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Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:29 AM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008

Ok it's 12:16 in the morning and I need to go to bed. I will have some great dreams tonight and I have you to thank for that. I plan on finishing the remaining chapters tomorrow so post soon :)

Reviewer: Annaleah (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:22 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

aaahh, it hurts when it's over. I never want to stop reading. Everything is so interesting, you give just the right amount of detail, and all of these events in the story and the days coming up, I look forward to each one because you write each thing so brilliantly. Alice is adorable, and Edward is kind of a rockstar, with all his money and his dancing and his secrecy and his music. Bella is a lucky girl right now, although I'd be very scared too if i were her. She is amazing. 

Okay I'm rambliing, key points: your story rocks and I can't wait for more.


Author's Response:


Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I never though of Edward as rockstar-y... but he is kind of projecting that aura, isn't he?

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:15 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I loved this chapter but the sexual tension is killing me. The kiss... wow.

Please update soon.

Author's Response:

I always update as soon as I can.

Reviewer: espeinaz (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:12 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Ack!  I'm so ready for him to get it on with her again!  The UST is driving me crazy!

Author's Response:


Reviewer: pavelowwife53 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:10 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

How rude!  A cliff hangar!  Ugh... I really would appreciate more.  So if you dont mind, HURRY UP!!!  :)  This is so wonderful!

Author's Response:

I always post as fast as I can.

Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:01 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Let just say that was really good and I am also waiting for saturday :)

Reviewer: mandalynn (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 02:34 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Welcome back! We have all missed you and of course Bella and Edward! Edward is a great actor,  I would have loved to know what was going on in thoughts about the nights events. So much that needs to be uncovered! I hope soon, also, that Edward will just be able to tell her how he really feels about her and let her in a little. She needs a companion. I feel so sad when she talks about how she is in her room and he is in his room, when they could be doing so much together in just one room. I love where you left it off though. I hope there is little sleeping going on. Even if they don't get to the sex part, I would still love the dialog between them. I think I have to say besides the intamate moments they share, my favorite parts are when they are just talking and getting to know each other. Anyways great job Limona! Every two weeks will be tough but I know it is all worth it!

Author's Response:

Mandalynn, thanks for your sweet review. I'm glad you enjoy the ExB time, whether they're talking or doing um, other stuff.

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 02:24 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I am so thrilled to see your back to writting again.  Thank you so much for this update.  I am excited to read more as you post new chapters.  Thanks again!  Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

thanks, Christine :)

Reviewer: sizone (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 02:23 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This was an awesome chapter. The way you show some of Bella's memories from the Voltori in flash backs are great. The tension between Bella and Edward could be cut through with a knife right about now. And wow…Edward sure does know how to take advantage of a situation, doesn’t he? I feel bad for Bella though, with Edward cockblocking and egging her on at the same time, it's no wonder she's confused about her feelings for him. It would have been so great if they could just acknowledge their feelings for each other and get engaged for real. I wonder, what did Edward talk to Jacob about? Was it jealous Edward, sneaking around to make sure the Gardner knows his place? Or simply protective Edward, telling Jacob to keep his mouth shut about Bella’s identity? I guess I’ll just have to wait and see. Deposition time soon, I hope it won't be too hard for Bella, she's been through a lot after all. ;)

Love the story by the way :) Keep up the good work, and update as soon as possible!


Author's Response:


Thank you for the the thoughtful review. I can't really answer your question other than to say that everything Edward did in this chapter had a purpose, and the conversation with Jacob was no exception.

Reviewer: Dental Diva (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 02:09 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Great story. Keep it coming.

Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 02:06 AM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008

Best line - ...and she had fuck-me eyes.

It just gets better and better!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 01:54 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

love this chapter. cant wait till the next one.

Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: Kathryn Mason-Sykes (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 01:40 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Everytime I read the word "friends" a little part of me dies with Bella. :(

Good chapter. I guess my mind is still waiting for the other shoe to drop, you know? This secret group that Edward's been invited to join, Laurent's creeper's could mean something, it could be nothing. The only constants I know are that Jessica is annoying and Edward and Bella are more than friends. Whether or not they choose to admit it to each other.

I can't wait to read the next chapter. Sorry work's such a bear for you at the moment!

Author's Response:

Aw, me too. But it is a love story...

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 01:34 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008


thats adoreable(:

Author's Response:


Reviewer: willistongirl (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008

One of my favorite stories. Not so much angst that it gets irritating but with enough plot to keep me interested. It's the perfect balance. I absolutely love it.

Reviewer: 10010 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 01:11 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Your story is my favorite story in all of fanfiction land. I can't wait to see where it goes!

