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Reviewer: all_appologies (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 03:59 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

i guess it's better they didn't sleep together, but who am i kidding, i really wanted it to happen. the nose nudging was for some reason very very.. cute? sensual? i don't know i liked it.

Reviewer: Charly (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008

I am new to Twilighted.   Love the first two chapters.

Charly (female)

Reviewer: calusariver (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 07:23 AM · On: March 22, 2008

This is going to get really complicated, isn't it....I can already see the trouble...when does he REALLY mean what he says in public.  I can tell, I"m not going to get any work done today.

Reviewer: calusariver (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 06:19 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Exciting already!

Reviewer: mojo (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 02:40 AM · On: February 29, 2008

love this story

also, everyone should take time to check out Tropic of Virgo by In_a_blue_bathrobe... also a really great story

Reviewer: all_appologies (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 11:13 PM · On: March 22, 2008

i don't like edward being so cold and formal, but i guess the over-loving edward is also a bit much

Reviewer: porche911turbo (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:52 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

going insane i need an update. pleeaaassee?

Reviewer: FoxxyJ (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:50 AM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008

Oh this is so good.  I love all the tension you have created.  I really like your writing.  Thanks for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: vampiregirl94 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 05:19 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

i am an addict who needs their drug...and although i am sure that you get this a lot, but...

UPDATE!

Reviewer: kkh (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 01:07 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 12:44 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Update, please?  I'm begging here <3

Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 09:37 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

I love this story I really want to know whats going to happen next, please update when RL gives the opprotunity!

Thanks For Writing!!



Author's Response:

Update will go up by June 9, I think. It is already half written and I am working on it now.

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 08:24 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Please update. Pretty please....

Reviewer: Scheherezade (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 07:36 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

please please please write some more. i want to know how this all turns out!!!!

Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 05:26 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Please Please update I can't wait for another chapter..

Reviewer: Eclipse_in_the_Desert (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 10:22 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Great story, I love their relationship. Please finish. Pretty please??

Reviewer: SarahLeaV (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:11 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

HMMMMM!!! You want thoughts hu???  Maybe some more "stuff" between Bella and Edward (seeing as the are in bed together)! ;)    Maybe Edwards POV on what the hell he was thinking at the Gala!      More info on the Occhi?      Maybe more interaction with Jake!     Can't wait to see where you take our "couple" when Alice moves in while Jasper is away!  Tee hee!  I LOVE THIS STORY! :)

Reviewer: kurta (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:08 PM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008

Great story, very addicitve. Can't wait for tax season to be over...

:D

Where do you post updates or teasers?

Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:19 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Just wanted to send some love and ask for you to update this soon! I read this a while ago and enjoyed it. Was just looking forward to some more!

Reviewer: SarahLeaV (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:48 PM · On: May 17 - May 18, 2008

"My mouth tasted like ass!"  ~PRICELESS!!!!!!!!!!   LOVE YOU MAN!  LOL

Reviewer: SarahLeaV (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:54 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Very tasteful!  :)  .... and VERY HOT!



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: moneyy (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 09:28 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

omg i love it u rock my socks you should always write please finfsh thenext cjapter fast

 

Lots of love

Moneyy

 

Reviewer: SarahLeaV (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:41 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008

You don't have to hide... i do indeed like Jake time!  :)  i'm hooked!  Can't wait to keep reading... with that... i am ending the "review" and moving to the next chapter!  Thanks for writing it and sharing! :)

Reviewer: jasleenkaytina (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:20 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Please, PLEASE, update! Sadly, I check everyday. Haha. ;p

Reviewer: edwards girl (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:38 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

hey, i really love this story and im interested in where it is going, i have just joined twilighted and was wondering if you are still updating this story because a lot of the fan fiction i love seems end before they are completed.

x x

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