is the only story you're reading. Regretfully, it will be at least a couple weeks before the next chapter comes out. I need to update my other story and I am hosting Thanksgiving at my house this year.

Reviewer: shookie (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 05:26 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Wow I can't wait for the aftermath

Reviewer: Pollygirl77 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 05:22 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Love it!!!!

Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:27 PM · On: February 29, 2008

that was hot! and edward was so gentle with her.

Reviewer: iheartnj (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:15 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

First - I am so glad you are back!!

Second - WOW!! I need a cold shower! The tension was killing me! Torture!!! The exchange with Jacob and Edward's reaction was painful! Then the dinner, the hot tub, the love scene! I just love this story so much!

Keep up the beautiful work! We've missed you!!

Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:06 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

HOLY COW! Excellent chapter.  I just love this story. It is written so very well. BRAVO!

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