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Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:57 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
I'm glad you were able to post a new chapter and hope you're doing better. I'm glad to see that Edward and Bella are getting closer. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:41 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Really like that Bella is spending more time witjh Edward and enjoying it. Also like that she is spending time with Esme.
As always I am hungry for more! But that's okay ... enjoy your holidays. May they be filled with nothing but the best for you and yours!
Sandra
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your sweet review. Happy holidays!
Reviewer: wants_an_edward86 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:40 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
OK...that chapter was fabulous! Well worth the wait!!! I like how they're getting to know each other and can't believe he'd schedule his fake wedding on the day of his birthday?! wtf! They are so close to doing it again i can taste it...and i think i'm on to something b/c ur Chapter End Notes said:
"And before I get a whole slew of reviews telling me about how the deposition wasn't mentioned, that is because Bella doesn't know it was scheduled. Emmett told Edward to tell Bella, but Edward doesn't always do what his brother tells him to do."
AHHHHH please please please let there be more sex! or at least making out cuz the angst and sexual tension is KILLING me!! haha Other than that, great chapter and am eagerly awaiting to read the deposition!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review :)
Yeah, well, that birthday/wedding thing is a long story. I might address that on the forum at some point.
And lol at you quoting the end notes to me.
Reviewer: AppleDarling (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:38 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
yay for edward turning into Soft Serve Ice Cream Edward rather than -40 Snow and Ice Edward. =] LOVING this story, continue continue continue!
Author's Response: Okay, your review made me laugh out loud. And then I got worried. There is nothing soft about Edward... I'm going to have to think on this.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:37 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
i like how edward and bella's relationship has developed. its nice that thewy dont have all the awkwardness they used to have.
keep writing,
xoxo
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the BxE. thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:36 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
This story is absolutely terrific! I love it. I can't tell you how happy I was to see your update. Now get back to work writing!! LOL
Author's Response: Hopefully the wait for the next chapter shouldn't be too bad. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: LatinaLibra (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:28 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
GAH! There needs to be daily updates on this story! It is my absolute favorite and its killing me!
Also, pleeeeease write another lemon with Edward and Bella. Soooon!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story! :)
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:27 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Oh I can't tell you how excited I was to see your story update! Relationships are starting to solidify between Edward and Bella and Bella/Esme/Alice. I love the swim lessons and that Edward and Bella are really starting to talk now. So interesting about the scholarship...so the Volturi handpicked Bella...they wanted her...I wonder why...what did she have to offer them?
Such a great story ~ Love reading every word.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review :)
Reviewer: iheartnj (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:27 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
You never cease to amaze me! Great chapter - beautifully written! I like the "friendship" that is blossoming between Bella and Edward - it's genuine, and not fluffy! I can't tell you how much I look forward to these updates! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. It is really hard to move them together gradually, I am discovering. Thanks so much for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: spc87 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:18 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
hmmmm, will B & E get their HEA?
i really hope so....
Author's Response: I am a sucker for an HEA, but that's all I can really say.
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:13 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
oh Limona! Thank you so much for the update! Love seeing this story progress! Please take it easy during the holidays! enjoy them, be safe and be loved! BIG HUGZ!!!!!!
Author's Response: Happy holidays to you, Tiggrmommi! :)
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:13 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Hmmm, Good chapter. I was hoping that they would be closer still after their night together. :(
Gotta love protective Emmet though. ;)
Author's Response: Well, they still have things to work out. But they are getting closer. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: KrzyRiver (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:12 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Oh these two drive me crazy! Why are they not having sexy make outs in pool? Loved the new chapter! Absolutely addicted to this story. More soon please!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it ;)
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:11 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
wow that was great. at least some of the barriers are being broken down.
Author's Response: slowly but surely... :)
Reviewer: elizabeth2323 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:08 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
People shouldn't be nit picky--You have created a wonderful story that I so much look forward to reading! Keep up the great work and I hope you have a lovely holiday.
