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Reviewer: Tsuki9 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:59 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm on pins and needles with these two!

Reviewer: sunsunhot7 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:50 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2

Silly, Bella.  She'll get it together soon enough though, I hope.  Keep it going cuz this is getting fun :)

Reviewer: sunsunhot7 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:16 PM · On: March 22, 2008

Think again Bella!  I'm sure there's two faces on each side of Edward's coin.  WWEFD at this dinner tonight.  Well...let's find out, shall we?

Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 08:36 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Cool story.  I just picked it up and can't wait to see where it goes.

Reviewer: slo13 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 08:07 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Amazing, amazing chapter...definitely left me wanting more, as usual!

Reviewer: sunsunhot7 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 07:59 PM · On: February 29, 2008

This is getting very interesting. :)  I'm gonna keep reading and I hope Edward doesn't screw this up.  Here we go... Next!

Reviewer: EverlongYou (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 06:15 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

My single thought at this precise moment is that if you do not very rapidly update, much verbal abuse will come your way ^^


(I say that lovingly)

Wonderful wonderful wonderful, can't wait for the next chapter!!!


Reviewer: ambar82 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 05:01 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This is tourture, he wants her I know he does, I wish Edward would just drop his act and be with her. I can't wait til you next update I almost screamed when I saw your story had been updated. Keep it up please

Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 04:57 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

You always leave me guessing. But I love it shamelessly. Another great chapter!

Reviewer: ashtreeh (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:26 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

please please please please please update!

I love this story! It's amazing, and a really nice read!!

Kepp going!!

Reviewer: Chelsea Volturi (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:18 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

What can I say? Hmmm. I'm going to be creative today: Love your story, Love the chapter, (love the podcast), update soon!

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:03 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Poor Bella, she is going to go crazy with frustration if things keep like this, and unfortunatelly it seems that they will be the same at least until the deposition.

Does Edward care for her? at times it seems he does and acts like that because he is afraid of loosing her, someothers it seems he wants to try and keep his distance and others like this chapter it's just plain confussing.

Too bad it will take you longer to post the next chapters, this story is really great and I'm completely hooked on it. But there is life and work. :)

Reviewer: evabell (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 01:22 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I'm glad you finally posted another chapter. *hooray* I can't wait to find out whats gonna happen next.

Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:50 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

i love how they're progressing slowly, but surely. i'm curious about the Occhi, too.

Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:43 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Can't wait until next sunday!

Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:12 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008

Hmmm with Alice staying at the house with Edward and Bella they will have to sleep in the same bedroom. I like it :)

Reviewer: ForbiddenFruit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 11:40 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Your writing gives me fuzzy feelings inside.

But WHY do you tease me? WHY? I have to wait two entire weeks for the next chapter? Are you kidding me? I think I'm going to cry..

Reviewer: SleepyValentina (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:20 AM · On: March 22, 2008

I love this story.  Just love it. It's rapidly becoming my favorite AH.

Reviewer: RosieWilde (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 08:00 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Brilliant chapter. I really loved it. So much sexual tension! Sigh. Poor Bella. Maybe she'll get him in the end, who knows. Great job and keep going :)

Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Natsu2 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 05:25 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

What a great chapter!  I love how their relationship is taking a turn for the better. 

Author's Response:


Reviewer: McVampy (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 05:15 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

What is this, Breaking Dawn?!?! You left off at the best part!! I'm teasing, of course. I love this fic. Every chapter is a pleasure to read. Even if you totally teased me. XD

Author's Response:

No pillows will be harmed in the making of this fic.

Reviewer: Sam362 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 04:21 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I just found this story tonight and I couldn't stop reading. I am already in a panic knowing I won't know more for a while. Ahhh! On a more serious note, really well writen, very entrancing!

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: RMCC (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 04:20 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I was thinking about this story earlier tonight, and how sad I was that it hadn't been updated in so long.  I was lamenting the fact that you may never return to it (not that I'm judging - I've been known to abandon stories myself).  Imagine how thrilled I was to get online and see a new chapter!

Author's Response:

I will not abandon HIPS. I can't. I love it too much!

Reviewer: kiwi (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:59 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Ah!  The anticipation!!!!

I started reading this story 3 weeks ago, and once I had read the last posted chapter, I have checked the page every single day to see if there was an update.  I was not disappointed today.  I loved this chapter.  And I really really want more.

This is certainly my favorite story.  Characterization is very realistic.  I like this Edward, although he does seem to be a bit on the distant side.  What's with this sleeping with her, ignoring her, then feeling her up and sleeping with her but not sleeping with her?  No real man would be able to control that temptation as much as we girls would like to think he exists.

Author's Response:

I'm glad your efforts were rewards. You can add the story to your favorites and then tell Twilighted to send you an email every time it is updated if you want to save the effort of checking daily. :)

And in regards to what a "real man" would do... Edward has almost superhuman control.

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:30 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

They need to get together!  I know there is risk involved, but they need each other.  Please?

Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing, nofangsallowed. :)

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