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Reviewer: Kona (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 03:48 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

NEXT CHAPTER PLEEEEASE!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 02:28 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Luna Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:54 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

nxt chapter as soon as possible

 

i love this story

 

Luna C

Reviewer: cherry123 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 01:51 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

ibmiss this story! when are you going to bring it back to life?

Reviewer: sleforever (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:41 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

please update this.....

 

Im BEGGING you (imagine :whiny tone,puppy dog face)....

Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:53 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

this is a great story, i love it. please update soon :)

Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:48 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I love this story! It's brilliant! :D Hurry to update:)

Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 09:42 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008

god this is messed up situation! love it though:D

Reviewer: Gaia (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:13 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

just read this straight through and LOVE it. Please update soon.

Reviewer: cullengirl06 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:31 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

please please please uptdate!!!! =)

Reviewer: danigr89 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 03:57 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

wow this is so freaking amazing!!! i just love the entire story!!! its great!!!! i cant wait for more!!!! lovee it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sbr0275 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 12:46 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

please ... are you ever going to finish this great story???? please update soon...

Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 10:56 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Lovely!!! please pretty please update soon! it'll totally make my day!

Reviewer: Chloe_x (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 10:23 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

ARGHHHH .. i ave the urge 2 scream but i wont or my family will think im insane .... which i cart deny haha ... wow .. this is an amazin story ... it reli clever too .. yu cart let this hang c'mon yu gota finish it pleeeeeeeaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeee ... Chloe xoxo

Reviewer: Kyramy (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:49 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

WWEFD?? Edward's fiancee would already be making out with/having sex with Edward, Bella. So get to it. XD
I luurve your story.. It is absolutely amazing!! And soo unique.. the Volturi as the mob and Bella/Marie in the witness protection programme. It's so original!! How did you come up with it?!
I luurve the recurring WWEFD?? It reminds you that as much as they are pretending to be engaged.. they aren't.
But if they do break up after the trial, I would not want to be on the recieving end of Alice's rath.. *shudders*.. not good!!
Love it, Love you,
Love Kyra xx



Author's Response:

Thank you for your sweet review!

 

 

Reviewer: Wolf_Lover (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:00 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

when are you going to add the next chapter i really hope it will be soon. you are an amazing writer i wish i was as good as you. i like the position you put emmett in making him big brother and like protector thats really great. and alice having a baby thats really cool too. could you explain something because i'm kind of confused what kind of club is the occhi? because the way victoria made sound like a sex club and in that case i can understand why edward didn't want to tell bella, just wondering. i like how you have been starting off the chapters with flashbacks of bella's time with the volturi because that gives a better understanding of how she found out about them being killers and stuff. i usually don't comments this long but i really like this story with the whole a.u. human thing. i really like that even though they are humans the edward and alice still sort of have their little supernatural gifts. and i will most definitely will be waiting for more of your work. i think its really cool that people have the imagination to write and entertain people i wish i was as talented as you and some of the other writers on this site!? and really you should really think about trying to get this published or other stories that you have becuase you are really talented.



Author's Response:

Wolf_Lover,

Thank you for taking the time to write such a thoughtful review. I can't answer your question about the Occhi, because that will be revealed as the story progresses.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

limona

Reviewer: LatinaLibra (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 06:46 PM · On: February 29, 2008

I hope everything is ok. We miss you...

Reviewer: lydchil (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:15 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This story is FANTASTIC!!!! I can't wait for the update... I really want to know what Jacob and Edward were talking about... and the what happens after Edward lets Bella sleep in his room with him... OHHH, and what it's like while Alice is there (I'm super stoked about the latter!).
Anyways, keep writing, it's amazing, or any synonym that goes with it!) Can't wait for the update!!!!!!

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:44 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I love that you so flawlessly made them and the story adult. UPDATE please!!!

Reviewer: yesyov (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 11:46 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

update..... Please!!!!!

Reviewer: chrystelle (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 01:43 PM · On: February 29, 2008

update update update!  I'm not usually a fan of AU's but this one is great!

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 09:53 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Wow!! I love this story! Can't wait for an update!!!

Reviewer: Stardust1 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:27 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008

I love it!.  It's a very different story yet the characters (specially Edward) is so well portrayed.  Is good staff, don't let people tell you otherwise.

Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:51 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Aw. This story has a little bit of everything. Edward is cunning. I think I now what the Occhi are but I don't wanna say it incase I'm way off and look like an idiot. I really hope Edward gets off his high horse and has a real relationship with Bella. I can't wait to find out what happens to Bella while she worked for Aro. Update soon!

 

Reviewer: lions_lamb_4ever (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 05:12 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

That was really good! I loved it!

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