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Reviewer: edwardsbabe (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 01:28 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

good story i am so lookinjg fowared to the next part but so far so dam good thanks for giveing me something to do when the snow is so dam cold lol have a wonderfule day

 

amy

Reviewer: Nari101 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:28 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Hi I like this story keep writing!

Reviewer: Nari101 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:28 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Hi I like this story keep writing!

Reviewer: Band Geek Bella (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:32 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I would just like to let you know, you've wrecked my sleep pattern for the week. I stayed up until 4 last night reading because there was no way in heck I was stopping when there was still story to go. That eventually messed up everything, but this is an amazing story and I don't think I will regret it. I can't wait for more!

bgb



Author's Response:

Sorry your sleep got wrecked...

thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: hg20 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 02:43 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I MISS THIS STORY! It is one of my all time favorites I hope it gets continued. I'm starting to get worried.



Author's Response:

I'm definitely continuing, even if a little late...

Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: Amandalaw (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:49 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I just found this site and I love the plot to the story.  Is it being continued?  Once again love the story I hope you get to finnish it.

 

Mandy



Author's Response:

Yes, it is being continued :)

Reviewer: Elisabethe (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:24 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Ahh James that filthy S.O.B!

Reviewer: Suzana382 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:54 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I miss this story, hurry back!  :)

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 08:54 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I love your story! You are a very good writer. 

Please finish!

Thanks,

Jenn

Reviewer: ashtreeha (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 12:11 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Can you please please please please update?!

I've been waiting since FEBUARAY!

Reviewer: Verragood (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 10:45 AM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008

Bella needs some distractions. And a hobby! She should take some dancing lessons so she can smoke the gala bitches with her tango. :)))

Hmm, maybe quilting??? something arty?? :)

LOVE the way she stood up for the Cullens, even crankypants Rosalie! I love Loyal Bella :)

Reviewer: Verragood (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 10:15 AM · On: March 22, 2008

OUCH! Hacking off all her hair into some skanky bob? tragic :(

Reviewer: Verragood (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 09:54 AM · On: February 29, 2008

The thought of Rosalie with children SCARES me!!!

Seems odd that Emmett would do this - putting a family member in jeopardy - knowing that Bella is such a target. And Edward sounds like a bit of a prat - him being so generous (and putting his own life in danger) seems bizarro too. Hmm...

I must read on to see what transpires! :)

Reviewer: lisamamula (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:11 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This story is very good.  I am extremely picky, finishing only about 1 story out of each 15 I start.  This story is a perfect storm of technical skill, believable, relatable characters, interesting plot and good pacing.

My only major qualm with this story was how quickly Edward agreed to keep Bella, because we didn't know enough about his character to understand his protective instinct.  However, he's so damn sexy--with all his power and control and careful distance--that even that point didn't bother me very long.

Rosalie and Emmett are awesome.  I love how close to canon you got their personalities, and I absolutely love Rosalie's backstory.  The Volturi are creep-tacular.  Very scary.  Bella is a fun mix, independent and yet so vulnerable, innocent but care-worn and weary.  Jake as the gardner is brilliant.

And Edward.  Oh, Edward.  He's perfect.  Possessive, right from the start.  Powerful.  Sexy.  He's a maddening balance of intimacy and distance, the chaste protector and the attentive lover.  He is so powerful, yet his feelings for Bella make him vulnerable, uncomfortable.  Lovely.

I hope you haven't permanently discontinued this story.  It deserves an ending.  I know how hard writing can be, especially when real life interferes.  But this is one of the best stories I've encountered in the Twilight fandom.  I hate to see something so good go without its proper climax and resolution.



Author's Response:

Lisamamula,

Thank you for your thoughtful review. I, too, am a picky reader, and I am delighted you found so much to like in HIPS.

I have not permanently discontinued the story... I just had an unanticipatedly long break. I am writing again, and hope to post a new chapter ina  couple of weeks.

 

Best,

limona

Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 10:49 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Great story!  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TaylorMa (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:07 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Post the next chapter ASAP. i am totally hooked to your story and now i have to see where it goes! I love how you have used all the characters from the book in your story, making the volturi the modern day mob was great. i cannot wait to continue reading!

Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 03:57 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Need a post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  i love this story!

Reviewer: BrittanyAgd (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 10:07 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Wondeful story! I really like where it is going. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: bankeelg (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:56 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Argh! When will there be an update? Your story is excellent, and I won't be able to sleep tonight.. or any other night until I'm certain that things will work out for Bella and Edward... aaah..

Reviewer: stlfilwtl (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:40 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This is awesome. Where is the rest?

Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:55 PM · On: February 29, 2008

I love this story and you have not updated for a while, I hope that you haven't given up on it.

Reviewer: Vatulele (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:14 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I just started reading this and I have to say I'm hooked! This is a great story and I can't wait for your next chapter!

Reviewer: Kona (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:48 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

NEXT CHAPTER PLEEEEASE!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:28 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Luna Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:54 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

nxt chapter as soon as possible

 

i love this story

 

Luna C

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