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Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:47 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I'm still reading.  I really enjoy your story and was excited to see the update.  Another great chapter!



Author's Response:

thank you! :)

Reviewer: lorij (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:46 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I am so happy to see an update!!! It was great cannot wait for another!

Reviewer: MrsDazzled (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:43 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I was so excited to see that you had updated!  Great chapter, I'm glad Edward was with Bella at the deposition.

Reviewer: sbr (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:38 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

This is a great read!!  Thanks for picking it back up!!!  Can't wait for the next update!!!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:28 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Great chapter. I'm so glad you updated. I think I squealed when I saw it. I'm glad Bella made her testimony and Edward went with her. EPOV was really good. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: fudgie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:26 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

OMG!!!...you can't just leave us hanging like that...get yer ass back here and update..LIKE NOW!!...I love this story, it's one of my fav's..

Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:23 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Still reading and still enjoying!!

Reviewer: angstsmoker (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:17 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

thanks for updating, i love this story

now that alice is staying with them i wonder if she'l find out...

 

Reviewer: Kirbs (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:17 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Still here, great to see a new chapter, and wow - what a chapter. Will Edward and Bella be a bit more open about their feelings?  How long will it take Alice to work out something is up? can't wait for more.

Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:17 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Whoo-hoo!  You're back!  I am so glad you updated this story--and what a great update!   Very much enjoyed the glimpse into the depth of Edward's feelings for Bella.  Love how he wants to do whatever he can to protect her, keep her safe, make her happy.  Loved that Bella told him simply that he makes her happy.  I think he showed her with his actions how much that statement meant to him and how he feels about her, but hopefully he'll be able to tell her soon how he truly feels about her. 

I'm a little worried about Edward's decision to join the Occhi.  Hopefully he'll mention this to Bella before he goes too far.  She deserves to know what's going on, what he's doing. 

 

Love this story!  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I wouldn't say that Edward has decided for sure... he's considering it seriously, though. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the chapter!

Thanks for the welcome back! :)

Reviewer: SleepyValentina (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:13 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I was so excited to see an update. It was well worth the wait.

Reviewer: enthralled (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:13 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

So happy you updated...

Reviewer: yesyov (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:12 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Oh Limona

I like many others have patiently awaited your update.

thank you for not disappointing us - it is a wonderful addition to this fabulous story.

I will patiently (well maybe not soooo patiently) await your next update.

 

Reviewer: FrostedCullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:11 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I'm still reading!

I was idly wondering about this story the other day. I had thought you'd forgotten it.

I am so glad that you haven't.

I can't wait to see what more is going to happen, Alice's baby, will bella stay with Edward? Will they confess to the lies told? Will everyone still accept them? Accept her? Will the wedding become real?

I hope you update again soon. I really enjoy reading your work.

 



Author's Response:

I can't answer your questions because they're plot related, but I can tell you thank you for taking the time to review and sticking with the story! :)

Reviewer: Dr Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:10 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Great chapter!!! It was a long wait, but totally worth it!

Reviewer: Racheous (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:08 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Definitely still reading. This was a really lovely chapter. I loved reading from Edward's perspective and him realising his growing affection (and lust) for Bella. Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:04 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Please tell me that you're going to update again soon! I love this story so much and I'm so glad that they're finally giving into each other! And the fact that they've waited so long just makes it that much more satisfying. I can't wait to read what happens next!

Reviewer: Rachael (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:03 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Sooooooo glad for an update!  Loved the chapter, and loved how you are moving it along.  I don't know if you plan on next chapter to be the same time frame only in Bella's POV, but I hope not.  I want to see the continuation of this night, and progression of their relationship going forward.

Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:58 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Thank you...thank you...thank you!!!!  So glad you updated!  It was worth the wait!  You definatly don't disappoint!  Glad your back!

Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:48 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I'm still here and reading.Great update. Glad  your back and this wonderful story as well. Looking forward to more.=)

Reviewer: Gaia (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:46 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

THank you for updating. I really enjoy reading this story. I love the way you have them slowly fall for each other. I like your Edward and Bella. I hope it works out for them.

Reviewer: Rogue (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:36 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Still reading!!  Was so happy to get the announcement for the new chapter!

Reviewer: RosieWilde (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:36 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Aw, Bella is so brave. To face the Volturi like that, being able to see them as she testified about them - I don't think I could do that. She must have been terrified and yet she did it anyway. I'm glad Edward could be there to support her, and they seem to be getting closer. Thank you for updating :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with me :)

Reviewer: TwilightAtDawn (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:33 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

love it

Reviewer: beausoir (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:33 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

OMG!  So glad you are back.  I have been checking regularly, and what a surprise!  Love this story so much, glad to know you plan to finish. 

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