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Reviewer: PSW8888 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 07:10 AM · On: February 29, 2008
I couldn't stop reading your story and it's killing me that I'll have to wait two more weeks for another chapter!!! I love the spin you put on the Twilight characters and hope you will update soon. I also am waiting anxiously for you to finish the Merger of Two Hearts! Please update soon. I don't know what I'm going to do with myself now that i've finished these two stories.
Reviewer: dazzledincypress (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 03:04 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I love this story!! just stayed up till 3:50am reading it....please tell me you haven't given up writing it??? are the dates the last time you submitted anything??
I'm going to be sad if this is where it ends! please finish it!! :o)
Author's Response: The dates it shows next to the story on Twilighted aren't always correct. I haven't given up. This story was last updated on Sunday, February 15.
Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 06:50 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I just read all 16 chapters of your story and, ugh, it's killing me that there's no more to read! This is so good! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: letmesign (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 07:09 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Oh man, I want to have a dinner like that with Edward! Great chapter, can't wait to read more...
Reviewer: tricomi (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 03:40 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
love love looooove it! I read it till 3 a.m. and can't wait for another chapter, so PLEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON :))
Edward will go with Bella to Portland won't he? :D
Reviewer: Wordy (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 01:29 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Bella may the W.W.P (weak will power) stay with you
May i suggest...opening paragraph of next chapter, should maybe start with...
Early light... popping up on either side of Edward's bed, wearing matching jumpers and grinning like sesame street presenter's, should be Laurent and Jessica... This should guarantee some breakfast booty for E and B, who only seem to be getting some lip loving action when they have an audience.... you know there's a name for that?
Edward. The brushing of the breast trick... very Dawson Creek... loved it.
Great Chapter
Thank you :)
Author's Response: cute.
Glad you liked this one, Wordy... though I don't think we need to class ExB with the exhibitionists yet... :)
Reviewer: onelove0814 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 10:28 PM · On: February 29, 2008
I just found this story and stayed up all night reading it so at least Bella is not the only one not getting any sleep.
I love this story....that is all I can say because there are no words that can encompass my feelings for it.
I too understand the demands of life and with that I guess I can sit and wait as patiently as possible for updates. In reality I probably will be checking everday...
Thank you for sharing this story.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 07:37 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
=/ hm...I'm not sure what to think about the impending trial.
I'm also kind of hoping that things heat up between Bella and Edward...I still can't tell how they really feel about each other.
More soon?
Author's Response: I always update as soon as I can.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:38 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Very nice. :)
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 09:27 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Ooohh... using the old 'I can't sleep. Could I snuggle with you for a while?' line. I like it. I definitely would have used that one if I were in Bella's position.
*sigh* I would probably also have tried to get him as drunk as possible at every turn because drunk Edward is fun. :)
Oh, how I love this story. You really don't understand how great it is, do you?
Author's Response: Drunk Edward is fun... he just doesn't do it very often. Glad you enjoyed this one, C.
Reviewer: dazedx3 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 08:03 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Get them together again! I hate when Edward says "Just friends" 'cause he's totally lying.
Author's Response: Bella hates it too.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 05:26 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
How can I wait for 2 weeks for an update? This is such a cliffy to leave us with! Awesome chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: leftonthealtar (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 02:16 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Limona
Why do you work with numbers when you are SO GOOD with words! What an amazing creation this story is, so over-the-top fabulous. I couldn’t rip myself away from the screen for love nor duty! It’s just going to rip me apart while I wait for this to be finished. But it’s OK because I’d much rather wait on an awesome story than finish a mediocre one.
You have a wonderful talent, definitely at a whole new level of sophistication and accomplishment than what we normally read. Please keep writing, your stories keep me so enthralled and I want to read more of your work.
Author's Response: Thank you, leftonhealtar, that means a lot.
Reviewer: dramagurl82 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 01:20 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I love your writing it just holds alot of emotion. I think how you are writing Bella and Edward makes you love them so much more. I'll be waiting for the teaser to go up on the forum.
Author's Response: Thank you, dramagurl. It's always nice to hear that BxE are lovable.
Reviewer: xxrobsessed83 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 11:44 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
That was fanfuckingtastic. I know I couldnt sleep with Rob P., I mean Edward next to me. Great job. And excellent writing. Cant wait til the next update.
Im addicted.
