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Reviewer: mkd (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 03:30 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

i only noticed this story today and its awesome i wish i had seen it earlier

Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 07:10 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Awesome!!

Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 05:35 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

This chapter was written perfectly. Keep them coming

Reviewer: jumpandrun (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:49 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Found this story on the top ten here, but I was afraid to start it b/c of no updates since Feb.  I found it on FF.net and saw your note about updating soon...and I'm glad I gave it a chance!  Loved everything so far and I can't wait for another chapter.  :)

Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:30 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008

I loved this chapter i will tell you i am not a Jacob fan so i'm glad Alice walked in. I hope her and Edward can really get together by the time this story is over. Great Chapter :)

Reviewer: pastel (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:40 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Aw, I love that Edward and Bella are cuddling there--finally Bella raises the question out of the blue!

It was a nice chapter, just like every other chapter.  I'm eager to read more, so hopefully, you can update.  (:

Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 01:21 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This story is awesome! I Love the swists and the angle. Eward & Bella making out / lemons are my favorite! Please please update soon!

Reviewer: vamptramp16 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:04 AM · On: February 29, 2008

I really love this story.  I'm so sad they you have not updated in so long.  It has such great potential :(

Reviewer: princessamy1 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:48 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I want nothing more than for Bella and Edward to have a happy ending. It is driving me crazy trying to figure out if that is even possible. You have really sucked me with this story!!! I am dying for more!!!

Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008

wow, this Edward is such a cad!

Reviewer: Polunosht (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 02:53 PM · On: February 29, 2008

I love this story I've been reading it and re reading it since march haha I can hardly wait for an update =)...amazing I really want to know what happens!! Keep up the good work

Reviewer: mrs_cullen26 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 02:41 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I've read teh entire story straight through and I love it..... But, are they ever going to fall in love for real?????????

Reviewer: itsme (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 09:07 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This story is amazing!!! I just spent the last two days reading it nonstop. It's such an original take on Edward and Bellla's relationship.  I love how complicated everything is, and I'm dying to know how it all works out. I Can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: lalinda1236 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:28 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

OKAY I LIKE HAD DREAMS OF THIS STORY LAST NIGHT!!! please please please UPDATE SOON

Author's Response:

By June 9, there should be another chapter up.

Reviewer: Tbagpretty (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:38 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Please write more!!! I love this story and just read it for a second time!! Please update!! :)



Author's Response:

Update slated for June 8 or June 9 :)

Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:19 PM · On: February 29, 2008

This is a pretty amazing story. I just started reading this. When do you plan on continuing??? LOVE IT!!

:D Gretchen

email: holtzga at gmail dot com



Author's Response:

New chapter will go up June 8 or June 9. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: valmaldo75 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 11:01 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This story is amazing -- I am TOTALLY addicted -- even SM would love this story --  and like an addict I am eagerly waiting my next fix -- keep up the great writing



Author's Response:

thank you! The next chapter should go up June 8 or June 9.

Reviewer: Pebbels (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:40 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I just found out about this site and your story
and wow i read it in one breath
can't wait for the next chapture(s)
sooooo excited!!!!!
i'll be sure to read your other story....right now ;)
oeeh and got to give you lovin
for the stella artois (being belgian and all)
nice one :)

xXx



Author's Response:

Thanks, Pebbels! There is a teaser for the next chapter posted over on the forums in the story thread.

Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:12 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Are you still alive and kicking?  Beginning to have serious doubts!  Come back to us!



Author's Response:

I'm here! I posted a teaser on the forum last night. The next chapter is going up June 8 or June 9, I think.

Reviewer: fr33bird (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:37 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This story is great - so exciting and original, I love it :)

well done!

and this chapter end is just plain mean teasing ;-)  hope the next one is up soon!

x



Author's Response:

I'm working on the next chapter now... I hope to have it up before I leave for vacation on June 9. There is a teaser up on the forum thread for Hiding in Plain Sight.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Edwardspet (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:51 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I want to start by saying that this is an excellent story! There are so many possibilities. You have drawn me in to the characters without adding too much detail. I like this version Edward and Bella. I look forward to the June 9th update. Since I know that you actually read your reviews... I would like to ask - how often will you be updating after, of course, the June 9th update? 

I anxiously look forward to them!!

 

Reviewer: Edwardspet (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:51 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I want to start by saying that this is an excellent story! There are so many possibilities. You have drawn me in to the characters without adding too much detail. I like this version Edward and Bella. I look forward to the June 9th update. Since I know that you actually read your reviews... I would like to ask - how often will you be updating after, of course, the June 9th update? 

I anxiously look forward to them!!

 



Author's Response:

Ha. You're right. I do read every single review, even if I don't have time to reply to all of them.

As for the updates... I wish I could say I would update every week, but it will probably be every two weeks. For some reason I can't fathom, it is 10x easier to write early chapters of a story than it is to write later chapters. So much more consideration has to go into everything as I tidy up plot threads. There are only nine chapters left, and my goal is to finish before October so I can have some time to finish off Merger of Two Hearts before I start the story that branches off of Limits in November.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:58 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Just when I think I can predict where you're going next, you add a whole new layer that hooks me in even more. I just love what you've done with these characters & how easily everything flows. I'm so sorry to see that this was the last chapter and that you haven't posted in awhile. I'm hoping that everything is well with you and that there will be more to read in the future. It's a great story and I miss it already!! Thanks so much for sharing. Take care, Sue



Author's Response:

Sue,

Thanks so much for your kind words. The teaser goes up on the forum thread tonight at 9 Eastern. The chapter is slated to go up June 8, provided I can finish it in time... and I think I can :)

I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: mineFanatics (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:28 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Aww :)
HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE! :D

Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:29 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

when are you going to write the next bit?when are they going to relise they are in love?



Author's Response:

The next bit will go up by June 9; it is halfway written. I will post a teaser in a day or two over on the forum.

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