Reviewer: forever_dreamer (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 01:11 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Again - and not surprisingly - another great chapter. I can't wait to read about what Bella's sleepless night will be like.
[and I will admit that the Bella/Edward make-out session was both anticipated and appreciated. And not to mention totally hot! ; )]

Author's Response:

Thanks! BxE needed a little steamy time together. It had been a while.

Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 01:06 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008

Best Lines- The soap he used when he was naked, in the shower. And Never had I envisioned that watching a man open a bottle of wine would turn me on. Bring on the wine :)

Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:58 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

 I'm so grateful for a new chapter!  I absolutely devoured it.  I wonder what Edward is up to with all the PDA -- is he taking advantage of the social engagement to do what he'd like to be doing anyway?  Will that behavior  be repeated in their upcoming social engagements?  Poor Bella--it's kinda sad how the few crumbs he throws her make her so happy.  And will there (oh, please, oh please) be a nice juicy lemon coming up in the next chapter?  Love this fic, can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Yes, it is a little sad how Bella craves Edward... but who is to say he doesn't feel the same? And maybe it is harder when you're the one putting on the brakes.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:56 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

So sweet and romantic.  They are getting closer and closer.  I can't wait to read ho they handle Alice staying with them!  I love this story so very much.  Excellent job.  These characters are so very compelling!

Reviewer: addicttwilight2 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:56 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Another beautiful chapter. I think I'll die if I have to wait two months for the next one. :) You are such an awesome writer. Thank you for keeping it coming.

Author's Response:

Hey! It wasn't two months between chapters... just 3 weeks and some change.

Reviewer: not_done_baking (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:56 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I liked this chapter better than the last few for some reason. I think I liked the whole mystery that Edward's actions created.

Author's Response:

This chapter had less exposition, more action, and more BxE.

Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:50 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Lovely chapter Christina! I love affectionate Edward, even if he was trying to put on a show. I know deep down he was enjoying it just as much as Bella was. So the Occhi...interesting. I'm thinking it is some elite swingers organization...or maybe I'm reading too much of Rosana's story! Ha! I just thought Victoria's comment was telling.

I love how the chapter ended with Bella asking Edward to hold her while she slept. In fact I think she should use that excuse every night!

Good luck with the Eddie's and Bellie's! I'm looking forward to voting for my favorites!



Author's Response:

You never know... she might well try that excuse in the future, it worked so well for her this time.

Thanks for reviewing, Annie. I always love your reviews.

Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:37 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008

Poor Alice :( I loved that being prego she doesn't want to say anything negative that really sweet for JC. And also classical Alice. Favorite lines- The door was half-way open, and through it I saw Bella getting hot and heavy with the gardener. The gardener! How could she? That ungrateful slut! After all the love and time I put into sexing her up, she was wasting it on the gardener?


Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:30 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

The chapter was absolutely exquisite.  I really loved everything about it, but especially the interaction between Bella and Edward.  I don't simply mean the physical contact he was showering upon her, although that was quite nice, but rather the fact that he was no longer being so closed off with her.  Everything in Bella's life now revolves around secrets and deception.  She can't let anyone but Emmett and Edward know anything about her true past, and for that reason she basically can't let many people know the real person she is inside either.  The only person she has been able to reveal her true self to is Edward.  Now, with all of the Occhi stuff and drinking water for shots, Edward has secrets too.  I know it's not the same as having a new identity because you are in the witness protection program, but still it sort of levels the playing ground a little bit between them.  I am quite intrigued as to who Laurent is and what his role in Edward's life has been.  I am even more intrigued as to why the presence of Laurent and Jessica triggered touchy feely Edward to surface. 

The story is progressing beautifully.  I stand firm that you are doing a wonderful job with the pace of the plot and character development.  I feel that these characters, especially Edward, are so complex.  You are building their personas a layer at a time and I like that fact. 

I deduce that you are an accountant or something of that nature, because of your hectic work schedule until the tax deadline.  That must be so stressful.  I am amazed that you are able to find time to write.  Thank you for taking your time to do so.  Know that it is appreciated.  Bi-weekly updates will be great, until you find more time.  I love this story so much and just find it thrilling when you update at any point.  Take care and don't crunch too many numbers.

Author's Response:

It does level the playing ground a bit, doesn't it? You aren't the only one to bring that up. I really, really wish I could show everyone that chapter from Edward's POV, but I absolutely hate it when people redo a chapter from a different POV. Drives me crazy. So I won't do it. Next chapter will be EPOV, and maybe we can catch on to some of what was going on.

And, yes, I am a CPA who specializes in corporate tax compliance.

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