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Reviewer: tashacorinne36 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 08:15 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
i just read through your whole story and i couldnt stop! your story has me captivated! i cant wait until the next chapter :)
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 06:34 PM · On: February 29, 2008
Hey, don't leave your fans hanging! Give us more please!
Reviewer: azitram (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 05:37 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
I started reading your story yesterday and read half of it in one sitting...I couldn't put it down. Your story could stand alone without any Twilight connection. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Reviewer: devadasi7 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:24 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
oh my holy lord! you didn't really stop it there!!! but you did, you big ol' tease!!!
this chapter was great and i'm totally curious about the occhi thing and about the shots.....will we find out about that??? please???
and can't they just have more hot monkey sexin'????
Reviewer: mojo (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 03:47 PM · On: February 29, 2008
this is my absolute favorite story and i have read alot of them... please update soon! it is killing me.... i think i am checking for update at least 3 or 4 times a day....
you are awesome!
Reviewer: lemons22 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 03:05 PM · On: February 29, 2008
Absoutely amazing!!! I just read the whole thing in one shot without stopping and wanted to say that you are an amazing writer!!
I really want to figure out what edward's working on and what he's thinking... please update soon!!!!
Reviewer: Hev (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 08:02 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Amazing can not wait for more !!!!
Reviewer: slakalot (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 07:14 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Hi there,
I haven't finished reading your story yet, but I just wanted to stop reading and tell you that it's rare (wrongly sometimes) that I ever stop and leave feadback for people, but I just had to in this case. Your story is so greatly written and captivating I have enjoyed dissing work all day to read it immensely ;-)
I think, even though I love Edward and Isabella, this could have been an incredible stand-alone story as it is far far better than so many romance books out there. Maybe you already pursue writing for monetary gain, I don't know, but I truly think you're mad if you don't :) Although I appreciate the free amazing read this was a great, original and fresh story and you could easily have changed the main characters names and had a publishable winner.
AJ
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:37 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Loved the chapter! The dinner/event...the drinks...the piano playing was beautiful and then they end up in bed together! They are really getting close to one another and developing a connection.
Such an awesome story!
Reviewer: julia09 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 08:30 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I love this story!!!
pleeeeaaassseee update soon!! =D =D =D
Reviewer: sbr0275 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 11:50 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
this story is fab!!! i stayed up allnight reading it, please update soon as i cant wait to find out what happends, this is the best ne i have read keep up the good work
Reviewer: Coriea (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 02:32 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Ack! Cliffie!
Love, love, LOVE your story! How are you not published?? This is better than most of the books I've read! I can't wait till life calms down for you so you can get back to this, you're doing such an amazing job with it.
Reviewer: Coriea (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 10:29 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
Haha! Edward is such a bastard, I love it!
All your characters are so beautifully developed and the story itself is extremely well written. Can't wait to read the rest of it!
Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 07:35 PM · On: February 29, 2008
I am so sad. I love this story more than any other story on this site but it hasnt been updated in AGES!!! PLEASE, give us a bone. A sentence, a paraghaph, a chapter. You are SO talented, we want more!!!
Reviewer: bosoxgirl3358 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 11:27 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I am always hesitant to read the AU fics. Can I just tell you that I feel like I've missed out on so much after reading all 16 chapters of this story last night! It took me until 2AM but the lack of sleep was well worth it. It's an amazingly well-written story and I really cannot wait for more.
Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 12:24 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I just caught up and can't wait for your update!! I am really looking forward to see how Aro knew Marie in the past... I love the story though!
Thanks for Writing!
Reviewer: IndecisiveMe (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:30 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
For some reason I put off reading this story. The whole witness protection plot didn't have me convinced. I have to say I was wrong. I absolutely LOVE this story and can't wait to read more. Definitely going into my favourites!
Reviewer: ElphabaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 03:28 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Eeeek! I'm so annoyed. I read this whole story today, thinking Well there's so many chapters it'll satisfy me BUT IT DIDN'T. Please keep writing... And bring the next chapter out soon! :)
PS More smut between E & B would be nice... *wink wink*
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:09 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Occhi? Is that some sort of sex club??
Antohwer well written chapter, even though on the surface there isn't very much going on I think you are putting thoughts into our heads.
I can't wait for more. Now that I am caught up to everyone else I hope you will update soon, I need to be able to keep reading.... please????
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:51 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
Hmm, so Bella will have to sleep with Edward whilst Alice is staying with them right??
Another well written chapter, I love how you have all these little sub-plots running. Very well done.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:35 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008
Arrggghh I just wanna slap Emmett!! Edward is right. Bella doesn't need to know until she has to.
Another well written chapter and I'm sure you have had tons of reviews like mine who just wished they had slept together. <sigh>
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:18 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
What's Edwards motivation for getting Bella linked to his family? Does he already realise he wants her to stay around? Or am I reading more into this than is there?
Still lovin it :)
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:40 PM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
Ouch! Poor Edward! And poor Bella, I'm sure she is getting a lot of mixed signals from Edward.
and I'd love to know what she thought when she woke up and Edward wasn't there.
Still lovin the story :)
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 06:21 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
Woop woop! Can you tell me where the hymen farm is? I want mine back so i can have this experience!!!!!
Another fantastic chapter. Loved the sex scene, it was so well writtne, and not jsut smut for smuts sake... WTG!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 05:14 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008
Arrrgggh that was a horrible cliffie, but I'm not caught up yet so you are forgiven :)
And I was getting ready to lean through the monitor and strangle Edward... if says "I considered following her, but I didn't" just one more time..... heheheh
Still loving the story :)
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