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Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 02:57 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008

well damn!!!!!

Reviewer: agrable (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 02:55 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Please update I can't take it anymore!!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 01:57 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2

well maybe he has come out of his shell a little bit!!!!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008

ergh...he is being such a dick...but i guess that is one of your points for the story!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 01:16 PM · On: February 29, 2008

hmm...cool hook into the story!

Reviewer: karen12353 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 10:28 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I am so entralled with this amazing FF. I have read several over the past few weeks and I must say that this is by far, the best. This story is so captivating and although I very much enjoy the really dirty versions of some of these FF, I have found that your story has captivated me the most...maybe it's the anticipation of something more to happen...lol...I was glad to read other reviews and noticed that you've stated there would be an update in the coming weeks. So keep up the good work and I look forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Karen,

Thank you for your thoughtful words... I always enjoy when people read the story all at once and still find that it hangs together. Yes, I am working on the next chapter.

Best,

limona

Reviewer: kouklitsa (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 05:14 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

When will the next update be?

Reviewer: twilightedtwilighter747 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 08:15 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008

wait what? what?!  do NOT tell me bella lost her virginity with jacob. that is WRONG

 I dont give a crap for those jacob/bella fanfics

Reviewer: twilightedtwilighter747 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 07:08 PM · On: March 22, 2008

NOOOO!!! why did u make bella cut her hair o short?????!!!!!! u could've just made it shouder length!!!!!!!!!!!

o well, this story is really growing on me

Reviewer: Natsu2 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 04:43 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Limona, you know how there are tons of FF's out there and some kinda blend in with the other?  Most of the time when I'm reading other stories, I have to reread the last chapter before reading the updated one just to remember what the story was about.  That is not the case with HIPS.  It's such an original story with a fantastic plot that there's NO WAY I could ever forget about it!!  I hope that everything is okay with life at the moment.  I know how things happen to pop up at unexpected times so please know that I'll be waiting for the next chapter whenever you're ready to post it.  You're a brilliant writer and you capture Bella amazingly.  :)

 

xoxo



Author's Response:

Natsu2,

Thank you so much for your sweet note. It made my night. I just finished my piece for Smut Mondays, and I am ready and rarin' to start writing HIPS again. I hope to start putting chapters up regularly again.

Best,

limona

Reviewer: zinner (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 02:10 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

More story please?

 

 

Reviewer: LoriRae (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:07 AM · On: February 29, 2008

thanks for your response, i hope you have found your muse and will post soon. this story is wonderful and i look forward to seeing where it goes.

Lori

Reviewer: inlove22 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:51 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

update soon

Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 03:46 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This story is great!!! When is the next chapter?? :0)



Author's Response:

It will be a couple of weeks, but I am working on HIPS again.

Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:52 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

OK..this is definately the best fanfic I have read here or any other site.I just wish I hadnt found it until it was complete because now its going to be agony waiting for updates!PLEASE  write more soon.Dang,I wish I knew how to get myself emailed when you do update!



Author's Response:

You can add the story to your favorites and then go into options and make sure you have selected to receive emails when your favorites update... there you can also have it email you when people reply to your reviews. Or you can join fanfiction.net and add me to your alerts.

Glad you're enjoying the story so much. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:20 PM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008

HMM,so he is also Edward the Bastard who takes advantage of distressed,depressed,verly stressed,desperate young women?He couldnt just take a day off work and really talk to her?

Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:04 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008

Oh,Alice couldnt have arrived an hour laster.......sheesh!

Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:07 PM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008

oh come on,surely Bella is allowed to have a friend?I am not particularly liking rich,uptight Edward actually.I cant see him and Bella ever being a perfect match,you have your work cut out to make him so.At this point,if I were Bella,I think I would run away with Jacob and take my chances.Who,seriously,would want the snotty,pointless upper class society terribly important people in expensive brand clothing,crap when they could have a real life?

Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:17 PM · On: March 22, 2008

Geez,I thought he would be all annoyed she wasnt innocent little librarian Bella any more!But she is waxed,lol.

Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008

Oooh,Uptightward!This will be interesting!

Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:52 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Good so far!Keep it up.

Reviewer: literalova (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:37 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

this is really well written. I can't wait for a new chapter! :D

Reviewer: lilgoblin (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:05 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This is possibly my favorite story on this site. Its smart, sharp, and a ton of fun.  Please post the next chapter ;-)

Reviewer: SansLune (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:10 AM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008

I like your story, but I don't really get the logic of this:

'She was angry with me too, still angry about Tanya. That was ridiculous, because my doing anything with Tanya didn't damage Bella's reputation. She didn't have a reputation. Bella didn't technically exist'

If he kisses someone else, in front of everybody.. doesn't it damage HIS reputation aswell? On a charity gala, kissing someone when your suppossed to be engaged.. doesn't just make your finance look bad, it makes you look bad aswell!

Maybe it is just his logic..

Reviewer: Moonlight234 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 09:09 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Hey Limona, are you planning on finishing this? You really ought to it's such an amazing story. I hope everything is okay with you,and I don't mean to push you, I was just wondering.



Author's Response:

Yes, I am planning on finishing. :)

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