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: xxrobsessed83 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 11:13 AM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Oh, I love where this story is going. i started reading this on Friday and have enjoyed every minute of it. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: Koka Kola (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 10:52 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Maybe it's my Catholic school education run amok *shudder*, but your Bella kind of reminds of Jesus. I mean, she's putting herself in danger to save so many others. She's willing to die for them. And that really makes me laugh because I'm trying to imagine what Jesus' bucket list would be... If Bella wants to jump off the diving board, maybe Jesus wants to jump off that cliff in the desert and show Satan who's really the boss? Maybe he wants to hook up with Mary Magdalene? The possibilities are endlessly hilarious.
Anyway, I had seen this fic on Twilighted and knew it was popular, but never got around to reading it. I had read A Merger of Two Hearts though, so I knew you were a talented author (I can't wait til you finish it!). I'm also an avid listener of the Temptation podcast and it was so highly touted there that I knew I had to read it before your interview. So I stayed up til 2 AM this morning reading, and I'm so glad I did. The plot is so original and the characters seem so real to me, like I can actually see where they're coming from. It is definitely one of my new favorites. I just listened to the podcast and I'm kind of torn - I reallllllly wanted you to say the spoiler, but I also didn't want to ruin the ending for myself. Ah well, I suppose it's for the best. Love the accent, by the way! (and yes, you really do have one, however subtle it may be!)
One last thing - thanks for all the hard work on the Eddies and Bellies. They seem much more fun and different then all the others. Can't wait for nominations to open tomorrow!
Author's Response: This whole review was win. As for the spoiler... lol. I can't believe I almost said it, but it is easy to forget you're being taped when you're talking to those girls.
And don't forget to vote for the Eddies & Bellies!
Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 09:58 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
*dies dead*
Sex her, Edward! You want to. I know you do.
Christina, I think it's time for some EPOV.
Author's Response: Tasha, you are right. As you so often are. EPOV coming up next.
Reviewer: audiophile (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 06:39 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I have really enjoyed reading this story. It has one of the most original, entertaining plots I've read in Twilight fanfiction. I am excited to see how this story unfolds, and am even more intrigued by how the story will resolve. I love your characterization of the Twilight characters, especially Bella. She's strong and independent, but has all those trademark Swan idiosyncracies that make her endearing. Thanks for writing, please keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thank you, audiophile :)
Reviewer: jess_c_ka (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 03:18 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
OMG OMG OMG OMG
hehehe -
can i just say that i love this chapter... love love love it..
i started reading this story yesterday and i couldnt stop.. because of you i only had 2 hours sleep i read until 4am and had to get up at 6am to go to work.. and mite i add im getting married in 1,5 weeks and i still manage to set aside time to ready your story.. thats how FANTASTIC IT IS!!
will be counting down the days until a new chapter is released!!
i love the plot and i love your perspective of the characters
keep up the amazing work!!
okai i need to get some ZzzZzz since i didnt get a chance yesterday :)
Author's Response: I hope you caught up on your sleep, and congrats on your impending nuptials!
Reviewer: sunsunhot7 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 10:10 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Damn! I always think I will be okay when i don't see the next at the bottom of the page but once again I am sad. Can't wait for a update
Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:46 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I have really missed this story. Thanks for the newest chapter.
Wow! First and foremost I have to say that I love how Edward and Bella have evolved in this story. Their changes have been subtle throughout the chapters. I love your Edward and Bella as a couple.
You have given us more pieces of your carefully orchestrated story (Jacob and Edward hmm…). You give credit to your title “Hiding in Plain Sight” since table four at the gala was definitely the hot seat for Bella. I was wondering if Edward was aware of the seating arrangements ahead of time. Thanks for the enjoyable PDA with E&B and the sexual tension that followed. Actually you have sexual tension oozing throughout the chapter however; I really loved the intimacy of the music room. No matter when you next update in my mind Edward and Bella are snuggling in bed with Bella feeling safe and connected to a man who she is in love with. That is so “bucket list” worthy.
Your fan,
Agnus
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 08:41 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
wow...i wish they would just give in and tell each other how they feel. i am loving the drawn out of this though.
Reviewer: gigi (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 06:27 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
How did I miss that this was up until tonight! It was wonderful. Such tension - it seems like Bella might implode I love it! Can't wait for more. And I am looking forward to finding out all of the secrets.
Reviewer: sunsunhot7 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 06:04 PM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
oh Bella. I feel so bad for her but this is kind of crazy. I love it anyway
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