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Reviewer: shookie (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 11:26 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Wow I can't wait for the aftermath
Reviewer: Pollygirl77 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 11:22 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Love it!!!!
Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 10:27 AM · On: February 29, 2008
that was hot! and edward was so gentle with her.
Reviewer: iheartnj (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 10:15 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
First - I am so glad you are back!! Second - WOW!! I need a cold shower! The tension was killing me! Torture!!! The exchange with Jacob and Edward's reaction was painful! Then the dinner, the hot tub, the love scene! I just love this story so much! Keep up the beautiful work! We've missed you!!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 10:06 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
HOLY COW! Excellent chapter. I just love this story. It is written so very well. BRAVO!
Reviewer: yourbrandofheroin (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 10:04 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
W.O.W.
Reviewer: emm (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 10:02 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Awesome chapter -- I loved the last part where Bella asked him if his eyes were closed. They've temporarily put a band-aid over the bullet hole of their problems...so, I'm nervous to see how they try to heal things.
Author's Response: Nice analogy.
Reviewer: sandyk199 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 09:56 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Hey girl What a wonderful story! I'm sorry that I didn't review every single chapter so far, but I've just read them all in one hit (totally addicted now) and figured that 12 reviews in a row might seem a little stalkerish! Suffice to say, it's a fabulous story, your writing is wonderful, and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next instalment! Cheers Sandy
Author's Response: I love hearing from people who read all the chapters at once. So glad that you're enjoying it :)
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 09:53 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
I LOVE this chapter - you ended it perfectly! Now write more because your story is like crack!
Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 09:42 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
This chapter was...WOW! No wonder it took exta time. But let me just this was worth the wait. I'm glad Jacob is finally back in the story. I think he's going to add an element of jealousy (well he already is) to the story. Edward is in major deniel about his feelings, I think, and Jacob's interaction with Bella like what happened in this chapter is going to push him I think. Saturday evening was amazing. He really went all out, which I knew he would. He wanted it to be special for her. Them coming together was perfect. Just how I like my love scenes. There was detail but it wasn't crude. It was beautiful and loving and showed the emotions the scene needed to portray. I loved how you ended it with her asking if he looked. :) That was quite funny. I can't wait to see what happened the morning after. If these two think sleeping together, especially how they feel towards each other isn't going to change things, then they are both crazy. Great Job!
Author's Response: I asked my husband if he would have looked, and he said any guy would have, especially if the girl wouldn't have known one way or the other.
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 09:37 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
"No" - HA!! I have the biggest grin on my face from that!!! I find it interesting that Bella gets upset that Edward makes assumptions and lets things go unsaid when she is doing the EXACT same thing over and over again! It's so hard to read them have these sweet moments and then have some misunderstanding or unspoken anger get between them. They have these amazing highs like at the pool hall or during the Sat morning breakfast and then a bunch of crap happens, they don't talk and then they wait until they're back at another high w/o ever resolving said crap. I'm hoping that the sexing will get them to open up a bit - and not even so much about their feelings for each other, all declaring and such, but more just to discuss the little things that fester and lead to their frequent silent treatments. Speaking of the sexing, it was really sweet and tender. Jacob's new job... scares me a bit... I suspect the danger is coming sooner than that deposition. And I love how she looks after a workout. Very familiar. Not pretty... red-faced, frizzy hair. Last thing - your A/N about giving up scared the crap out of me!! PLEASE don't give up!!! This story is amazing and everyone loves it!!!
Reviewer: broken_fate (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 09:24 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
That was all kinds of steamy goodness. I needed a cold shower after reading that one last night..whew. Great job as always!
Reviewer: IngenueFatale (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2008 09:17 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Okay, so I always saw this updated but I never really went to read it. I've just started reading AH-AUs sort of, so that was my excuse. I finally decided to give this a try and wow, I stayed up way later than I should have last night to read everything that was up. I love the characters in here. I think they're an amazing mix of pieces I've seen in the books with little things you've added to make it work for this story. The writing is brilliant and I'm so, so, so glad I clicked on this story. Great job and I am going to be waiting for the little e-mail to tell me this has been updated!
Author's Response: So glad to hear you're reading and enjoying this story. Thanks!
Reviewer: swannygirl (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 09:06 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
I just found you story yesterday and I love it! This was great and I really look forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: Tsuki9 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 08:58 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Brilliant as usual! Update soon!
Reviewer: Platinim13 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 08:40 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Can't wait to find out if Edward is actually trying to help her or hurt her with the Saturday night deflowering.
Reviewer: FalconFeathers (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 08:39 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
more? more ? please pretty pretty please?.............
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 08:30 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Wow. Not sure what to think. On the one hand, first time was hot and steamy and surprising (I wasn't expecting Edward to have Bella be on top). On the other hand it was under the misconception that Bella and Jacob were - something? I dunno. Love to know Edward's POV though!
Author's Response: The Bella/Jacob thing is a gray area. We don't know what Edward was thinking, or if he even saw what Bella assumes he saw.
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 07:46 AM · On: February 29, 2008
I waited forever for this chapter - and it was so worth it!
Reviewer: obsidian (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 06:42 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
that last part made me smile haha.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 05:17 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Amazing. Wow.... XD Loved it!!! I seriously can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Wordy (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:46 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
You tension building minx!!!!!!! This was so worth the wait.... The naked under the robe situation, "Putting the virgin on top seemed like a dumb idea" and walking into the closet are a testiment to your exceptional writing skills. The hottest sex scene i've ever read. I hope she confronts him regarding the way he sometimes comes across, I dont belive he really is that cold and insensitive. The blaise comment regarding her parents being an example. Stand up to him BELLA and give him a run for his money!!!!!
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed the chapter. :) No he's not that insensitive, or he wouldn't have bothered trying to make her first time go well. And he did try, even if he didn't say a whole lot.
Reviewer: CBisme (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:23 AM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
Yes! Keep it coming 'cause things are getting good now. But rosalie is too much of a bitch. Anyway I'm loving it!
Reviewer: sez_princess (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 04:03 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Awesome chapter :) Gah I love your story! x
Reviewer: mllesinistre (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 03:59 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
LOL, the last part...Edward's such a sneaky bastard. I love it. I think I was almost as nervous as Bella was about this happening. For a minute there I thought she'd drink herself into some sort of coma and the whole night's events would be ruined. I'm glad they went through with it. Hot, very hot and sexy and erotic and I don't know what else. I'd love to know what Edward was thinking the whole time. You know I was also scared things wouldn't happen because of the lack of talking. There are so many misunderstandings between them, it's ridiculous. If they would just communicate things wouldn't have to be so tense. Something came to mind while reading the chapter and I have to ask. How long has Bella been on the pill? Is there going to be another baby in this story aside from Alice's? Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: LOL. One of the options for this chapter was Bella being too drunk to have sex with Edward. But by the time they got to the sex, she was sobering up. I tried to show that through text, but I don't know if I succeeded. No BxE baby is in the works.
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