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Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:23 PM · On: March 22, 2008
I love the 'WWEFD' - that was great!
Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:21 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Wow the stuff is about to hit the fan lol. Alice will be at the house the week after the deposition...drama :) Thanks this was so worth the wait.
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:19 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
love this story. hope there is an update soon.
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:19 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
bella atacked emmett? WOOT! What a laugh. interesting chapter. You go girl!
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008
Okay, I can definately tell I'm going to run out of adjectives very quickly for these reviews. This is one of the best stories I've read, honestly. I'm so badly hooked here.
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:12 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Headdesk!! NO! Pregnant, big-target-on-her-belly Alice cannot stay with you!!
Pay attention to the plot, girl!! Big, Bad, evil Volturi will hurt you first and most!! If anything happens to her or the baby, Bella will kill herself after the badguys!
Gah! This is basics, people! Don't have sex or smoke pot at abandoned summer camps, don't touch twig formations in the woods, don't go with anyone who tells you "the hero needs you, come quick!", and don't let innocents in the house a week before you testify to put some big bad guys away!!!!!!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:02 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
This story is absolutely FANTASTIC!! I don't think I can say enough good things about it. Everytime you update it's spot on =]
I'm still a little confused about the situation with Edward and Bella. Does he have feelings for her or are they just complicated? It seems rather complicated...I want them to fall in love. I do. But I'm siding with Emmett...the implications of them being together seems dangerous. Their whole family could become threats. I sort of want her to back down and just stop her attempts to testify.
I'm nervous for them. I'm also sincerely hoping that you update really soon...seriously. The tension is nail-biting.
Reviewer: angelvamp (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:01 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Another great chapter!
Reviewer: elizabeth2323 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:59 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
at first I thought---booo if Alice stays with them then there will be continued no action on the B and E front but then I thought that could be good b/c Alice would expect them to share a bedroom so they would be forced into the same bed again. Let see where you take this---Truly this is my favorite story--I can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: wants_an_edward86 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:57 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Wow, that was way intense in the beginning..i love how Emmett can't see her all innocent any more, haha. I hope everything can work out between Edward and her, and if Alice is staying with them, they are TOTALLY gonna have to act as a real couple...kisses and well *wink* *wink* everything! haha Great chapter...no worries on the time, it's always such a treat to when it's finally posted :)
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:54 PM · On: February 29, 2008
Wow - this chapter was fantastic. I just found it today and I can't wait to keep reading...its very intriguing.
Reviewer: SuburbanSun (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:48 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Another excellent chapter!
First off, I love your characterization of Emmett. I think it's spot on and a pleasure to read. I enjoy the relationship he has with your Edward, and how even though they're adults with their own lives, that brotherly sense of competition is still strong.
"I used more weight when I did bicep curls, but that was irrelevant right now." Hee. Love it.
Additionally, the concerns Emmett has about Bella and Edward are very interesting-- they'd never occurred to me before as I read the story. It was easy to think that Emmett just didn't think his Bruce Wayne playboy of a brother was good for Bella, but it makes complete sense that he's worried about the whole family as well. Very legitimate concerns.
Ooh, and I can't wait to see what happens when Alice stays with Bella and Edward and they're forced to act even more couply than they already do! So much potential for hilarity and intriguing developments... I'm excited.
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:44 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
man i love your story!
i wonder what situations alice staying with E&B will bring..
can't wait for the next update!!
Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:39 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
It's kind of rediculous how excited I get when this story updates!
Author's Response: or maybe kind of awesome.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:38 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
I had never considered what Emmett was thinking, it is a big risk for everyone. That is scarry, and honestly makes the story even better, unfortunatelly it also shows the option of a not so happy ending, but makes the story better and picks at my curiosity, what is going to happen? with the deposition, the party, the trial, Edward's and Bella's relationship, how everyone in the familiy is falling for her. Wow so many questions. Please update soon!!!! can't wait for whatever is coming next.
Reviewer: twitilated (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:34 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
You know, when I win the lottery, I swear I would love to hire you to finish this story! I am so intrigued with the plot line, character development and the exploration of Bella and the Volturi. You really could turn this into a novel. Thank you for another great read.
