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Reviewer: MiaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:18 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

You have to update! Come on, this is most definitely my favorite story!!

I'm dying here!!

Reviewer: Magic (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:47 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I just found your story and I love it! It's hilarious, sexy, the characters are completely true to form without being trite, and the plot is great. I have been so obsessed with this fic that I have put off studying for a test and writing papers and other important things. That may not seem like a compliment but I really appreciate such a fabulous distraction. Cannot wait to read more- I hope it's soon! Thanks!


Author's Response:


I'm so glad you enjoyed reading HIPS! Thank you for taking the time to review, especially when you're so busy.



Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:28 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.  Oh and the dinner table kissing was perfect....can we have some more please? Just friends, I want to slap Edward everytime he says it.  Thanks so much for sharing this with us.  Can't wait for whatever comes next.

Reviewer: LoriRae (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 03:59 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

where are the updates:( we miss you! its been too long...


Author's Response:

I know :(

But I'm coming back soon.

Reviewer: lastjuicykiss (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:57 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

please update soon!!! im dying i need more!! you left us on such a cliffhanger

Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 06:45 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I LOVE this story.  Please post again soon.

Reviewer: katstrat (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 04:47 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

*Argh* When will you update?? Please let it be soon... this one was just so sweet... and quiet steamy as well;-)

I really like your way of writing!

Reviewer: nicole22 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 10:26 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008



Reviewer: ShaeRae33 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:30 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I know that it has bee awhile that you have been on but this story is very enjoyable. Thanks!

Reviewer: Charly (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:28 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Please tell me you are working on another chapter.  I am dying to know  how it turns out.


Reviewer: emilove93 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 09:01 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I absolutely LOVE this story!!!!

Why the late update:(?

Reviewer: OCD_indeed (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:09 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I just realized that I never reviewed this latest chapter.  I have been so busy, on vacation, validating that it seems I run out of time every day.  But it's super stalking sunday again, and instead of sending a PM I am posting my super stalking skillz. :)

And no.... I won't bother you with "update" etc, because life happens and we all get caught up in it, so I will give you peace from that.

But I will say that I love this fic, and I am here for the long ride.  So you take as long as you want to finish it exactly the way you want to, and I will still be here.


Author's Response:

Much love to you, OCD. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: smoira (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 05:11 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008

Reviewer: kellierocks101 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 03:54 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

are u going to do other

Reviewer: mbele1 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 09:54 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Great so far, can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: bitemetwice (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 03:32 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

write a new chapter i am adicted!!!!! please write one please!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: AmyO (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:48 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I really love this chapter and for that matter, the whole story.  I like the foreshadowing, the character development, the pacing and the clash of the social classes.  I know I will take heat for saying this, but I like it more than Twilight.  Twilight is a great story truly, but as an adult I appreciate stories with a little less pure idealism and more reality.  The only change I would suggest is identify who is speaking during dialogue more frequently.  Other than that keep up the fantastic work.   

Author's Response:

I will keep that in mind... it is always a balance to identify speakers vs. letting the audience identify them to keep the text cleaner.


Thank you for reviewing and reading.


Reviewer: Chuck (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:04 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008

Girl,you are some writer.  My husband is waiting downstairs, and I can't stop reading.  Thank you for keeping Bella and Edward alive.  Too long to wait for New Moon.  Your fix is doing very nicely.


Reviewer: all_appologies (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:05 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

hmm, i don't understand edward's distance. when was it established that he only wanted to be friends?

they really need to have sex again soon. i was half expecting it to happen at the piano, but oh well.

Reviewer: all_appologies (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:29 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008

uh oh, i guess they'll be sharing a bed together while alice is visiting... i should just read the next chapter and find out.

Reviewer: all_appologies (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:59 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

i guess it's better they didn't sleep together, but who am i kidding, i really wanted it to happen. the nose nudging was for some reason very very.. cute? sensual? i don't know i liked it.

Reviewer: Charly (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008

I am new to Twilighted.   Love the first two chapters.

Charly (female)

Reviewer: calusariver (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 12:23 PM · On: March 22, 2008

This is going to get really complicated, isn't it....I can already see the trouble...when does he REALLY mean what he says in public.  I can tell, I"m not going to get any work done today.

Reviewer: calusariver (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:19 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Exciting already!

Reviewer: mojo (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 07:40 AM · On: February 29, 2008

love this story

also, everyone should take time to check out Tropic of Virgo by In_a_blue_bathrobe... also a really great story

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