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Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 08:27 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

love your story. just read it for the first time. i love story lines like these.

Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 07:28 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Emmett. Is. An. Ass. Sorry, but does he not think the guy who's been living with her would know what she wants? The hot tub scene had me giggling. It was funny seeing Edward trying not to jump Bella.

Author's Response:

To be fair to Emmett, this was Edward's POV. Neither of them give the other enough credit. Glad you liked the hot tub scene :)

Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 06:55 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Yeah you posted another chapter!!!  It's fortunate that my husband is snoring really loud right now and I can read it undisturbed :~)  My first thought was that it was way too short (that's a compliment not a complaint).  I love this story and can't get enough. I have a new found love for truth or dare, however that was a BIG tease (shame on you).  I can't wait to see Bella's reaction to Emmett's visit and his news about the deposition.  I also have to say I love how Edward is trying to protect and keep Bella happy. Well my Tylenol PM has kicked in and I'm off to bed. 

Happy New Years!

Author's Response:

Happy New Year to you, too, Agnus! Thanks, as always, for your thoughtful review. It's not a really a tease if I deliver eventually, right?

Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 06:25 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

Interesting that the Volturi gave her a scholarship - and required that she work for them after graduating. Raises the question of why her, what's so special about Bella that they deem it worth their time and money? It shouldn't be too hard for them to recruit suitable people fresh out of school.

Like this story very much, the plot line is fascinating and I'm really looking forward to how this will develop. Bella's and Edward's relationship is intriguing, they both keep their feelings locked away although both are increasingly attracted to each other.

How will Edward's family react if/when they are informed about their real relationship? And how will Rosalie react, I doubt she will be very pleased.

Great job, update soon!

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 06:10 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

I was saddened there was no hanky panky, but the sexual tension, you could cut it with a knife.  They like each other way more than they let on.  Especially Edward, Bella wears alot of her feelings on her sleeve, you can see right through her, but not Eddie, but we expect no less from him.  As usual Emmett is hilarious!  Plopping his feet on the coffee table, I'd kill him, Edward probably wanted too!  Then not leaving that was the best. 

Author's Response:

You have no idea how excited I am that Edward and Bella are getting closer. Glad you're enjoying the UST. And yes, Edward wanted to kill Emmett, but they have that kind of relationship. They respect each other, but they're different people.

Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 06:01 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Woah, i love it! i love all the love in the air, i honestly thought something was going to happen in that hot tub.. haha. Happy New Year!

..:Talyor Is Jacob:..

Author's Response:

Happy new year to you, too!

Reviewer: COLDASICEx3 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 05:54 AM · On: February 29, 2008

I seriously think this would be an amazing book. The storyline is so fresh...and so not 'Edward/Bella Fanfic'.

Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 05:03 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Awww. Damnit, Emmett! You're totally cock blocking Eddie! Edward and Bella need to do more cute stuff together!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 04:39 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

he cares! yay! its a bit more obvious now!

Author's Response:

he does care. :)

Reviewer: WndrngY (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 04:30 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008


I just joined this site, but I've been reading this story for a few weeks. I have to tell you it's fantastic--real plot, believable characters, unbelievable situation that I believe anyway--I love it. And I'll keep looking for the next installment.

Question: Is Emmett really crushing on Bella? If so, please tell me he's not going to act on it! I hate cheaters and I like your Emmett, so PLEASE!


Author's Response:

First, Emmett would not cheat on Rosalie.

Second, thanks so much for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it. It is an unbelievable situation, and I'm so glad the writing is decent enough that you believe it anyway.

Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 04:18 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

You need to change the names and publish this.


I'm serious, C.


Also, hung over Edward? My favorite ever. 

Author's Response:

Thanks, T. And you really like hung over Edward better than wet, naked Edward? Pssh. I don't believe you.

Reviewer: Rochelle Allison (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 03:54 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

oh man, what a tease! i was so hopeful (ridiculous, i know) that they would kiss again when they were tipsy.... but i guess it's better they didn't. edward really is a good guy isn't he.  :)  i look forward to the next chapter, partially to see what's going to go down w/ the deposition but mainly to see more ExB. great chapter!!

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed this chapter. And is it really teasing if I deliver eventually?

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 03:53 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

When will Edward realize he loves her?  It's killing me!  But I love it.  Good sexual tension, btw.

Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 03:46 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Your story NEVER disappoints me! I was SO hoping that Edward would have his way with Bella...but NO! That couldn't happen...great chapter anyway. Loved the truth or dare game.

Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed this chapter... even if there were no sexy times. Or, I guess there were sexy times, but not sex.

Reviewer: ipunchedawerewolfintheface (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 03:45 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Argh you tease! And I was so convinced they were going to cave and have sex again. Dang dang dang.

