LOVE IT!!! So sweet! Can't wait for the next chap. When's it coming? it's been a week already :(

Author's Response:

It hasn't been a week. I didn't post chapter 11 until Tuesday. I'm a little behind since Thanksgiving is coming.

*chokes* 

Damn RL things delaying me from reading this chapter IMMEDIATELY!!!!!  Because...

 HOLY MOTHER OF ALL THINGS HOTT HOTT HOTT FREAKING HOLY WOW....*fizzles out*

 So, I totally thought, even during the fancy-schmancy dinner, that something was going to happen to delay teh sex!  I'm so happy it didn't because it was oh wow! good.  Sex (especially first-time sex) is so hard to write and yet it was believeable and yummy and just...enviable.  That's the word to describe this entire story.  Enviable. 

I certainly envy your ability to write at such a high, keeps me hooked level and still bring the hotness.

But what really is great about this chapter is that after they said Saturday is The Day of Sex, I kinda forgot because I was all kinds of wrapped up in the characterizations of Carlisle, Esme, Alice, Jake, and Edward being so moody and willing to tell ALICE that he and Bella were gonna do it on Saturday. 

I loved that part.  I would have thrown something at Edward and still I was like, hee hee.  Edward can't help but tell everybdoy he's gonna get LAID. 

Also, Edward not talking about the whole Jake incident = love.  I love how hard he fights not to care and yet he gets all pissy and refuses to come home. 

 Like in the movie (which I still haven't seen) his mood swings are giving Bella whiplash.  They are also giving me a case of the fangirls  :)

I know you were worried about this chapter, but it is amazing.  One of the best (yet).  And I can't even guess what's going to happen next because I don't care!  I'll enjoy it if they continue to sex each other over, if they have some horribly awkward convo, if they fight, even if they decide to hula naked to the beach boys.  I'm in this for the long haul, so thank you for writing it!

Author's Response:

A lot of people were surprised the sex happened. You, though, YOU should have known. Didn't I tell you? Maybe not. Or maybe you thought I chickened out.

You are the only person to think it was outrageous that Edward told Alice. And it was outrageous. Thank you for noticing.

Thank you, FoG, for your ever-so-thoughtful review.  

well I'm hooked

Author's Response: thanks :)

oh damn, he never closed his eyes. ;)

it was a great chapter. me thinks some ones are falling in love. :)

 

I love your story!  I read the whole story yesterday.  I can't wait for the inevitable conversation about what Edward saw perspiring between Jake and Bella, and I really can't wait until the cat gets out of the bag about E/B feelings for each other.

Of course he wouldn't close his eyes...he's a guy!  Hopefully this won't be a one-time thing for them.

Awesomeness Limona - i love you!!!!

This chapter is......... *speechless*.......

This is sooo good all i can say is... *SIGH*

This chapter made me feel so happy i'm beside myself.  My cheekbones hurt coz i couldn't stop smiling.

Please update soon.

>>>>>> you should see the grin on my face<<<<<<<

Author's Response: thank you :)

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA love the last line

 

THEY NEED TO TALK TO EACH OTHER seriously, all the tension is stressing me out lol 

I have to agree that your Edward isn't a man-whore but he is kinda jerky. Yes?  But I loveded him anyway *squeezes Edward*

This.  Chapter.  That’s really all I can get out b/c it just overwhelmed me (and not just the sex).  I thought the last scene was flawless.  Not too mushy, but passionate enough to convey just how special Edward and Bella are together.  I know you worried about keeping tension alive, and you really shouldn’t b/c you both kept the tension going but, more importantly, you kept it realistic.  The realistic way Edward and Bella react to each other is what keeps me impossibly hooked on this story.  Also, Esme’s treatment of Bella was very in-character; she’s a kind person, but she wasn’t overly friendly to the girl who (may have) cheated on her son, and when Edward announced they'd set a date, she warmed up to Bella a little simply b/c a definite date for the wedding shows he'd forgiven her and was ready to commit. I totally bought that scene.  I totally buy this whole freaking story.  Don’t respond to this review; just keep writing!  Can’t wait to read the next installment (which goes without saying). 

ah. i love this story and you write a good lemon by the way. ha. can't wait for the next chapter. =)

WTF!!!OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! F#$#^%$(^% BELLA & JACOB!!!!!!!!  STUPID-STUPID-STUPID! Bella is really selfish & inconsiderate sometimes.  *ARGH* this is resurrecting all my pent up emotions ;)

I.LOVE.IT.  :D

Oh My!!! Will these two ever get on the same page. It drives me crazy....in a good way.

Great chapter. Can't wait for more!!! 

How much did he tell Alice???? 

Author's Response: He didn't tell Alice very much. He mostly just hinted to make her happy. She's pregnant, and he wants her happy.