Author's Response: you're welcome :)
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:34 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Oh limona, loved spending time with Alice and Bella. I'm still smirking that Alice will spend time with Bella and Edward while Jasper is out of town. This truly is a wonderful story!
Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:34 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
I hope things are okay with you. You sounded a little troubled in the opening notes. The chapter was great. You made me laugh by envisioning Bella slapping around on big ol' Emmett. When he caught a sneek peak of her boobs I laughed too. It was almost as if he was grossed out by it, because it was like being flashed by his sister. That is sweet and endearing.
This chapter enlightened me a bit. I, much like Emmett, hadn't really thought of the far reaching repercussions of having Bella stay with Edward. The facade they have created will affect all of Emmett's family, and potentially not a in a good way as far as the Volturi are concerned. Emmett is just now coming to this realization and it will be a heavy burden to bear alone. I feel sorry for Emmett. He knows that something terrible could happen to Bella, not matter how well he does his job of protecting her, and now he knows that something bad could happen to Edward, Rose, his children and everyone else. Plus, add in the knowledge that no matter what Edward and Bella can't feasibly be together long term because of the circumstances and you have some heavy duty baggage for old Em to be luggin' around.
The chapter turned out great, in spite of your concerns otherwise. You are doing an awesome job and this story just gets better and better with each chapter. The characterizations continue to evolve and the plot is develping quite nicely. I can't wait for the deposition. I feel like that will be a major turning point in the story. Also, I am excited to see how Bella and Edward manage with Alice staying in the house. No separate bedrooms during that period of time. Alice is very astute and that would not slip by her.
Take care and I hope things get better for you.
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:34 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Limona! Incredible as always! And as always waiting for more more more!!
Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:32 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Really great chapter. So since Alice is going to be staying over does that mean Bella and Edward will be sharing a room...
Can't wait for more updates.
Reviewer: pwtf (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:32 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
So glad the chapter got up tonight...and what a chapter it was!!!
It's SO Bella for her to be more upset about Emmett interfering in her relations with Edward than the news of the deposition. And I love that she stood up against Emmett and hit him. And that Edward finally admitted to someone besides himself that Bella is special.
That description of Rose's overnight french toast cracked me up...because I tried to make it once with a friend, but we were out of the right kind of bread, so we decided to make our own bread. An hour later, we'd finally managed to make the dough...another half hour later it still wasn't rising...we finally just cooked it, and by then it'd been so long that we didn't even end up making the french toast. I can never think about it the same way again.
I thought it was so cute and so funny that Emmett corrected Libby's grammar.
I love that Bella is trying to keep herself from worrying about the deposition and that, even though she's upset with Emmett, she still trusts him to keep her safe.
The Bella/Alice interactions were awesome! I'm so glad that they're bonding a bit. Bella's adamance against inviting Jessica, Lauren, and Tanya was priceless, but Alice would never understand since she only knows the surface lie...
And you HAD to mention chocolate cake didn't you? I've been fantasizing about cake on another thread...especially luscious chocolate cake. mmm...is 9:20 too late to run to the store to buy a cake?
Alice shall be staying with Edward and Bella, hmm...a lot can happen there...I won't bore you with all my predictions of thoughts of potential...
Oh, and we came SO close to finding out more about the Volturi...I didn't want that section to end where it did!
I can't wait to see what the next chapter shall bring!!!!!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:31 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Great chapter and Bella even beat up Emmett! Update again soon!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:30 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Hmm...if Bella wants to get anywhere with Edward then maybe having Alice over isn't the best idea. Of course, it would force them to sleep in the same room, so maybe it will actually help things along...isn't the deposition during that time though?
Author's Response: deposition is june 9. although you're making me paranoid because I was too tired to double-check my dates....
Reviewer: jtab04 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:30 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Great chapter!
Reviewer: kamce (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:28 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Alice....staying with Edward and Bella.....there is going to have to be some room rearranging isn't there!! Closets being switched, Beds being switched!! Interesting!!
As Always, Limona, Great Chapter!
Can't wait for the next one....please, please, please don't keep me waiting toooo long.
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