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Reviewer: NiKKi the Vampire Princess (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 09:50 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
WRITE FASTER!!!! I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!!! BY FAR MY FAVE!!! WHAT DID EDWARD SAY TO JAKE??????????? GAAAAHHH.
AWESOME JOB.
Reviewer: BethKay003 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 06:33 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I only just discovered this story and became so intrigued that I could not stop reading it! I stayed up all night to finish it and I absolutely LOVE IT!!! I can not wait until you update it!! I think i need to stop reading fanfics that are not complete because i go crazy waiting to find out what happens next!! I don't know how everyone does it! Lol. I will say that Edward is irritating the crap outta me! I wish he would man up and tell Bella how he's feeling!! lol... I can't wait to see how they end up! PLease please please update soon and save my insanity! :)
Reviewer: DevilishAngoOl (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 12:19 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
WHAT?! No next button. That's no good. It means you haven't posted more, which means I have to stop reading. Not good. Definitely not good at all. Something has to be done about this. And there's only one thing I can think of in this set of mind - UPDATE! Now! ... Now! ... Now? ... How about now? ... Sigh... Still waiting... NOW! ... nope, no such luck...
PS: LOVE THIS! (I meant the story, not the waiting)
Reviewer: twilightrules (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 04:20 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
oh no whats gonna happen i cant wait to see
Reviewer: mspacman1 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 08:35 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I loved it and can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: ShanShan (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008
I'm loving this so much! Such a great storyline. :)
And with that, onto the next chapter...
Reviewer: CarolMN (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 11:13 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
This is my favorite chapter so far! The scene at dinner is priceless!
Reviewer: yanxxx (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:31 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Awesome! I might have mentioned before how excellently paced this story is, that is only one of the many reasons why I am hooked. :D
I loved how you kept the characters personalities so well and how you intigrated their interests into human life.
I'll be looking forward to the next chapters..!
Kudos!
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:34 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
I absolutely adore Drunkward.
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 12:44 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Looooooooved this chapter. AMAZING sex scene..and a deflowering at that...made it extra hot.
This story is fantastic.
Reviewer: pwtf (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 07:30 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Hey Limona! I'm so sorry that it took so long for me to get to this chapter. Life's been a bitch...
This was such a wonderful chapter! On a random note, I love that Edward likes his steak rare. Yum! (yes, I'm very hungry right now).
That makeout session at the table was perfect! Lucky Bella! I don't blame her for taking advantage of the moment!
And then they're sleeping together...quite literally! Sigh...it just makes my heart fill to the brim!
I'm right there with Bella though, very curious about the whole Occhi thing.
And Laurent is such a creeper.
June 6 now, eh? We're getting quite close to a certain person's birthday...
I understand how busy you are, and I'm glad you'll still be updating! I still have to say it, though: I can't wait for the next chapter!!! See you on the forum!!!
Loved the chapter!!!
Reviewer: liviana (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:23 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Hi Limona!!!
Just wanted to drop by and tell you how much I love your story!!! I think somewhere along the road the UST between Bella and Edward will kill me...*LOL*.
No really, I appreciate all the thought and time you put in this story and I can´t wait for another update.
This chapter just has to be one of my favourites. The Jacob- Edward - confrontation! The dinner - make- out! Edward giving Bella a compliment! WOW!
Keep up the good work! And by the way, I just voted for my most favourite stories at the Eddie and Belly Awards. So thank you for that, too.
Reviewer: yanxxx (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 11:07 PM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008
No ducking and hiding necessary, I assure you. I like this chapter, I like Jake.. haha..even though I know how it'll end up, (bella+edward) duh.. I still loved seeing a lil' Jake..
I'm hooked with this wonderfully written and perfectly pace story now.. *goes off to read somemore*
Reviewer: carms89 (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2009 03:51 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! damn.. have to wait ... two weeks? oh well at least i know it will be AWESOME!
Reviewer: smallfryxoxo (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 04:27 PM · On: February 29, 2008
WOW! This is amazing! You're a very talented writer.
Please continue?!
Reviewer: Toni105 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 04:23 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I am really enjoying this story! I am looking forward to your next chapter!
Reviewer: Miss_Me_ (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 10:01 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Aw... I'm loving <3 When's the nxt coming??? Can't wait :D
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 01:26 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Great story! I certainly hope they can make some honest headway into a real relationship very soon...even before the deposition maybe. Update soon!
Reviewer: tuff-duck (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 11:15 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
aaaaaaaaaaa mmmooreeeeeee pleeaaaassseeeee :D
i've been reading this since last night and its been so hard to stop reading!! its soooo goooodddd!! cant wait til alice stays at the house, and edward and bella might have to change their sleeping arrangements to make their charade more believeable! heheheeheheheehe *excitedd!!! noo-- veryyyy exciteeddd!!!*
Reviewer: Toni105 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 10:18 PM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
I really am enjoying this story! Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: Toni105 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 05:22 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
ugh...I HATED this chapter. I mean, what was she thinking! #$%&^*
I know they're pretending here, but c'mon, how ungrateful can you be!!!
Reviewer: bakagirl123 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 06:24 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
update soon please
Reviewer: Jfly (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 12:36 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
i love this story! the chapter started hesitantly, distracted... but it built into something solid half way through.
it's like bella is disjointed somehow when she isn't with edward, and then when she is, a tranquility softens and focuses herpoint of view. when she's with edward, her thoughts are crystallized and easier to read. they flow like music.
i'm so happy that he complimented her and that he agreed to hold her. that's a huge admission of love right there. he's letting her in. she deserves it.
thank you for the wonderful chapter!!
Reviewer: PSW8888 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 07:10 AM · On: February 29, 2008
I couldn't stop reading your story and it's killing me that I'll have to wait two more weeks for another chapter!!! I love the spin you put on the Twilight characters and hope you will update soon. I also am waiting anxiously for you to finish the Merger of Two Hearts! Please update soon. I don't know what I'm going to do with myself now that i've finished these two stories.
Reviewer: dazzledincypress (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 03:04 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I love this story!! just stayed up till 3:50am reading it....please tell me you haven't given up writing it??? are the dates the last time you submitted anything??
I'm going to be sad if this is where it ends! please finish it!! :o)
Author's Response: The dates it shows next to the story on Twilighted aren't always correct. I haven't given up. This story was last updated on Sunday, February 15.
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