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Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:36 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Hi - I've only read the first chapter so far, but am totally hooked already. I really enjoy your writing style and the premise is very intriguing. I have my fingers crossed that you'll be adding to it again by the time I get to chapter 16. Thanks for posting your story!! :)

Reviewer: amybo15 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:13 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This story is too great not to finish! I just started reading it and I have to know what happens! Please update. Pretty pretty please??? Your writing is so addicting, I was at my computer every spare minute I had.



Author's Response:

I am working on the update and am writing regularly again. Update should go up by June 9. I will post a teaser sometime this week on the forum thread.

Reviewer: Blood donor (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:23 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Any chance of an update anytime soon?



Author's Response:

Yes... should go up by June 9.

Reviewer: ChoccyJoJo (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 05:02 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Oh so good!! I just found this story and read the whole thing before stopping to review. That in itself says, I like, I like!!! Please update before I tell the Volturi where to find their witness ;) xx



Author's Response:

Update should go up by June 9. Teaser will post to the forum thread later this week.

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 06:12 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

You realize that this is an obscenely horribly place to leave us right?

What will happen at the deposition??  The birthday party??  Will Alice have the baby before Jasper gets home??

PLEASE PLEASE PEASE POST AGAIN SOON!!!



Author's Response:

There is a lot left to happen in this story... I hope to post the next chapter by June 9. I am working on it right now, in fact.

Reviewer: lalinda1236 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 07:28 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

omg when is the next chapter coming?????

Author's Response:

I'm aiming to post by June 9.

Reviewer: bekanz (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 04:47 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Just found this story today, it's awesome! definitely one of the best I've read! The plots great, hope your having as much fun writing it as I've had reading it! I can't wait til the next chapter =)



Author's Response:

thank you! :)

Reviewer: DeeZ750 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:06 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

This story has kept me glued to it I cant wait to read more.



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: lalinda1236 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:07 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008

i'm IN LOVE with this story can't believe i skipped it so many times lol.. so glad im reading it..

Reviewer: lalinda1236 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:43 AM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2

Okay running to her room? come on that was a dumb thing to do...

Reviewer: lalinda1236 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008

i love this story so far aaaamazing

Reviewer: altrurn (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:06 AM · On: February 29, 2008

This is an unbelievable story, I've spent the last 2 days reading it.  Can't wait till u update!!!

Reviewer: McHannah (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:25 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I am sooooo in love with this story.

I hope you continue it soon, it is such good writing and an excellent story!!



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:35 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Ok Ok...it's been way to long!!Your driven me crazy, no really I just want you to write more of this incredibly amazing story!  I completely understand RL can get in the way of our funnsies, no rush really begging all the same!  I started reading back in Febrary and of course I have Been Waiting, so here I am right before I go to sleep to check my favs and see who has update and like always I thought of HIPS (love it!!).  I'm glad to see your in the process, I'm excited all over again.

Your story has sooo many ways to turn, but I know you will turn them all in the right direction!  All roasds lead to Rome right, as they said once...

Just wanted to remind you that we're still out here cheerin your next chapter and story on! 

Thanks So Much For Writing!



Author's Response:

It has been too long. I am writing right now. I hope to post the next chapter by June 9.

Thank you so much for the kind note :)

Reviewer: Chrissydobash78 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:01 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

when will you write more?  when?

Reviewer: Chrissydobash78 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 06:18 PM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008

emmet is being a douche.

Reviewer: zoegerava (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 05:25 PM · On: February 29, 2008

I'm really glad to hear you're back to writing. I understand that life happens, I just wanted to make sure the story hadn't been abandoned, because I am really enjoying it. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: nelln (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 02:58 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008

I now officially hate your story.  I hate all J/B.  I'm sure you have a reason for this that will be come more apparent in the upcoming chapters, but had I known there was gonna be J/B action I think I may have rethought reading this in the first place.

Reviewer: nelln (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:48 PM · On: February 29, 2008

hmmm....not sure I buy Edward just volunteering to take on someone from Witness Protection just because he feels sorry for her.  I'd believe it more if he had somehow met her once and the situation just haunted him or something.  But I really like the story so far...I know I'm late in the game, but I enjoyed your other story as well!

Reviewer: azure_horizon (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 08:46 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Aww man. I actually just about punched my face when I realised there wasn't another part yet! Lol.

 

I love this story, though I can't see how they can make it work after all of this. Even if she takes the Volturi down, there are plenty of other peripheral characters there to take HER down.

 

Love this. And I sooo can't wait for more :D



Author's Response:

You cracked me up on a grouchy morning. Thank you.

Reviewer: elfis (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 08:42 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I really really like this story :D Can't wait for u to update, pls do it soon :D

Reviewer: zinner (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:54 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

So do you plan to continue the story?  I'm hooked and need to read more.  You know Edward loves her, so when is he going to declare his love?  The days of research when Edward was working late.  He has hired private detectives to help Bella out from under the investigation - finding others who can testify on her behalf.  Am I close?

Karen



Author's Response:

Karen,

Yes, I plan to continue the story. I hope to start posting regularly again soon, and I working on the next chapter. Unfortunately, I can't comment on plot points... you'll have to read to find out. :)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: miraculoustragedy (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 12:14 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

ahh!

this story is absolutley amazing.

i just sat down and read the entire thing in a sitting. i can't wwait for more.

please update soon?

 

-M.



Author's Response:

M,

I always enjoy hearing from people who read it all at once. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

limona

Reviewer: Ceradee22 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 10:53 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I am addicted to this story!  I just spent a ridiculous amount of time today reading everything up to this point.  Please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens!

 

 

Reviewer: twilightedtwilighter747 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 08:52 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

what?! no NO!!!!!!!! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!  I really don't like waiting anyway lovin the story

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