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Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:21 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Woop woop! Can you tell me where the hymen farm is? I want mine back so i can have this experience!!!!!
Another fantastic chapter. Loved the sex scene, it was so well writtne, and not jsut smut for smuts sake... WTG!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:14 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008
Arrrgggh that was a horrible cliffie, but I'm not caught up yet so you are forgiven :)
And I was getting ready to lean through the monitor and strangle Edward... if says "I considered following her, but I didn't" just one more time..... heheheh
Still loving the story :)
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 04:16 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
Wow, who would have thought Rose could be decent??!! And I'm glad that she helped Bella sway an olive branch towards Alice.
Reviewer: cullenfreak (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008
LEMONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:56 PM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
LOL this story makes me chuckle :) I like it. It's quirky and different from anything else I've read so far.
I like the sexual tension that is building in the air and can't wait for more. I'm so glad I'm still behind.
I can't wait to see what Bella is going to do to try and win over Alice.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:20 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Oh shit! I am SOOOOOOOOOOOO glad that I am behind, this was definitely an awful cliffie to have!
And I'm scared to find out how Edward is going to react....
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:11 PM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008
It was a ctually a cute chapter. I'm glad Bella misses him, and I'm sad she felt the need to hide from him after Tanya.
I'm glad I'm not caught up so I don't have to wait for an update though :)
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:01 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
LOVING it. Edward is so hooked already! I'm glad Bella didn't push away when he held her close.
I loved fiesty jealous Bella and her way of deflecting the waitress :) very cute indeed and then I grinned at Edward protecting bellas butt from being leered at :)
IS bella going to go to Haiti with him?
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:48 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
Oh you have really suckered me in, I actually found myself leaning towards my monitor reading this..... arrgghh! I wanted the kiss!!!
loved the family dynamics and getting caught in the mini-lie.
another well written chapter.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:36 PM · On: March 22, 2008
I liked this, I like to see the bonds beginning to form between Bella and Alice. But I think the end is more a part Edward is playing and I'm afraid that when they are alone again, he will try to go back to being cold and distant won't he?
Very well written.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008
Hmm I like how you are doing this. I feel bad for Edward. Not sure if he had always beent his way, or if someone hurt him really badly. I think his coldness is a defense mechanism and I can't wait for bella to bring it all down.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 10:34 AM · On: February 29, 2008
Very interesting beginning, I love your style of writing, it flows really well.
I love that the Volturi are the baddies :) I think I'm going to keep on reading.
Reviewer: Za Za Zooey (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:49 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Your story is great! Are you going to update soon?
Reviewer: IndecisiveMe (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008
"It was all kinds of twisted, but what could I say? No, please, I prefer the mental facility?" - One of the best lines I've read in a while!
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: adt216 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:51 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
New chapter please please
Reviewer: Kat N Hat (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:01 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: lastjuicykiss (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 07:48 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
more more more your such a talented writer i am so obsessed it is truly ridiculous
Reviewer: lynncullen (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 03:22 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I hope you can post another chapter soon! I love this story! To me, I think it's more of a novel than a fan-fic. Please keep writing! I live for it! What else would I do at work? ; )
Reviewer: Eclipse_in_the_Desert (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 11:53 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
ooh you left us hanging! great story, looking forward to finding out more.
Reviewer: PrinccipezzaDiDrama (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 11:32 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
Oh Thank God (sighs of relief)....
Reviewer: PrinccipezzaDiDrama (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 11:03 PM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
Alice is hilariously funny in this fic. I love the way you've characterized Edward.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 11:00 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
edward and bella are so cute!
i hope you update soon!
i really want to know what happens next!
ive read alot of stories but i have to tell you that yours is the best by far!
keep up the good work!
Reviewer: dyenessa (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 10:33 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
This story is FABULOUS! Please keep writing!!!
Reviewer: PrinccipezzaDiDrama (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 10:33 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
I'm so mad at you I can't even begin to explain my anger. SHE LOST VIRGINITY TO MOTHER&/()/ JACOB BLACK.!!!!! GOD, I TRULY DO HATE U!!!!
(though the story and the writing is great,) 4get I said that though... I'M FURIOUS!!!
Author's Response: she didn't lose her virginity to Jacob, they were just making out.
Reviewer: Dargot187 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 09:50 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
are you still out there? PLease update soon! I love this story!
Author's Response: I'm here, just slammed busy. I am trying to get another chapter out soon.
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