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Reviewer: AJRimmer (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:06 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Poor Bella and Edward...they're in such a sucky position. Both wanting something and not being in quite the right place to deal with it. The dinner table kisses were hot, though. And, I'm looking forward to see the result of this sleeping arrangement and how it affects their ability to keep their heads with each other.
Author's Response: It is a sucky position... but that is part of what makes the story, I think.
Reviewer: VampGirl (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:00 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
As always, I can't wait for the next chapter. Very interesting story. It keeps me coming back for more.
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: kelseymarie33 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:53 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
AHH. Amazing chapter.
In bed together? Sexayy.
OHHHH.!
I loved it.
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: ForbiddenFruit (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 09:05 AM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
I've just started reading your story, and I haven't been able to tear myself away. I'm anxiously waiting for the new addition to the story- I can't wait to read more! Your writing style is fantastic, and I find myself more and more surprised as the events span out. I can't wait for Edward and Bella to get back together, if thats what happens. I hope it does! It would be interesting to see if Emmet acts on his new found attraction for Bella, though. Keep writing and good luck with the Eddie and Bellie awards! It's a shame this story isn't allowed to be entered.
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review. I hope to post the update Sunday or Monday. Glad you're enjoying the story! :)
Reviewer: LatinaLibra (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 02:06 PM · On: February 29, 2008
This is my absolute favorite story on this site and I CANNOT wait this long for updates! I'm sorry if it sounds demanding, but as soon as an update is posted, we all want the very next chapter after that as well! It's a perpetuating cycle that won't end because this story is so good! Please update soon!
Reviewer: bookedwardisbetter (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 05:27 PM · On: February 29, 2008
please update soon!!!
Reviewer: Alternative_Emo (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 03:17 AM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Great! I just love this story. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Cafferine (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 09:46 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
I reeeeeealllly like it! & I'm happy that Jacob's no longer in the picture!
Reviewer: lizzie_4_taylor (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 11:27 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
my favourite chapter so far lol :)
all i got to say is...finally lol
...xx
Reviewer: Camimae707 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 07:06 AM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
yay! good job! update VERY VERY soon!
Reviewer: Drea (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 02:15 PM · On: February 29, 2008
Please Please Please update soon!!!
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 12:18 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
fucked up.
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 11:12 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
i'm still gonna kill jacob. that bastard. and bella's a slut. y do ur characters hav messd up morals?
Reviewer: addicttwilight2 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 10:54 AM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
When will the next chapter be up????
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 10:40 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
HOLY FUCK! I'LL KILL THEM!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SHIT! forget the volturi killing jacob. I'LL kill them BOTH!
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 10:33 AM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008
FUCK JACOB! I hope HE dies when the volturi come 4 bella. MUAHAHAHAHAHA
Reviewer: isisb (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 08:27 AM · On: February 29, 2008
I'm loving this story so far. It is by far one of my favorites. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: addicttwilight2 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 08:04 AM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
Just wanted to add a few more comments: I loved this! It's so wonderful. Your word choices and the thoughts of the characters (Bella especially) cracked me up. Examples: "teensy weensy" and "*this close*". You are such a fabulous story-teller. No filler in here -- just all great stuff. I wanted to tell you that I'm surprisingly conflicted about your Edward (not sure I like him), but that's what's so great about this story. You took those familiar characters and spinned them into something real that is mmediately identifiable and incredibly enjoyable to read. Thank you so much! Please keep writing forever!!!
Reviewer: kris25 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 01:02 AM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
I really enjoyed reading this story, I found it compelling but very realistic at the same time, and I love that your Edward and Bella aren't immediately in sync, they're still figuring it out. Also, I find it interesting that you made Rose and Bella's friendship easier than Alice and Bella's, it makes a nice change. I can't wait for updates!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I've had a lot going on recently, but the update should come in several days. :)
Reviewer: addicttwilight2 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 09:19 PM · On: February 29, 2008
Holy crap. This is good stuff. Thank you so much for giving people entertaining material to read.
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 09:26 AM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
I loved this story! It's so different, but soo good. I just wish there was a little more tension between Edward and Bella. I still love it though. Wonder what's gonna happen when Alice moves in with them....
Reviewer: Nicab (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 06:43 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Just found your story and I read it in one sitting! I love it and I'm really really really looking forward to and update soon!!!
Reviewer: Lalina (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2009 05:32 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
I love love love your portrayal of Edward in this fic... he just screams sensuality (yum) Looking forward to your next update!
Reviewer: truthordare (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 12:04 PM · On: February 29, 2008
l o v e this story - its actually reallyreally good and has some flavour to it!! please bring more i´m so excited for moooorrreee !!
Reviewer: Shaz (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 11:45 AM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! I'm new to this site and this fic is the first one I read and first I actually thought it was completed because I didn't notice the "no" next to "Complete" and was so sad to find out that there wasn't more to it...but now I'm sooooooooo excited and eager to read the rest of it! I love your style of writing, keep up the awesome job!
Author's Response: thank you! I've had that happen to me before... when you find out there are no more "nexts" to click, it is such a disappointment. I hope to post the next chapter in a few days.
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