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Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 12:52 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Oh, he obviously cares about her so much. *sigh* I loved their game of Truth or Dare... I wanna play that with a hammered Edward. Please?

And yeah... Emmett probably wouldn't even believe that Edward knows her better. So sad.

And Edward is gonna take her somewhere sunny and warm and wonderful! YAY! Though I really don't expect that until later. :) But, it's something to look forward to!

Author's Response:

Sunny and warm and wonderful is where I want to be. Writing about Edward drinking tequila almost made me want to join in. Then I remembered my last experience with tequila.

Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 12:51 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Loved the update. Loving the story too. =)

Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 12:50 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

I don't think he realizes that he is the reason for the sparkle in her eyes.

Author's Response:

So perceptive.

Reviewer: mandalynn (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 12:38 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Why couldn't Edward just get a little more drunk????  Or be sober enough to take her???  Pretty much reading a sex scene means my husband is getting some tonight, but I guess hes not gettinga any tonight! Jk Love it! 

Author's Response:

Oh, poor hubby.

Reviewer: moonwitche (Anonymous) · Date: December 31, 2008 12:37 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

I liked it... I hope they start talking to each other more. Thanks for the update!

...sorry about my lame reviews.

Author's Response:

Don't be sorry. I appreciate you taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 12:32 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Oh incredible chapter!!! Scared to see how Bella will react to the depo news and possibly to finding out Eddie kept it from her....But anxious as well! LOVED the Truth or Dare!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! The truth or dare was something I couldn't resist doing.

Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 12:28 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

*heart breaks** Ok, Emmett is right, and she should have known, and continued to live anyway, but Edward is right too. He wuves her!! She loves him. Death to the Volturi!!

Author's Response:

I think you summed up the whole story in four sentences, lol. thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 12:28 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

I love protective Emmett and Edward! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

me too :)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: withthevampsofcourse (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 12:27 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008





you know how i feel about this.  you do.  the hot tub is delish, and i surely do love seeing it again.

loverly, dear.  remember the spiritually nekkit thing...

Author's Response:

Two reviews in one day. I am honored.

Reviewer: Swedish_Chef (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 10:46 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

Nice!! This is exactly the type of story that I subconsciously wanted to find on twilighted haha. I just started to read Twilight fanfiction so it truly surprised me when I found a story like this. I love the whole storyline in general and the subplots you put in are really unique. You have no idea how much I cringed when I saw that Alice was going to find Jacob and Bella making out haha. Also, how you subtly go parallel to the book at various points is really nice- it usually takes me awhile to catch it, like Edward leaving for two weeks = New Moon. I was proud when I found that out haha. It's not overly noticable which I really like.

I really can't wait until your next review. When the Volturi appear I will probably squeal in delight and anticipation haha. Hope your Holiday is great!

Author's Response:

Happy holidays to you too. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks so much for your thoughtful review -- I did try and put some parallels in, and I always like it when people notice.

Reviewer: angel1babe86 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:38 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

Please update!!! I love this story... the dynamics in Edward and Bella's relationship are amazing! waiting anxiously for the next chapter...

Author's Response:

I hope to put the next chapter up today. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: withthevampsofcourse (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 05:05 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

bless you, child, for keeping edward constantly wet.

there, see?  i can review.  when i want to.  it still rankles that you think you were invisible to me until you got famous, BB.  heh

Author's Response:

Oh, the timing of your comment. I am currently writing another scene where he is wet. Apparently wet Edward is one of my favorites. Perhaps it is too much of a good thing... I'll have to re-evaluate.

I never said you couldn't review. Don't be rankled. You have tons of reviewers. Everyone knows this.

Reviewer: IloveTwilight (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 03:32 AM · On: February 29, 2008

I love it!!! Please continue.

Author's Response:

Next chapter should go up sometime today :)

Reviewer: CNB123 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 11:49 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

I just found this story and it is definetly going into my favorites.  You are a brilliant writer and I am so impressed with what you have done with these characters.  I hope there are many more chapters to come as i will be checking back often.  Definetly one for the favorite section!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind review. There are many chapters to come. The next chapter should go up tomorrow. :)

Reviewer: goddess1871 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 08:07 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Wow! What fun! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

glad you're enjoying the story so far :)

Reviewer: Jessic-x (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 07:34 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

No way, no wayyyy

i want another chapter :(

now, :( i dont want to wait, it's an awsome story

Author's Response:

new chapter should go up tonight or tomorrow.

Reviewer: CasalieAnn (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 07:41 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

Nice :) Great Story can't wait to hear more from you!

Author's Response:

next chapter will go up tonight or tomorrow. :)

Reviewer: CasalieAnn (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 04:51 PM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008

Hell yeah! Bella spilling wine on those girls! woot! nice chapter :D

Reviewer: CasalieAnn (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 03:48 PM · On: March 22, 2008

I have been dragged into this story! Wow, it is really good and different, I am glad that I came across it! I love how all the characters are different, not vampires, but then again you managed to keep them the same. Love it! Good stuff :D

Author's Response:

thanks so much for taking the time to review :)

Reviewer: cullenized (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 11:11 AM · On: February 29, 2008

i am in love with your version of edward cullen. haha. pls pls pls update soon! :D

Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing! update will go up soon.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 09:15 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

This story is absolutely AMAZING.  

I love Rose in this story. Seriously. I love how crass and blunt she's just so...Rose. 

URGH. Why is Edward so damned stubborn? Why can't he just tell Bella he cares (ok I know why-it would put both of them in danger)...but still. 

I'm also a little freaked out by this whole Jacob knowing about Bella's situation. I mean, he's upset by Edward and Bella's...whatever they are right now...and he knows. I'm sure that information is worth something or perhaps, something that will endanger his life. 

I want some more Edward and Bella HOT-NESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!


did I mention that I like this story? 

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed Rose. As for Edward, he's stubborn because that's the way he was made. I can't comment on Jacob. Thanks so much for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: babblingqueenm (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 11:44 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

OMG I luv luv luv this story!! Ur a great writer btw! :]

Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: Jen (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 03:16 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

Great story I REALLY LOVE IT!

Author's Response:


Reviewer: Mallers (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 08:25 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

eeeeek! i love this story!!!!! great job!!! the writting is fantastic!

Author's Response:

thanks so much :)

Reviewer: peanut32148 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 07:51 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

the story is really moving along.  Good to see bella interacting with esme and the foundation.  Can't wait for more updates.


Happy Holidays. 

Author's Response:

thanks so much for reviewing as always. update should go up soon. hope you had a good holiday!

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