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Reviewer: christtt315 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 07:02 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
So good! Just let Bella and Edward have sex already!!!!!!!!! But so good!
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: elizabeth2323 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 07:01 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
Hottest word in the chapter-----yes. This really is my favorite story and I so look forward to each new posting!
Author's Response: YES can be hot. thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:59 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
Great update. Loved them getting drunk and playing truth or dare. Such an excellent story all around. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: thanks so much :)
Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:59 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
what a great chapter! the hot tub.... man! he has more control than I do! haha! Love the update!!
xoxo
jennie
Author's Response: thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:55 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
Excellent chapter! Loved their game of Truth or Dare. And then Edward's first line after waking up ("My mouth tasted like ass.") made me bust out laughing. I so wasn't expecting that. LMAO
Great job as always! Can't wait for the next one. :)
~Cat~
Author's Response: Ha. Well, I couldn't think of an adjective for the morning after drinking that much tequila. Ass was the best I could do.
Reviewer: iheartnj (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:55 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
Happy New Year!! Awesome chapter - I love how protective Edward has become! It's so nice to see them becoming more and more comfortable and open with one another. I love how you are developing this story - and as always, I can't wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks so much :)
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:55 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
Awww man...I really thought they would have hot, horny, drunken sex in the hot tub haha..I was looking forward to it! j/k
Edward is actually being nice now, worrying about Bella's happiness and all of that...who would've thought that was possible haha
Author's Response: Well... they're not quite ready. Edward and Bella's relationship is evolving.
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:52 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
Oh, he obviously cares about her so much. *sigh* I loved their game of Truth or Dare... I wanna play that with a hammered Edward. Please?
And yeah... Emmett probably wouldn't even believe that Edward knows her better. So sad.
And Edward is gonna take her somewhere sunny and warm and wonderful! YAY! Though I really don't expect that until later. :) But, it's something to look forward to!
Author's Response: Sunny and warm and wonderful is where I want to be. Writing about Edward drinking tequila almost made me want to join in. Then I remembered my last experience with tequila.
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:51 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
Loved the update. Loving the story too. =)
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:50 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
I don't think he realizes that he is the reason for the sparkle in her eyes.
Author's Response: So perceptive.
Reviewer: mandalynn (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:38 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
Why couldn't Edward just get a little more drunk???? Or be sober enough to take her??? Pretty much reading a sex scene means my husband is getting some tonight, but I guess hes not gettinga any tonight! Jk Love it!
Author's Response: Oh, poor hubby.
Reviewer: moonwitche (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:37 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
I liked it... I hope they start talking to each other more. Thanks for the update!
...sorry about my lame reviews.
Author's Response: Don't be sorry. I appreciate you taking the time to review. :)
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:32 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
Oh incredible chapter!!! Scared to see how Bella will react to the depo news and possibly to finding out Eddie kept it from her....But anxious as well! LOVED the Truth or Dare!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! The truth or dare was something I couldn't resist doing.
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:28 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
*heart breaks** Ok, Emmett is right, and she should have known, and continued to live anyway, but Edward is right too. He wuves her!! She loves him. Death to the Volturi!!
Author's Response: I think you summed up the whole story in four sentences, lol. thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:28 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
I love protective Emmett and Edward! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: me too :)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: withthevampsofcourse (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 06:27 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
I DO NOT DO METH
SCOTCH IS MY DRUG OF CHOICE.
AND JANDCO, OF COURSE.
you know how i feel about this. you do. the hot tub is delish, and i surely do love seeing it again.
loverly, dear. remember the spiritually nekkit thing...
Author's Response: Two reviews in one day. I am honored.
Reviewer: Swedish_Chef (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 04:46 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Nice!! This is exactly the type of story that I subconsciously wanted to find on twilighted haha. I just started to read Twilight fanfiction so it truly surprised me when I found a story like this. I love the whole storyline in general and the subplots you put in are really unique. You have no idea how much I cringed when I saw that Alice was going to find Jacob and Bella making out haha. Also, how you subtly go parallel to the book at various points is really nice- it usually takes me awhile to catch it, like Edward leaving for two weeks = New Moon. I was proud when I found that out haha. It's not overly noticable which I really like.
I really can't wait until your next review. When the Volturi appear I will probably squeal in delight and anticipation haha. Hope your Holiday is great!
Author's Response: Happy holidays to you too. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks so much for your thoughtful review -- I did try and put some parallels in, and I always like it when people notice.
Reviewer: angel1babe86 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 12:38 AM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Please update!!! I love this story... the dynamics in Edward and Bella's relationship are amazing! waiting anxiously for the next chapter...
Author's Response: I hope to put the next chapter up today. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: withthevampsofcourse (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 11:05 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
bless you, child, for keeping edward constantly wet.
there, see? i can review. when i want to. it still rankles that you think you were invisible to me until you got famous, BB. heh
Author's Response: Oh, the timing of your comment. I am currently writing another scene where he is wet. Apparently wet Edward is one of my favorites. Perhaps it is too much of a good thing... I'll have to re-evaluate.
I never said you couldn't review. Don't be rankled. You have tons of reviewers. Everyone knows this.
Reviewer: IloveTwilight (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 09:32 PM · On: February 29, 2008
I love it!!! Please continue.
Author's Response: Next chapter should go up sometime today :)
Reviewer: CNB123 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 05:49 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
I just found this story and it is definetly going into my favorites. You are a brilliant writer and I am so impressed with what you have done with these characters. I hope there are many more chapters to come as i will be checking back often. Definetly one for the favorite section!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind review. There are many chapters to come. The next chapter should go up tomorrow. :)
Reviewer: goddess1871 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 02:07 PM · On: February 29, 2008
Wow! What fun! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: glad you're enjoying the story so far :)
Reviewer: Jessic-x (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 01:34 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
No way, no wayyyy
i want another chapter :(
now, :( i dont want to wait, it's an awsome story
Author's Response: new chapter should go up tonight or tomorrow.
Reviewer: CasalieAnn (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 01:41 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Nice :) Great Story can't wait to hear more from you!
Author's Response: next chapter will go up tonight or tomorrow. :)
Reviewer: CasalieAnn (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 10:51 AM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008
Hell yeah! Bella spilling wine on those girls! woot! nice chapter :D
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