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Reviewer: Sam362 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 08:21 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I just found this story tonight and I couldn't stop reading. I am already in a panic knowing I won't know more for a while. Ahhh! On a more serious note, really well writen, very entrancing!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: RMCC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 08:20 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I was thinking about this story earlier tonight, and how sad I was that it hadn't been updated in so long. I was lamenting the fact that you may never return to it (not that I'm judging - I've been known to abandon stories myself). Imagine how thrilled I was to get online and see a new chapter!
Author's Response: I will not abandon HIPS. I can't. I love it too much!
Reviewer: kiwi (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:59 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Ah! The anticipation!!!!
I started reading this story 3 weeks ago, and once I had read the last posted chapter, I have checked the page every single day to see if there was an update. I was not disappointed today. I loved this chapter. And I really really want more.
This is certainly my favorite story. Characterization is very realistic. I like this Edward, although he does seem to be a bit on the distant side. What's with this sleeping with her, ignoring her, then feeling her up and sleeping with her but not sleeping with her? No real man would be able to control that temptation as much as we girls would like to think he exists.
Author's Response: I'm glad your efforts were rewards. You can add the story to your favorites and then tell Twilighted to send you an email every time it is updated if you want to save the effort of checking daily. :)
And in regards to what a "real man" would do... Edward has almost superhuman control.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:30 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
They need to get together! I know there is risk involved, but they need each other. Please?
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, nofangsallowed. :)
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:29 PM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
Ok it's 12:16 in the morning and I need to go to bed. I will have some great dreams tonight and I have you to thank for that. I plan on finishing the remaining chapters tomorrow so post soon :)
Reviewer: Annaleah (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:22 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
aaahh, it hurts when it's over. I never want to stop reading. Everything is so interesting, you give just the right amount of detail, and all of these events in the story and the days coming up, I look forward to each one because you write each thing so brilliantly. Alice is adorable, and Edward is kind of a rockstar, with all his money and his dancing and his secrecy and his music. Bella is a lucky girl right now, although I'd be very scared too if i were her. She is amazing.
Okay I'm rambliing, key points: your story rocks and I can't wait for more.
AL
Author's Response: AL,
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I never though of Edward as rockstar-y... but he is kind of projecting that aura, isn't he?
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:15 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I loved this chapter but the sexual tension is killing me. The kiss... wow.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: I always update as soon as I can.
Reviewer: espeinaz (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:12 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Ack! I'm so ready for him to get it on with her again! The UST is driving me crazy!
Author's Response: Sorry?
Reviewer: pavelowwife53 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:10 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
How rude! A cliff hangar! Ugh... I really would appreciate more. So if you dont mind, HURRY UP!!! :) This is so wonderful!
Author's Response: I always post as fast as I can.
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:01 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Let just say that was really good and I am also waiting for saturday :)
Reviewer: mandalynn (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 06:34 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Welcome back! We have all missed you and of course Bella and Edward! Edward is a great actor, I would have loved to know what was going on in thoughts about the nights events. So much that needs to be uncovered! I hope soon, also, that Edward will just be able to tell her how he really feels about her and let her in a little. She needs a companion. I feel so sad when she talks about how she is in her room and he is in his room, when they could be doing so much together in just one room. I love where you left it off though. I hope there is little sleeping going on. Even if they don't get to the sex part, I would still love the dialog between them. I think I have to say besides the intamate moments they share, my favorite parts are when they are just talking and getting to know each other. Anyways great job Limona! Every two weeks will be tough but I know it is all worth it!
Author's Response: Mandalynn, thanks for your sweet review. I'm glad you enjoy the ExB time, whether they're talking or doing um, other stuff.
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 06:24 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I am so thrilled to see your back to writting again. Thank you so much for this update. I am excited to read more as you post new chapters. Thanks again! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: thanks, Christine :)
Reviewer: sizone (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 06:23 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
This was an awesome chapter. The way you show some of Bella's memories from the Voltori in flash backs are great. The tension between Bella and Edward could be cut through with a knife right about now. And wow…Edward sure does know how to take advantage of a situation, doesn’t he? I feel bad for Bella though, with Edward cockblocking and egging her on at the same time, it's no wonder she's confused about her feelings for him. It would have been so great if they could just acknowledge their feelings for each other and get engaged for real. I wonder, what did Edward talk to Jacob about? Was it jealous Edward, sneaking around to make sure the Gardner knows his place? Or simply protective Edward, telling Jacob to keep his mouth shut about Bella’s identity? I guess I’ll just have to wait and see. Deposition time soon, I hope it won't be too hard for Bella, she's been through a lot after all. ;)
Love the story by the way :) Keep up the good work, and update as soon as possible!
~Sizone
Author's Response: Sizone,
Thank you for the the thoughtful review. I can't really answer your question other than to say that everything Edward did in this chapter had a purpose, and the conversation with Jacob was no exception.
Reviewer: Dental Diva (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 06:09 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Great story. Keep it coming.
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 06:06 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008
Best line - ...and she had fuck-me eyes.
It just gets better and better!
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 05:54 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
love this chapter. cant wait till the next one.
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: Kathryn Mason-Sykes (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 05:40 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Everytime I read the word "friends" a little part of me dies with Bella. :(
Good chapter. I guess my mind is still waiting for the other shoe to drop, you know? This secret group that Edward's been invited to join, Laurent's creeper factor...it's could mean something, it could be nothing. The only constants I know are that Jessica is annoying and Edward and Bella are more than friends. Whether or not they choose to admit it to each other.
I can't wait to read the next chapter. Sorry work's such a bear for you at the moment!
Author's Response: Aw, me too. But it is a love story...
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 05:34 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
aww
thats adoreable(:
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: willistongirl (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008
One of my favorite stories. Not so much angst that it gets irritating but with enough plot to keep me interested. It's the perfect balance. I absolutely love it.
Reviewer: 10010 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 05:11 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Your story is my favorite story in all of fanfiction land. I can't wait to see where it goes!
Reviewer: forever_dreamer (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 05:11 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Again - and not surprisingly - another great chapter. I can't wait to read about what Bella's sleepless night will be like. [and I will admit that the Bella/Edward make-out session was both anticipated and appreciated. And not to mention totally hot! ; )]
Author's Response: Thanks! BxE needed a little steamy time together. It had been a while.
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 05:06 PM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
Best Lines- The soap he used when he was naked, in the shower. And Never had I envisioned that watching a man open a bottle of wine would turn me on. Bring on the wine :)
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 04:58 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I'm so grateful for a new chapter! I absolutely devoured it. I wonder what Edward is up to with all the PDA -- is he taking advantage of the social engagement to do what he'd like to be doing anyway? Will that behavior be repeated in their upcoming social engagements? Poor Bella--it's kinda sad how the few crumbs he throws her make her so happy. And will there (oh, please, oh please) be a nice juicy lemon coming up in the next chapter? Love this fic, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, it is a little sad how Bella craves Edward... but who is to say he doesn't feel the same? And maybe it is harder when you're the one putting on the brakes.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 04:56 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
So sweet and romantic. They are getting closer and closer. I can't wait to read ho they handle Alice staying with them! I love this story so very much. Excellent job. These characters are so very compelling!
Reviewer: addicttwilight2 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 04:56 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Another beautiful chapter. I think I'll die if I have to wait two months for the next one. :) You are such an awesome writer. Thank you for keeping it coming.
Author's Response: Hey! It wasn't two months between chapters... just 3 weeks and some change.
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