Author's Response: Happy holidays to you too :)
Reviewer: kelseymarie33 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 06:55 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Ahh.! I loved it.! Thank you. Update soon. Lol.
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: adilsonnnn (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 01:56 PM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
Okay so i know i write ALOT of reviews on this story but its just so goood!!! No scratch that ist not good...its amazing, fantastic, PHENOMINAL! Surely you know that there simply aren't any wiords that can describe the awesomenesss of this story.
Will you continue? and soon? I know how this chapter ended basically says it all but-regardless i have to be reassurred. Will you do that for me? Will you assure me that this story is not ending here? I would be ever so greatful-even more so if you assurre me by simply updating as soon as possible!!!!
Crazed fan....you could say that. AH i Love AU-AH stories, Bella and Edward always seem to have just as many problem with relationship-disregarding the whole fantasy-vampire thing. I'm glad Jacob still is in the story (perhaps now you can make YOUR Edward do what SM's Edward failed to do, and knock him out!!). Again all the things that will make me ever so greatful and make my life all the more complete. =D
Author's Response: Adilsonnnn, thank you so much for your thoughtful, kind reviews. I really appreciate you taking the time to write them. And yes, I did continue... the next chapter is up. :)
Reviewer: adilsonnnn (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 11:44 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
wow their compromise is a weird one- but they've always had weird compromises. I just don't like the fact that Bella's eagerness to have sex is driven by her fear of death and not because of her teenage hormones...okay i guess your way does seem to make alot more sense, but in the twilight saga Bella's eager to share this with Edward and in your story Bella's just eager to have it at all. I don't know how I really feel about that...i mean don't get me wrong- I love your story so far, but I guess Stephenie Meyer's characters are just imprinted(ugh bad choice of words)-sketched into my brain. Oh well you story has a really good twist and I don't want to make too much of a fuss about comparisons to SM's books. Right this is YOUR story...well keep up the good work, I'm guessing the next chapter is going to be just as well written.
...of course it is.
Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 01:26 AM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
Hi,
This story is so wonderful!!
I read the whole thing (what is written so far) in one sitting and fell in love with the characters.
Update Update Please please please!!!!!!!
I am giving your story a 9 rating. It is as close to being a 10 as possible without actually being written by Stephenie Meyer :)
Reviewer: adilsonnnn (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 03:52 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
urgg i have always, ALWAYS loathed jacob and I'm not mad at you-because the story is great, mind you, but I'm actually happy your doing this because it gives me all the more reason to hate jacob more. oh i hope edward hits him now that hes not vampire-strong (oh please do!)
and of course i am saying all this without actually reading the next chapters...but one can only hope.
keep up the good work!
Reviewer: madisonli (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 03:22 PM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
Very nice! I have much fun reading stories that actually have a plot. I am way creeped out by these Volturi characters, and of course, am more than excited to see Edward and Bella get closer. HINT HINT. please?? Anyway, love how things are going, and can't wait to see more!
Reviewer: emilove93 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 05:50 PM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
I LOVELOVELOVE this story!!!!
I just come to this site every day to see if you have posted a new chapter!
I actually just recently signed up just so I could comment on this!!!
I think that you keep the sexual tention just tight enough to keep the reader hanging on, but not so obscene that it is just sleazy.
Plus, your writing rivals that of any modern-day author.
Trust me, I can't even follow 75% of the other stories that I read, and i really appreciate that you take time to get the reader involved in the story.
So I was just wondering.........
Why haven't you posted in forever???!?!!!!?
Author's Response: The first draft of the next chapter is done and I am polishing it. The holidays are busy and work has been crazy. The next chapter will go up soon. :)
Reviewer: The Night (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 02:37 AM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
I likethis story bt would e and b finall get 2gether as girlfriend and boyfriend already!
Reviewer: Cyartia (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 12:56 PM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
This story has grabbed my full attention and I am anxiously awaiting the next installment with baited breath!
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 07:07 AM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
I'm loving where this story is going! Please update soon.
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