Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: marksy (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:27 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Ah i knew when i looked that there was only 16 chapters but still now i've read them all i'm sad! I've read these 16 chapters in approx 3 hours. The stories very original and i can't wait to see how it all ends... surely Edward can't end up Bella in the end after the thinking from Emmett? ahhh

can't wait for the update.

Reviewer: etwimom (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 11:57 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Just please keep going! I love the intrigue and the tension and the whole thing.  Please Update!

Reviewer: PrincessBella24 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 11:05 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This fic is wonderful. And you are the Master of the Tesion, because not only the hot tub and dinner scenes were hot, but the way you describe how Edward moves and touches Bella creates the same atmosphere as if they were having sex. And that`s hard to accomplish.

The story itself is very entertaiing, and it hooked me from the very first chapter. I absolutely love your Emmett.

Cant wait for the next update. Great work.

Author's Response:

Thank you for that wonderful compliment.

Reviewer: Jennycurious (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 10:35 PM · On: February 29, 2008

A very satisfying story. I hope the author continues now that tax season is over! Please!

Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 12:18 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Please update already!!!  I love this story.  You do an excellent job of making Edward and Bella real - and they are different from the traditional Edward and Bella in so many of the other stories.  Write!  Write! 

Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 09:07 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Please update soon.  The wait is killing me!

Reviewer: Boom_Ox (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 07:00 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

UPDATEEE!! pwetttyyy pleaseeeee :D

Reviewer: Susan Hails (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 02:54 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Fantastic chapter, i love this story, cannot wait for the next chapter x

Reviewer: SweetDulcinea (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 11:42 AM · On: February 29, 2008

Clever and unique idea!  I'm really looking forward to this...and insanely curious what Edward does that bought him a 6mill house (yet allows him to be out of the spotlight enough to hide/house a witness)  Hmmm...

Reviewer: eva wilson (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 03:14 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I think this edward is a jackass. I really want to like him but he's giving me no reason too.

Reviewer: mico (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:05 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

please, please update soon!

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:30 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Are you still there?  Maybe you haven't updated because you are spending time writing all the chapters out so that it will be complete the next time you update? Maybe?

Reviewer: ArtOfLookingSideways (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:42 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

OMG this has got to be one of the best pieces of fan fiction I have ever read. PLS PLS PLS continue it because I am dying to know what happens next!!!!!

Keep up the good work! =)

Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: lilgoblin (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:16 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Hey, I've loved your story so far.  Its really well written and probably one the best pieces of fanfiction I've ever read.  I hope you will update soon!

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 11:28 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I don't know how it would all turn out...they're drawn to each other and the hopeless romantic in me want them to be able to work things through. However, there's also a huge part of me that is thinking like Emmet. 

*Sigh* Update soon, will you? Your story rocks!  Thanks :)

Author's Response:

You're wise to think like Emmett.

Thank you for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 11:03 PM · On: May 18 - May 20, 2008

oh no! Alice will stay with Edward and Bella?

They'd have to share a room then! LOL!

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 10:15 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008

how can she not even be more public associating with the Cullens?

Wouldn't people want to know the background of the fiancee?

I think Edward should have told Bella about the date of the deposition...she should at least be given time to mentally prepare for it.

Reviewer: Brina_cullen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 06:14 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

please please pleasr continue ! i really enjoy your story! and can't waite to hear more

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 04:49 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008

OMG! This is sooo messed up!!!!

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 04:30 PM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008

oh no, i luv this chapter!

Bella is having nightmares..she's in a false identity....interacting with Jacob is like being in her tennis shoes and her sweats. It's easy and comfortable. I mean, crap, I'm just reading her POV and I sweat for her, i can't imagine having to keep up with Edward and all the lies. Edward is surreal, Jacob is real, simple as that.

Reviewer: MidnightStorms (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 03:58 PM · On: March 22, 2008

I'm really enjoying this, it flows really well, doesn't seemed forced you know?  Bella's made me chuckle too lol

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 02:40 PM · On: February 29, 2008

you had me at EPOV...

it's only the first chapter and I'm dying to read the rest of the chaps!

luv it!

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 11:45 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Babe's right, what can we do to get you to continue with this story. I want to know what happens... Please continues. Pleassse...

Reviewer: Babe (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 11:33 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Have you totally given up on this story!?  I am so disappointed, as it has, so far, been my favorite of all of the AU/AH stories on Twilighted.  What can we do to tempt you to continue?

Author's Response:

I haven't given up. I've started writing again. Hopefully there will be a chapter in a couple of weeks.

Reviewer: tammypz (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:49 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

LOVE this story...I can't wait for more!

You must login (register) to review.


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.