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Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 07:12 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
i love it!! PLEASE write more soon, i just found this story and spent two hours reading it!! I love it!
Author's Response: thanks! next chapter should go up soon. :)
Reviewer: jtab04 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 06:12 PM · On: February 29, 2008
This is one of my favorite stories! I loved the update and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: mj43068 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 05:48 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
hey, i am new to this site and this is my first ever review so here goes:
i absolutely LOVE this story!
at this point i am really hopeing to see a bit more inside edwards head...more in detail of what he felt about their sexual experience, how he feelings for her may or may not have changed...his attraction to her (physical and mental)...what he thinks of emmetts reaction...how he feels about her fitting into his family and his overall feelings for her and her well being. it is obvious at this point that he is jealous that she would choose to open up (mentally) to jacob and not him and he wishes for her to open up to him...i wish he would try a little harder to get there...
i notice he is becoming more and more protective of her and i would really like to see him comfort her emotionally in a time of need...i wish she would reach out to him more, but in this situation and given his history i feel that he needs to take the initiative...
anyways...i am obsessed with this story and cannot wait for the next chapter! hopefully then we will get a peak @ whats going on in edwards head?!
...ohh and im pretty sure i wrote this same exact thing on your thread, so sorry for the repitition! i was not sure which one you checked or answered more...
Author's Response: no worries about the repetition. I love hearing comments. And EPOV is coming up next chapter, so I hope you will enjoy that. Happy holidays!
Reviewer: PhoenixRising (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 05:24 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
This is such an interesting take on the Edward and Bella relationship. This is such an intriguing story. I can't wait for the next installment!! :-)
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 02:23 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
This is a really great story. If you changed some minor things around, it would be very easy to submit to a publisher.
Author's Response: thank you.
Reviewer: Wordy (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 02:18 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
I want to be:
The letters on your keyboard
The pen in your hand
The cells in your brain
This chapter was so needed, so many lose ends tied in a nice bow.
Im so pleased Bella took the leap, they can now work at being comfortable around each other all the time rather than just in the pool.
You've given us a high.......Which only means we will come crashing down
(You know how good you are at that!!!!)
No deposition is fine, we needed a bit of quality time with B and E
But for the love of 2009
GIVE THIS MAN SOME BIRTHDAY SEX.......WE DEMAND IT!!!!
actual we don't demand it, just a bit fruity for your love words....Wink wink...
Thank you for updating :)
Author's Response: I think you win the award for awesome review... even though you begged for smut. :)
Reviewer: pwtf (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 01:12 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Hey there! I loved it, of course!
The swimming lessons are so sweet...
And I love the Esme/Bella interaction in this chapter! It's great for Bella to see she's cared for.
And the flashback at the beginning was great...seeing how she became involved with the Volturi is very intriguing!
Yet another great chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!
Glad you liked the Esme/Bella bits... I waffled on those.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 11:11 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
I just read the story, I liked it a lot. I like Emmett, the way he is still the funny guy but caring and passionate. Keep it coming
Author's Response: thanks for taking the time to review. Glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: BethanyKnight (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 11:02 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
loved this chapter. I like how they are friends now. Esme is nice. can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: thanks! :)
Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 10:05 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
I can't believe he hasnt told Bella the deposition date has been set...and I can't figure out why he hasn't....i feel just like Bella....always trying to figure him out
great update!
Author's Response: we'll get Edward's point of view next chapter. :)
Reviewer: truthis2rare (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 09:59 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
I'm so anxious over this. is he falling in love with her? why isn't he ignoring emmet, and i want bella to have more sex. poor girl's life is in jepordy. and i can't believe he didn't tell her about the deposition...
