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Reviewer: tricky (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:42 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Yeah, I am so excited you are updating this story.  This is one of the firs stories i got interested in here and I am so happy it's back!  This is a great chapter!

Reviewer: mens_rea_01 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:36 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Holy shit. It's 12:35 a.m. but how am I supposed to go to sleep after reading that?!?!

You didn't miss a beat! I'm so glad your back to the fandom!

P.S. I don't remember laughing aloud so many times with the other chapters! Unparrot? Crack me up!!

Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:36 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Yay, a new chapter!!!!!!! I was just thinking about re-reading the whole story since I knew you were going to be posting soon and I couldn't wait. Awesome job, as always! I didn't know how you could follow up to that wonderful scene at the gala (I love romantic Edward!), but you didn't disappoint, plus I love seeing the story progress. I'll definitely check out the Bellie Awards and Smut Monday posts. Many XOXOX's!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for checking out the Bellies and SM. And for following HIPS. :)

Reviewer: mrscullen17 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:35 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

so glad you're back on with this story! keep posting and we will read!!!

Reviewer: LilSkittle (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:35 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I cant wait to read what happens next

 

LY

 

LilSkittle xx

Reviewer: twilightlover90 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:35 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

dude i pretty much crapped my pants when i saw that twilighted had emailed me about you updating and let me tell you this chapter was awesome and i really hope that a new chapter is being writen as i speak because i really dont want to wait almost 4 months for a new chapter but hey if it comes to that oh well because this story is my favorite story on this site. please continue the goodness



Author's Response:

it won't take 4 months. thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: addicted2smut (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:34 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I'm so glad you're writing this again! I've always thought this was such a great story and I was so sad when you stopped updating. I hope everything's ok in your world. I loved the chapter, although I have to say since it's been so long and I've read so much other fanfic it was hard jumping back in. The only real "thought" I have is that is seemed like Sunday June 8th ended rather oddly. I felt like there was more to say there but you're the writer and I still love the story! Glad you're back!

Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:30 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Oh, so glad to see you update!  I've missed you.  This chapter was terrific.  I'm so happy to see him admit he has feelings for her.  Can't wait to see what happens next.

 

 

Reviewer: Tweemad (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:29 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Thanks for continuing on with the story, I've missed it!

Reviewer: Gina2000 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:27 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

YAY!!!  Welcome back!!

Thank goodness B&E didn't overthink the last part of this chapter.  But since you left us hanging  -- I fear something is going to stop their course this evening. 

I look foward to more.



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: Luv2readEdward (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:26 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I almost gave up on this story! I am so very hppy that you continued because I really love your plot and the twists of your characters. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:26 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

WOOHOOOOOOOOOOO FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: letmesign (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:26 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Oh, I am still reading, girl! You've got me hooked. It's about time they got back together...feels like forever, even though I know it really hasn't been. So glad you got an update out, and I sincerely hope the next one doesn't take as long, although I totally understand if it does! Cant' wait to see how this resolves.

I loved Bella's disguise thing, BTW. Hilarious ;-)

Reviewer: carolinacrc (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:24 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

you're back!!!!!!!!!

loved it. i love Edward's uncertainty, but i'm ready to love him diving headfirst without any reservations with something with Bella.

I love how Bella is facing shit, no matter how terrifying.

I love their swimming lessons, and I was sad that today was their last one.

I love that you updated:)



Author's Response:

I love your review. Thank you :)

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:23 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Excellent chapter.  I'm so glad you're back!  But mostly I'm glad that Edward is finally beginning to recognize his feelings for Bella.  (Sorry but Edward trumps you on my list of important people. ;)  Update soon, please?

Reviewer: ambar82 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:23 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I almost had a heat attack when I saw you had updated!! The wait was so worth it. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work. Hmm I wonder if Alice heard them???



Author's Response:

Alice has good ears. Bella has good lungs. But Edward has good walls.

Reviewer: Maggied86 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:23 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

how dare you cut that lemon short, lmao. I'm sooo glad you updated. What a nice surprise in my inbox. Anyway, it looks like the walls are coming down for Edward and Bella. Feelings are growing and  things are getting more intense. I'm so worried about Bella and I have a bad feeling that the Volturi already know she isn't dead. I hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: izzy214 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:23 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I was so happy to see this story updated! YOu've done a great job with the characters. I've always has a soft spot for Emmett and I have loved what you've done with him. A family man and a protector, you nailed him. I hope you continue with it, I am loving getting to know your Edward and Bella!



Author's Response:

I, too, love Emmett. Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: ibleedmaizeandblue (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:23 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I'm so happy to see that you are back to updating this wonderful story!

The chapter was excellent. I loved Edward. He continually chastised himself for his less than innocent thoughts concerning Bella but he couldn't stop them. He put forth so much effort to travel to Portland to be with Bella. The poor guy is in so deep... he couldn't even stay at the hotel, he had to wait outside the courthouse for her. I loved how affected he was by her telling him that he makes her happy. I can't imagine that it will be too long before they both lay all their emotional cards on the table.

The ending of the chapter was sweet, passionate, and a little unexpected. I'm curious to see how the morning after goes.

Oh! And the deposition... this was a pivotal event in the story. I wonder how the Volturi will progress from here... surely they search for her. I'm anxious to see how everything plays out.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review and telling me what you thought of the chapter. Your review made me smile. :)

Reviewer: eroticfan (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:21 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Well we haven't all gone away, us fans of this story! Great to get another chapter, and some UST-resolution to boot - yay! The swimming lessons have been a great way to keep us on the edge of our seats with unresolved tinglings. The Volturi creep me out - they do in the books as well, and your version's even worse of course. How can it be resolved? Just have to trust you and keep reading. I like the Edward of your story - quite a strong characterisation, but as ever, we love it when he loses control with Bella.  



Author's Response:

Thank you for following along with the story. So glad you're enjoying the characters and the situation. :)

Reviewer: bubbly90 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:21 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

This chapter was so worth the wait. I loved it. Im scared for Bella. This has an HEA right??? 

Reviewer: mico (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:18 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I am so super excited that you updated, and that Edward and Bella are finally getting some  :) its been long enough and since Alice is staying a week(?) I suspect there might be a repeat performance or two...and the affection towards each other will be natural at home even though I'm sure they will tell them selves its since Alice is there  :)

Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:16 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I'm so happy you're back and updating again! There was too much teasing at the end. I was just being hopeful and wishing for more ExB. But it was very sweet. I'm happy that Edward is starting to feel more for Bella. 

Reviewer: simpliimeh (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:15 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

oh wow yay i'm so happy you finally updated this limona ... hahah doing the happy dance right now i love this story and the chapter was great

wow i liked EPOV and seeing how much he really cares for Bella. There is lots of progress between edward and Bella's relationship here. But you know i'm really interested in this Occhi group and can't wait to read more about them.

Reviewer: ja6108 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:14 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I'm glad you are writing again. I am anxious to see where this story goes.

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