Love it, as usual, despite the lack of copulation. Ha, what a gross word. I love how Edward's all protective of Bella. But Emmett is too, and I like how they have different ideas of what protection entails. I suppose Edward thinks he knows her better than Emmett does, but Emmett is thinking he knows her better than Edward does. Emmett thinks about it from a cop standpoint. Edward's got the emotional aspect (as much as he'd like to deny it) while Emmett's got the whole "this is my job, she's been entrusted to me to keep safe" aspect. What a conundrum. Le sigh.

Author's Response:

It is a conundrum. I'm glad you appreciate both sides. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 03:40 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

wow that was just brilliant!  though i am not liking emmett so much right now. i dont know why but i dont think he gives edward enough credit nor does he really know bella. great work i cant wait for the next update!

Author's Response:

to be fair to Emmett, it was Edward's POV... and when we were in Emmett's POV, he ripped on Edward. Now that we have hung over Edward, he might not be seeing Emmett all that clearly either.

Reviewer: firemoon_dragon (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 03:40 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

oooh i want to play truth or dare with Edward!! cant wait for your next update!

Author's Response:


Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 03:29 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

thanks for the amazing update. i love how the drunkeness caused their walls to come down. you're building their relationship nicely. can't wait for more! and please... don't let emmett take the light from bella's eyes. or if he does...have edward bring her sparkle back!

Author's Response:

thanks! I can't make promises about Emmett and Edward... but I hope everyone will like where the story goes.

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 03:26 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

So glad for the update!  I am really liking the flashbacks to Bella's past with the Volturi.  It has me intrigued about what happened!!

Absolutely loving Edward and Bella's relationship.  I love that they talk more.  The chemistry between these too is incredible ... intense.  I love how passionate he is about his protectiveness of her.  And the sexual tension is hot!

Great job and can't wait for more!

Oh yeah, thanks for giving us ... drunk, wet, naked Edward.  Such a wonderful way to start the new year!!! :) 

Author's Response:

I do have a soft spot for as wet Edward... in case nobody noticed. So glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for your thoughtful review. :)

Reviewer: starsandthemoon (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 03:13 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Truth or dare is a truly awesome game!  Thanks for teasing us a bit!  We love it!  Fantastic as always!!

Author's Response:


Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 03:13 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

i love getting little snidbits of Bella's past~i have a we know how Bella's parents died...esp. her Dad?

i really liked their little drunk truth or dare!!!

Author's Response:

her dad was killed in the line of duty. that is what Bella said in an earlier chapter.

Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 03:12 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Arg!!!! You got me all worked up thinking they were going to go at it again! Cocktease! lol

I enjoyed the beginning with the flashback; it was nice to see how naiive Bella was when she first went in to work before she got caught up in all that mess, and how confused she was by how Aro knew her. I'm might curiious, I can tell you that much.

And Edward! He's quite the gentleman, even though he doesn't want to be. I appreciate that he didn't do anything, and how he almost fell in the hottub because that was funny hahahaha

Thanks for the update! I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

thanks so much for your thoughtful review. I'm glad you enjoyed the flashback... I'm trying to get enough data across for everything to flow smoothly.

Reviewer: pwtf (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 02:46 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Okay, I'm now completely in love with tequila, truth or dare, and hot tubs. When it's Bella and Edward, of course. Or me and Edward. It'd be worth the splitting headache.

That...was absolutely incredible. Love it, so much.

And at the end, there, I loved how Edward was telling Emmett that he knew Bella better. Emmett means well, but I have to admit, it looks like Edward is right here...

Can't wait to see what happens...if Emmett does end up telling her about the deposition date or if Edward is able to stop him...and if he tells, how Bella responds.

Oh, and I still love the beginnings, the little flashbacks, seeing how Bella got involved since she's still not telling Edward!

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the flashbacks... I've been struggling with how to convey all that data.

To be fair to Emmett, we don't know how much time he spent with Bella when she was in need of protecting. He could safely assume he does know Bella better... Bella and Edward haven't really had that many heart-to-hearts.

Thanks, as always, for your review. I really appreciate you taking the time to write a thoughtful review.

Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 02:42 AM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

hahah truth or dare...greatest game. ever.

Author's Response:

Isn't it?

Reviewer: PassionforTwilight (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 02:38 AM · On: February 29, 2008

How can the banner for your story alone cause me to want to scream for joy? This story is just incredible. Your characters are deep and believable, and the dialogue is perfection. 

For this chapter, damn drunk Edward and his superhuman restraint. Two more shots and we would have had some hot, wet jacuzzi I right? ;) This is amazing. Keep up the great work. 

Author's Response:

Two more shots and Edward would have puked on your shoes. I actually took shots out to make sure he wouldn't get sick.

Glad you're enjoying the story :)

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