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Reviewer: AmyO (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:55 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I love your pacing and dialogue. Would like to see more of Carisle. Please finish the story. If not, can I do it for you? Does she die? I think she goes through a period of great peril and then ends up marrying Edward.
Reviewer: Twiclipse (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:40 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Hi everyone I'm starting a story for the first time and i want to know how to get a good banner. If someone can tell me either how to make one or were to get a good one that would be great thanks. my e mail is actress4life1209@aim.com
Reviewer: aries220375 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:48 AM · On: February 29, 2008
I started reading this story couple of weeks ago and fell in love with it, my favourite one without a doubt! I keep checking back for updates.....it's been WAY too long....don't leave us hanging ;-)
Reviewer: MiaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:20 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
Hey I just started reading this story a few days ago and I'm in love with it!
It is by far my favorite story on this forum that I have read, and I cannot wait for an update!
Great job and keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Sparkleshine (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 08:52 PM · On: February 29, 2008
Loves idea of Emmett as U.S Marshal. -happily goes to read more-
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 08:22 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
This story is my own personal brand of herion. I'm totally addicted.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 08:18 PM · On: February 29, 2008
Just now starting to read this story after I saw it was one of the Top 10 favorites. Well written. Good job. That being said... I got tell you, this Bella, may be brave but she doesn't have a lick of common sense. Tell Jake, the gardener, everything? What is she thinking? And then making out with him? And her reasons for wanted to have sex with him? What an idiot! Can't we have a good E&B story with annoying Jacob and Bella being stupid? I love the plot line, but that part of it really ticked me off.
Reviewer: Luv2readEdward (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 08:01 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I have been waiting since your last update in February to see how this story progresses. It is honestly one of the most unique and intruiging Fan fictions I have read and I have read a lot! I hope that you haven't stopped writing the story!!!
Author's Response: I'm writing again... sorry to keep everyone hanging so long.
Reviewer: Sparkleshine (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 06:51 PM · On: February 29, 2008
Loves idea of Emmett as U.S Marshal. -happily goes to read more-
Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 04:02 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
"One part of my plan was successful: I was no longer thinking about the Volturi. But there was no way I would be able to sleep."
Such a good line! I love the story and the chapter!
Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 02:28 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
awwwwwww so sweet
Reviewer: dazzled22 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 01:57 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
i just started this story last night and ended up staying awake till 3am to read it! love it. can't wait for the next update...hurry please!
Reviewer: missninacullen (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 09:45 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
i cant wait for you to update! but you wont kill bella right? not even in the end? please dont. please make them marry for real :D haha. i know, im all for corny happy endings, i cant help it :D
Reviewer: missninacullen (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 09:19 AM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008
HA!!! so now bella and edward have to share the room while alice is there.. perfect!
Reviewer: missninacullen (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 04:38 AM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008
you are amazing...this story is the.best.one.ever.
you need to keep writing it forever :D
never finish :D
Reviewer: jazsaimin (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 03:36 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
this is amazing. i love your writing.
and the plot is simply captivating.
Reviewer: missninacullen (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 02:37 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
OOOOOHHHH my god... why did she have to be with jake why why why? i dont like jake and she should def. hit it off with edward. soon!
Reviewer: applepear (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:59 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
love this story!
Reviewer: iceangel92003 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:27 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
i like your story. I've been reading it for a while, but this is my first review. I look forward to your updates.
Reviewer: 86cutie (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:45 PM · On: February 29, 2008
OMG there is still no new chapters... im going crazy
What happens? you can leave us like that... im going to die... i can see the light now... such a cruel world
Reviewer: Yasmeen (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:01 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
I love your story so much I read it 4 times! Can't wait for future chapters. You are an awesome storyteller.
Reviewer: missninacullen (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 10:24 AM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
i love this story.. its interesting, amazing.. wow.
Reviewer: mojo (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:45 PM · On: February 29, 2008
i hope everything is good in your world... mine is starting to crumble while trying to wait for your update... anticipation is killing me... this is the best story written... please update soon
Reviewer: makelim (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:44 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Wow. You've successfully made me hate Bella, Jacob and this story. Telling Jacob was not good. It broke the tie that bound Edward and Bella. Also, Bella is coming off as a severe tramp - lusting after Emmett, Edward and Jacob. Yuck.
Reviewer: makelim (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:22 PM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008
Your chapter end notes redeem you...
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