Author's Response: we'll get Edward's POV next chapter.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 09:15 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
I can't believe that Emmett marred our Edward's beautiful face. What was he thinking? Oh ya, that he slept with Bella! I can't believe Bella didn't figure it out, but then we are talking about Bella here. I don't blame Bella one bit either, I'd want to have sex over and over again if I were her too. Little does she know I bet he feels the same way and is just trying to do right by Emmett. You can practically cut the sexual tension in the pool with a knife. I think it's great you didn't have Edward tell Bella about the depo. date, it's just un-needed stress for her. I love this story so much, it is one of my favorites.
Author's Response: You see the deposition as unneeded stress for Bella. Edward sees it that way too. The question, though, is how Emmett and Bella will see it... because they will find out eventually.
Thanks so much for your thoughtful review.
Reviewer: moonwitche (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2008 07:57 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
I can't really think of anything to say except I loved it and would really appreciate more, as soon as life allows. Thanks bunches!
Happy Holidays!
Author's Response: Happy holidays to you, too :)
Glad you liked this chapter!
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 05:28 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Thanks for updating! hope for another update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review. :)
Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 05:23 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
i love how edward is so curious about bella but is apprehensive in asking her anything, and when he finally does she doesn't really want to give him the answer. i really want to see how the relationship develops from here especially since he still has yet to tell her about the deposition! Awesome work!
Author's Response: She doesn't want to tell him, but she does tell him something. They are inching closer.
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 04:59 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Great chapter! I can't wait to read how the deposition goes! I love how Edward and Bella are getting so much closer to each other!! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: starsandthemoon (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 04:56 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Great chapter!!! I stop everything and read when I see that you update! Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it :)
Reviewer: sandyk199 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 04:21 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Awwww! Now I'm getting all whiney mouth. No danger, that's okay ... but not even any smoochies? C'mon ...
Well, guess I'm just going to have to start nagging you for another chapter then. Brace for impact girl!
Author's Response: No smoochies. Yet. Thanks for your reviews. :)
Reviewer: sandyk199 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 04:11 AM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
Ohhh! OHHH!
Hot dayum woman this was a good chapter. Of course, it goes without saying that I cracked up when I read the line about the boys fighting over Hilary Clinton - hilarious! Hell, if an Aussie can get a US political joke then you know you're doing something right.
So uh ... there's more of this coming soon, right?
Reviewer: sandyk199 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 04:11 AM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
Ohhh! OHHH!
Hot dayum woman this was a good chapter. Of course, it goes without saying that I cracked up when I read the line about the boys fighting over Hilary Clinton - hilarious! Hell, if an Aussie can get a US political joke then you know you're doing something right.
So uh ... there's more of this coming soon, right?
Reviewer: starcrossdlover (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 02:26 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
oh boo...i mean YAY...i mean...i wish there were more. i wish it just never stopped so i could read it forever...i love it that much. i know i've said it before and i'm sure everyone else has too but this story is freaking amazing! i got the alert that the chapter was posted and even though i had been sleeping, i got up and started reading. sleep can wait...this story cannot :) hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
I know it wasn't a super-long chapter, but lots of little plot threads advanced in this one. Thanks so much for taking the time to review. :)
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 01:12 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
You updated and it made my entire weekend. I hope you do that again soon. ;)
Author's Response: I hope to update in several days, but we'll see. :)
Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 12:47 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Thank you so much for updating this story!!!
It is one of my favourite fan fics and I was delighted to see a new chapter.
Keep up the good work :)
And happy holidays!
Author's Response: Happy holidays to you, too! :)
Reviewer: justagirl (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 12:16 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
I really liked Bella's voice in this chapter and the way her thoughts flowed. Very natural. I loved the development of Edward and Bella's relationship in this chapter. Please update again soon!!! You and Oxy totally made my Friday with your updates :)
Author's Response: I worked really hard on Bella's voice in this chapter, trying to bring her back to someone we could root for and pull her out of her funk. I still haven't read Oxy's chapter yet and I am so excited to read it.
Thanks for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 11:22 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Oh, nice chapter... I love Edward, even if he appears ice cold sometimes. He is still HOT!
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thanks!
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